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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sizzysehrish
its so lovelyy
just loved it al ottt
u r awesome writer

Thank you :)

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Originally posted by: sravz23
lovely do write more.

Thank you. Would try to write more. :)

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Originally posted by: Aukview
Very well written. Loved it! Hope you'll write more of these in this forum. :)

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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Originally posted by: sbp1971
I loved, loved your OS, fantastic, so emotional yet the passion was palpable. I couldn't take my eyes of the screen as I scrolled down. It left me with a smile at the last sentence.

I hope you plan to write more on them.

Thanks.

Thanks a lot, sweety! Your review left me with a smile too. :)

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Originally posted by: princess14
That was really really good...good luck on your exams and do write more

Thank you. :) Thanks for your wishes. I would try to write more, I promise. :)

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Originally posted by: Faayey
wooow that was just mind blowing...i loved it...
Arjun is just perfect in every way😉
Keep writing lovely Os's like this👏

Thanks a lot! i'm glad you liked it. :)

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Originally posted by: sherdilali
read half part amazing yar keep it up

Oh was it too long? Uh, I'm sorry about that. I like to write in bulk rather than in parts. Hope you had the time to read the whole of it. And thank you. :)

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ButterflyEffect
Reading something that you write is always a pleasure. Reading your comment is a pleasure too. :) It was so good to read your OS after a long time. I could immediately sense the writer of WOWY and AYNIL. That's good to hear, for this is my only piece of work after months!!

You are an amazing writer, period! You get into the skin of the characters so well that your OS or your FF's characters don't just remain show-based characters. They absorb the show's characters and evolve their own. So the readers engage in your stories without knowing the show. 👍🏼 Aw, thats a huge compliment. Thank you. :)

Precisely the reason why I loved this OS. I don't know the show, I don't know the characters. But while reading the OS, I could imagine Arjun and Ria in front of me. They were more MN (ours) to me than AR. But it worked on my mind as a reader. Arjun was khadoos...angry..but passionate.. and Ria was...well Ria! Hopelessly in love with Arjun and unaware of his feelings. She was very sure that a guy like him wouldn't fall in love with her. She was confused how he orders her around and takes care of her as if she was his property and he has some kind of right on her... and that is the very thing she loves about him. It hurts...not knowing what feelings he has for her. The medicine applying scene was beautiful... her tears.. his noticing her tears.. and the hurt... intense and beautiful. Ah, intensity, now isnt that what we both love? So yes, I look for intensity everywhere. I'm glad you could connect. :)

And the last scene in the car where she asks him why do you care... and the need in her eyes to find out the answer from him... you wrote that part beautifully. And what better way of answering her question!... A passionate kiss to implant the truth in her heart that he loves her. 😳

It was beautiful. Thank you. i've missed these reviews of yours. You butter me up good!!

Keep writing more. I would. :)

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
This was outstanding. You write so amazing. Keep it up hun and write more:) Would love to read ur writings!:D

Thanks a lot Kiran. I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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Originally posted by: mushiroxx
wow u expressed each n everything ...every emotion every pain every anger ...PERFECTLY...👏 this might just be an understatement for ur OS...loved it to the core...the passion n the emotions were so pure n real...i actually thought i was watching a movie... n my ARIYA ...even i can't get them out of my mind...they r one hot couple...n my latest obsession...
waiting for more work coming from ur side...n all the best for ur exams...😊

Aw, this review makes me smile like a dolt. I'm glad you could connect to it and that you liked it. Thanks for your wishes for my exams. they're over, for now!! And I would love to write more on this forum. :)

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Originally posted by: tes_v1
Super stuff!

Loved the OS, loved Arjun's style and the final touch with his patent dialogue "samjhe ya samjaooun" had me grinning! :D

Thanks a lot. :)

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Originally posted by: AlwaysLife19
Girl, u r effing awesome! I mean just mindblowing. What a beautiful piece of writing!
And BTW I too loveee MaYur. I have been a huge huge fan of MJHT. Hope to see more good stuff from your side!!

Oh, what do I see here? A Supernatural fan, more precisely, a Dean Winchester fan? 😃

Oh, a MayUr fan too? :))

Thanks a lot, hun! I'm glad you liked what I wrote. :)

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Originally posted by: haruhi26
that was awesome, loved it😊
Please do continue to write more, and update this one if possible😉

Thanks a lot. :) I dont know if I can continue this story. But if some idea crops up, I would. :) Thanks for reading. :)

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@Mrs.JamesBarne

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hi dear . It's so nice . Really you just rocked . Keep writing and keep rocking a lot and lot on ariya dear . Love u for this os .

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Mrs.Rane

@Mrs.Rane

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Loved it.. Especially the kiss... Wasn't expecting that... Hot one really ha... Characters were very nicely justified... I can totally imagine riya-atjun reacting this way.. Anyways, i was hopin 4 a second part.. U know, a mushy cute iffice romance .. Wid some tauting by rathore.. And shree chotu teasing riya... If possible plzz do so... Not any compulsion huh.. Best Of Luck!! For further works..
-Soniya