Ek tukda dhoop (Chapter 4, page 5) - Page 5

Originally posted by: flamingoAK

My girl!!!! Loved this chapter!! ❤️❤️ My heart legit broke for Veer seeing him like that 😭😭 our hero. 🥺

I love Vikram and Veer's relationship. You portray it so perfectly in your FF too.

I hope Veer's anger pours on Ranisa sometime soon (in your FF and in the show)

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!! AHHHHHH LOVE YOUUUUU❤️

Veer genuinely has my heart but sometimes I just wanna push him off a cliff 😡 and this brother relationship is probably my most fav one on ITV! I love how they always have each others back.

Im so excited for Veer to pour his anger out on Ranisa in the show!!!! IMMA MAKE MINE HAPPEN ASAPPPPP🤣

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Woahhhhhh!!!!! So many revelations in one chapter and ranisa coming in his room? It surely is some miracle as she never appears there but people of her choice appear to her.

All in all love the chapter!!!

Continue soon! ❤

I know right!!! I never see her go to anyone's room but I guess she needed to see Veer for something important 🤓. Thank you!!!! I shall do so!!!

Originally posted by: caller123

This is really great. ❤️💔I was missing your story.

I feel for Veer. I feel bad. He repents and this Veer is so nice.

awww KATE!!! 🤗I will try to be more consistent with this story!! Veer is an enigma. He has a the heart of a child but the brain of a 28 years old egoistic man! SO INFURIATING!!!

Originally posted by: Yaso1.0

Wow another accident mystery and Veer's roots too. This is very interesting, loved it 😍

thank you thank you!!!! love mysteries 😆

Originally posted by: Rish27

We will see something very similar in the show too. Veer Wallowing in guilt; it's a sight to behold after all the pain he put us through. But why wait till monday when we have fanfiction? Thank you for writing this. Really liked it. ❤️

I think so too!! Veer will become more and more aware of the situation, will be very interesting to see how he approaches the situation!!

Thank you for liking it!!!❤️

Originally posted by: Sangana

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE FAHMIDA 👏 GOOD JOB 👍🏼 KEEP UPDATING 😉

thank you sangana!!! I will carry on soon hopefully!!

Well written Fahmida. I hope they show these emotions on the show too.