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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
Hey ...
Great update ...
Loved it to core ...
I was enjoying so much while reading ...
Waiting to read more ...
Update soon ...

Thx dear..

Nyc , tht u enjyed a part..

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
this Ariya world is totally different from other...

pandit ji to soch raha hoga ye mein kaha fas gaya...sach mein rathore aur arjun namkarn hi karva rahe hai na mujhe to laga ki kisiki supari li hai...

dear this is really so funny wo gift wala aur food tasting wala part read kane ke baad to i just can't stop my laugh...awesome update ...typical ETF family...

Ys dear.. mai to update karte karte hi scene imagine kar rhi thi... 😆😆😆 bechjare Pandti ji😆😆😆

In Giftwala scene i only imagine Riya's shocked face... 😆😆😆

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dipteapie12

@dipteapie12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

OMG...so beautifully written...😛 loved d concept... awesome...really good...when i was reading through..i could get d slides of scenes in front of my eyes...elaborately described.. u have maintained d intrest throughout for d readers... really...waaaw...😊😊😊
...update soon...i am eagerly looking 4 d next part...

Edited by dipteapie12 - 13 years ago

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dipteapie12

@dipteapie12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

hiii...when r u gonna update the next part dear.??😭😭😭😕.. i am waiting to read it ... reply ..😊

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: dipteapie12
hiii...when r u gonna update the next part dear.??😭😭😭😕.. i am waiting to read it ... reply ..😊

I really dn't knw , im update tod r nt..

It depend upon Tod's Epi..

Cn't wait for tod's Epi..

Sry dear , i hpe u cn understand😊

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

wow

gr8 update

arjun ne surprise spoil kar diya

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poojdc87

@poojdc87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Loved the update! Rathod and Arjun are so cute together!! I love all their scenes!! :) I couldn't see the pic for some reason, but I'm sure it's nice. That scene with the sales girl was funny esp. with Rathod saying if he was young he would sit in it all the time 😉 hahahaha

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Riya : (Rolled her eyes on bth of thm & yelled ) Kya??????????? Ariya ka Naam karan Sanskar???? Vo bhi iss Sunday????????? Kisne tay kiya ye??????

Arjun & Rathod nw look @ eachother , thy dn't know wht to say. thy feel like thy stand in front of thr headmistress & she give thm punishment for nt completing thr homewrk. Rathod is abt to say sumthing bt Arjun ans Riya ," Vo sab Shree , Chotu ka dimaag hai , hum dono ne jyada kuch nahi kiya... ham bas shooping kar rahe the aur Pandit ji mile bas , ( & tug Rathod by his elbow , Rathod immedatly understands ) ha ha Riya ye sahi kah raha hai ...

after somtime Riya calm down . And ask bth of thm , "Kya kya taiyyari ki hai tum sab ne?"

Arjun & Rathod give her details. Riya seems happy after seeing tht. Nw bth felt relived. Suddenely Rathod's cell rings , he ans d phn , it is Shree who ask him , is thr wrk complete , whr r thy nw. Rathod tell thm to come Arjun's home.

After phn Rathod murmed to himself , " Aa jaao aa jaao ab bhukhi Shreni ke aage jane ke liye tum hi bache ho.."

Riya carefully look @ all shopping & after seeing each thing she is very astonished how bth men , who cn't face each other , did ths all for thr beloved one. Ariya nw awke , Riya goes to her room & pick up her daughter in her arms, comes outside. As soon as she see her Mamu she extended her hand for him , Rathod happily take her in his arms.

Rathod talking to her : Hey , my sweet girl , aap ko pta hai aaj kya hua , ek Sher Sherni ke saamne Bheegi Billi ban gaya. Lagta hai Sher ab sher nahi raha , Joru ka Gulam ban chuka hai. ( And he look @ Arjun & wink on him.)

Arjun : Sameer mai aaj tujhe nahi choudga ( & goes to near Rathod )

Ariya sees ths & immedatly started to call Riya by her baballing . " Maaa , mmmaaa " . Arjun step aback & look @ Ariya , " Nahi nahi mai kuch nahi kar raha , aap ke Mamu ko , mai to bas majak kar raha tha. ."

Arjun : ( Look @ Ariya wit fake anger ) Tum dono Maa -Beti ek hi jaisi ho , vo apne bhai ke khilaaf kuch sun nahi sakti , aur tum apne mamu ke khilaaf kuch karne nahi deti. ( Wit tht words Ariya immedatly buried her face into her Mamu's neck & hold him tight wit her tiny fingers. Rathod smile to Arjun who also starting smile after seen his own daughter antics. He knows tht after Arjun & Riya , she close to Rathod. Somtimes whn Arjun & Riya scold her for her naughtyness , she always look @ her Mamu who save her.

Whn somtime whn Rathod plays wit Ariya , r take care her any outsider think tht he is Ariya's father.

Riya bring Coffee for bth of thm , Suddenely doorbell rings . Arjun open d door , Shree & Chotu came in wit lotz of bags. After seeing Riya thy try to hide thr bags , bt Riya inform thm , " Mujhe sab pta chal chuka hai Shree "

Shree look @ Rathod & Arjun , Rathod look @ Arjun. Shree & Chotu immedatly understands wht happened.

Arjun tld Riya to make Coffe for Chotu & Shree , Chotu request her , to bring sme snacks also. Riya goes into kitchen. And Shree , Chotu & Rathod comes closer to Arjun .

Shree & Chotu : Kya Sir sab surprise ka kabada kar diya aapne ...

Rathod : Ha mai chup tha , to tu chup nahi reh sakta tha ... kya jarurat thi bolene ki , bolo to bolo par kuch aur nahi bol sakte the tum...

Arjun to Rathod : Saale saheb kehena bada aasan hai , jab ghar mai khane ko nahi milta , bedroom se ban kiya jaata hai , jab itne bade ghar aise rehena padta hai ki hum akele hi yaha reh ho , tab samaz aata hai .

Aap ruk jaayie , sirf 2 mahino tak , baad mai dekhiye , ye hard glare apni biwi ko dekha dekhna , phir mujhe batana ki vo kya karti hai.

Rathod taken aback by Arjun's words , bt try to prptests , bt Shree bulrted out , " Rathod Sir kuch bhi nahi karnege , Us Mall mai dekha tha humne , Seema bhabhi unke liye shirt le rahi thi , vo colour to Rathod Sir ko bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai , tabhi bhi kuch nahi bole aur chup chaap se shirt le bhi liya. Aur to aur jab bhabhi ka phn aata hai , tab vaha se sirf bhabhi hi baat karti hai , Sir to sifr yaha se ha ha karte hai , kyu Chotu. "

Rathod nw murdeously glare @ Shree , " Ohh tum meri jasusi karte ho ofc mai ha... " Shree ran frm thr.

After 20 mins Riya bring Coffee & sme snacks to all. Riya tke Ariya frm Rathod so , he can enjy his snacks. Ariya dn't like to seat @ one place , so she start wiggling in Riya's arms , Riya tighten her hold on her daughter & goes to thr balcony .

Her while enjying Snacks Chotu inform his seniors abt parking ( couple wala ) incident .

Shree : Arjun Sir jab hamari Ariya bhi badi hogi to vo bhi kaise kaise kapde pehenegi , kaise kaise ladko se mile gi .

Arjun : ( shot up his head & look @ Shree ) Mai use chot kapde pehen ne hi nahi dunga , mai use pehe le warn karnga , no short skrits , no one piece dresss & etc..

Rathod : Ha Arjun sahi kaha tumne , hum hamesha uske saath rehenge .

Chotu : Ha Sir mai to uske clg ke bahar hi rehunga .

Shree : Sir uska boyfrnd bhi hum hi decided karene ge..

Arjun & Rathod : Boyfrnd ?????? forgot boyfrnd uska koi boyfrnd nahi hoga , Seedhi uske Shadi hogi , aur ladka bhi hum decide karnege .

Chotu : Sir , ham apni Ariya ke liya aisa ladka chune ge jo ghar jamai bankar rahe , taki Hamari bacchi hamari paas hi rahe.

All nodded on Chotu's suugesstion.

Riya listeing all thr plan & she cn't take it anymre & barked out , " Meri beti abhi sirf 4 mahino ke hai , 25 saal ki nahi , jo tum sab uske liye ladke dhud rahe ho . Uski Maa abhi jinda hai . mai khud decided karungi ki uske liye kya acha aur kya bura... "

Arjun : Par Riya ...

Riya : Maine keh diya so keh diya , agar aap samaz nahi paaye to phirse samjahyon...

(Tht Ariya bf scane i stole frm "Hey Baby" , sry guys , i luv tht scene , so i add it thr , hpe u alll dn't mind . I also modify scene according to my taste)