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princess14

@princess14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was really really good...good luck on your exams and do write more

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Faisa

@Faayey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wooow that was just mind blowing...i loved it...

Arjun is just perfect in every way😉

Keep writing lovely Os's like this👏

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

read half part amazing yar keep it up

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Reading something that you write is always a pleasure. It was so good to read your OS after a long time. I could immediately sense the writer of WOWY and AYNIL.

You are an amazing writer, period! You get into the skin of the characters so well that your OS or your FF's characters don't just remain show-based characters. They absorb the show's characters and evolve their own. So the readers engage in your stories without knowing the show. 👍🏼

Precisely the reason why I loved this OS. I don't know the show, I don't know the characters. But while reading the OS, I could imagine Arjun and Ria in front of me. They were more MN (ours) to me than AR. But it worked on my mind as a reader. Arjun was khadoos...angry..but passionate.. and Ria was...well Ria! Hopelessly in love with Arjun and unaware of his feelings. She was very sure that a guy like him wouldn't fall in love with her. She was confused how he orders her around and takes care of her as if she was his property and he has some kind of right on her... and that is the very thing she loves about him. It hurts...not knowing what feelings he has for her. The medicine applying scene was beautiful... her tears.. his noticing her tears.. and the hurt... intense and beautiful.

And the last scene in the car where she asks him why do you care... and the need in her eyes to find out the answer from him... you wrote that part beautifully. And what better way of answering her question!... A passionate kiss to implant the truth in her heart that he loves her. 😳

It was beautiful.

Keep writing more.

Edited by ButterflyEffect - 13 years ago

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

This was outstanding. You write so amazing. Keep it up hun and write more:) Would love to read ur writings!:D

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow u expressed each n everything ...every emotion every pain every anger ...PERFECTLY...👏 this might just be an understatement for ur OS...loved it to the core...the passion n the emotions were so pure n real...i actually thought i was watching a movie... n my ARIYA ...even i can't get them out of my mind...they r one hot couple...n my latest obsession...
waiting for more work coming from ur side...n all the best for ur exams...😊

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Tia

@tes_v1

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Super stuff!

Loved the OS, loved Arjun's style and the final touch with his patent dialogue "samjhe ya samjaooun" had me grinning! :D

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Akku

@.FieryPhoenix.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Girl, u r effing awesome! I mean just mindblowing. What a beautiful piece of writing!

And BTW I too loveee MaYur. I have been a huge huge fan of MJHT. Hope to see more good stuff from your side!!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

that was awesome, loved it😊

Please do continue to write more, and update this one if possible😉

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: meghasingh
hey...first to comment... it was absolutely mesmerizing...

Thanks a lot. :)

xoxo

Originally posted by: Liza.
A M A Z I N G ! 👏
Love, love, looove it !
You're a really talented writer :)
Hope to read more by you on this forum .

Thank you, Liza! :)

xoxo

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
wow this is so amazing ...😉

this post must take in the show

just awesome , i just love it 😳

👏

Aw, so sweet of you to say that. Thank you. :)

xoxo

Originally posted by: Fiza28
omg i just loved it ... 10/10 damn good arjun ka gussa ...riya her pain her tug if war with how he treated her ...n the care n the romance that was hot loved it too goood im a fan of ur writing plzzz write moreee

Thanks a lot, sweety. I'm so glad you liked it. I would try my best to write more. :)

xoxo

Originally posted by: sweetdoc
i could go on and write an essay sepicting how beautiful it was...
so i think these smileys may reveal wat i feel👍🏼👏

lovvveeelllyyy

Thank you. :)

xoxo