SS: Understanding the meaning of love... Prt 4 Pg6 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Intereating update

Short though

But loved it

Thank you dear for loving it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: arul01

oh man! riya took the wrong timing to wake up! shit! but at least there will be some confrontation and they can talk things out! hope so actually! how could riya be so careless... she was nearly kidnapped... thank god arjun was there! i can sense some big argument going to happen in the next update... please update soon! can't wait to read it!

she was emotionally weak and confused, hence the carelessness😭
N whether its a wrong or perfect timing for her waking up,lets wait and see😉
But definitely there's going to be a huge confrontation😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Part 4 and final:

Riya was slowly coming out of dizziness; she had a very bad headache and opened her eyes. For one moment she was much disorientated, she found herself in someone's bed in a room she has never seen before. Suddenly she remembered being attacked and chloroformed, and was very afraid of what may have happened. Thats when she saw Arjun standing afar looking at her with angry eyes. For one moment she felt secured if Arjun is here and but then the anger in Arjun made her afraid again. She tried to speak up and enquired about how she came here.

Arjun: bewakuf ladki, tumhe kisse ne kidnap karne ki koshish ki, agar mein nahin hota to pata nahin tumara kya hota.

Hearing Arjun scold her like that and after the turmoils she has been going thru the last few hours, Riya started to cry again and she couldn't control her tears anymore. Arjun was shocked and disturbed on seeing her like this, he started coming forward to comfort her, when he again saw Roshni's photo frame and stopped. He was angry again at his thoughts and the wish of comforting Riya. So instead of comforting her, he shouted at her even more for her stupidity, carelessness and told her she's not fit to be a cop...

Riya was completely shattered on hearing this, and the only thing she wanted right now was to disappear and run away somewhere where the pain would be less. She thus got up from the bed quickly and started to run towards the door, and once outside of the room she looked for the main door and rushed towards it.

Arjun had never felt so much guilt in his life than now seeing Riya like this, he was very ashamed of himself and decided to stop Riya from going out. Before Riya could open the main door, Arjun was at her back and stopped her. He turned her so that he could look in her eyes and started to apologise. However Riya was so disturbed and crying relentlessly that she didn't hear even one word of what Arjun was saying...

Arjun could see that Riya had become hysterical, crying and crying, and he didn't know how to stop her. So he just picked up in his arms and carried her back to his room, where he sat down with her sitting on his lap and her head on his shoulder and started to pat her on her back. He didn't say any word, but just held her till her tears stopped gradually after some time. He still didn't let her go, and neither Riya wanted to get out of his arms.

After what seemed like hours, Riya finally decided to look up at his face. When he looked at her swollen eyes, he felt so useless and such a big jerk for being the reason of her pain. He couldn't bear the pain which he was feeling anymore and without realising how and why, he bent his face downwards towards her and when he was only a few breaths away from her lips, looked in her eyes as if waiting for her consent, and after a few seconds started kissing her very lightly on her lips.

After a few minutes, he broke the kiss and asked her sorry for everything and said:

Please bear with me, i loved Roshni more than everything, and she was killed in front of me, it was as if something pierced my heart and i was only a living corpse till now only alive for revenge. But you make me feel human again, you make me wanna try again, you make me wanna live again... Riya i wont always be an easy person, sometimes i may even hurt you because of my past, but stil i'm asking you to give us a chance to be together...

Riya started crying again, this time out of joy, and Arjun said with a small smile: tum hamesha kyun roti rehti ho??? And decided the only way to stop her was to kiss her again.

THE END

Edited by haruhi26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Yayy! Me first.
Arre how come I did not come across this awesome SS.
I am feeling so bad yaar.
I loved the ending like hell.
Please write another story on Arhea!
It was just beatiful.
Read all the parts in one go.
Nice Update. 👏

-SHUCHI
Edited by SanchayitaM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was a nice way to end the story actually! loved the way arjun felt guilty and tried to calm riya down! the way he sat with her in his lap and pat her back to calm her down! totally nice! really loved it a lot! thank you for the wonderful update and also the PM!
Edited by arul01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
This was sooo cuteee

Loved it like anything

Gr8 update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
very sweet ending..i loved it..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wooow this so awesome yaar

can't explain my feelings to u but this is so good i love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Loved it...
Aww u ended it...:-(:-(:-(
Plz write more on them..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
the end nahiii abhi toh starting hai pls continue soon

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