MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 5

Originally posted by: Kp26

Awww i loved it so much, i wish this could actually happen, its realistic yaar!❤😍😍 And ha i waited for ur update yesterday🥺.. god knows how much i came here just to check if there was a new update by you👉🏻👈🏻🤧

Aaaww! Thank you. 🤗 I'm glad you liked it dear!

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu has to stay in Shah house to take care of Kinjal

I did not like the way Anupama obliged to Vanraj instantly. I wish she had spoken and said, I need time to think. Then meet with Anuj and discuss options. So, here is an alternative....

She goes out and meets Anuj and she says – “Mujhe aap se baat karni hai, ghar chalte hai”🤔

They both go home and talk.

Anu: Bapuji, baa, aur Mr.shah sab chahte hai ki mein, kuch din ke liye waha shift ho jao,….kinjal ki dekh baal ke liye😲

Anuj: Disheartened. 🥺 Kyun? Ghar mein itne saare log hai, Mrs.Shah hai, baa hai, ye Kinjal ka dhyaan nahi rakh sakte ?

Anu: Sab hai waha pe, lekin kinjal mere saath bahut comfortable feel karti hai. Toh, mujhe waha jaan chahiye.😳

Anuj: Disappointed.💔 Theek hai! Tum waha jaana chahti ho toh, mein tumhe nahi rokoonga. Pur tum, roz subah se shaam tak kinjal ka khayal rak sakti ho, aur shaam ko wapas aa sakti ho, …. I mean..agar tumchaho toh😳

Anu: haan, aisa kar sakti hoon. Par aane jaanemein der lag hi jaati hai, upar se roz roz autorikshaw ka bhada…🤪

Anuj:😳🤔💔🥺

She gets up to leave, but remembers to tell him –

“aur haan, dahi fridge mein hai, agar aapko kabhi chahiye ho toh. ..” continues…. “mein owner ko bol doongi…” yada yada..

Anuj: tum thodi der aur ruk sakti ho yaha…..mere saath? Anyway tum kal chali jaaogi😭

Anu: Melts away seeing him plead and she agrees.😳

They chat for a while and decide to watch TV. After a while, he notices that she has drifted off to sleep. He turns the TV off, inserts a cushion to support her neck and tucks in a blanket for her.❤️🤗

Following morning, she wakes up to the aroma of tea brewing and props up on the sofa with a startle. She sees him walk towards her with a tray bringing tea, biscuits, and toast for her.❤️

Gratitude, joy, and love erupts as tears welling up her eyes. 😳 She manages to mumble… “mein …. Aap… mein yahi pe… sui suri…. Aankh lag gayi.. “🤔

Anuj: sets the tray on the table and says “koi baat nahi Anu! Mein itna toh kar sakta hoon, kar sakta hoon na tumhare liye..?” and flicks his eyebrow.😳

Anu: Nods in excitement. And manages to ask “meine waha jaane ka phaisal liya…. Aap ko bura laga..?”😒

Anuj: bura toh laga. Par mein unn mein se nahi hoon jo …..

Anu: places her hands on his lips to stop him from continuing to talk.....

Anuj: Holds her hands and continues to say “ itne saal tumhare bina rehna seekh liya tha, kuch aur din hi sahi… “🤔

Tumhare bina bhi, har roz suraj niklega, aise hi chai banegi, khana banega, tumhare bina bhi zindagi chalti rahegi…. pur kya woh zindagi hogi?***🤗❤️

Anu: Lets the tears that are struggling to break free roll down her cheeks, frees her hands from his and runs her hands on his stubble. Tip toes to reach him and plants a peck on his cheek.😳❤️

Anuj: Chuckles and teasingly asks her…. “Anu! tum kitne dino ke liye jaa rahi ho? ”

Anu: yahi kuch 6-7 din, usske baad …. (he cuts her off)

Anuj: matlab! 7 din ke liye ek kiss se kaam chalana padega? Not fair! and shows his other cheek 😉😳

Anu: 😳😳🤗❤️

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*** - not my orignal line, remembered it seeing in an ad.

Ye aapki anu mast hai.. Ek dum sorted..😆

Bhada...🤣.. Mai roz yahi sochti huu inka bhada kon deta hoga..🤪aap humesha apna touch daal hii dete hai..😆

Anuj.. Cutie pie..😚

Aur vo kiss...😋❤

Loved it di..❤

Thank you for the tag...❤

Scene: Anu is making gujjiyas in shah house kitchen. Anuj walks in and asks her why she is in the kitchen while the rest of the family is celebrating.

Here is an alternative, right from la la land!😳😳

He walks into the kitchen behind her clasping his hands around her waist.🤗 She is startled, turns around to face him, he looks disappointed.😔 She reacts with a questioning look. He lets go of her and turns off the flame. She stands wondering what he is doing.

Folding his arms across his chest, he asks her “ meri Anu, kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai?” (don’t recall what else he said)

Anu: Feels awkward not knowing what to say – “Mujhe aise kaam karna bahut achcha lagta hai. Khaana pakana, ghar ka kaam…. “☺️

Anuj: cuts her off abruptly and says “khaana pakana achchi baat hai, lekin Shah parivaar tumhe naukrani ki tarah treat kare,ye galat baat hai”😡

Yeh, baat mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga ….ke sab waha thyohaar manaa rahe hai aur tum yahaa…. “ is now very angry.😈😈

Anu: Jaane dijiye ne….😳

Ye lijiye, gujiya taste karke bataiye… ke..😛

Anuj: Aise akise jaane doo? Mujhe kuch nahi taste karna..😡

Anu: arey, aap itni si baat pe gussa..

Anuj: 😳😈.

Anu: Reaches out and holds his hands - Koi mujhe kaise bhi treat kare, mujhe farak nahi padtha. aap mujh pe aise haq jatate hai, itna pyaar karte hai,… yahi mereliye kaafi hai,…. ❤️And plants a kiss on his hands.😉

Anuj: turns his face away expressing his disappointment.😔

Anu: smiles at him, tip toes and plants a kiss on his cheeks.😳 Ab shaant ho jayiye……😳

Anuj: Naughtily hides his smile and acts as if he is still mad at her and pouts

Anu: Comes close to face him, stares in his eyes, sees her own reflection and comes further close and kisses his lips.😳❤️

Anuj: Looks at her and smiles , still pouting

Anu: Bahar chale, thyohaar manane?😲

Anuj: Aise kaise… hum 4 din se mile nahi,… thodi der mere paas… he holds her arms and closes her in his grasp.🤗❤️

Anu: koi dekh lega…😲

Anuj: dekhne do. Hum aisa kya galat kar rahe hai? Mein apni hone wali biwi se pyaar kar raha hoon…❤️❤️❤️

Anu: Baa dekhenge toh bahut badi museebat mein phas jaaongi… chodiye… trying to free herself from him😳😲

Anuj: Tightens his grip around her…. Tabi chodoonga jab tum mujhse waada karogi..🤗

Anu: kaisa waada?🤔

Anuj: Yahi ke, jab bhi shahs tumhe pareshaan kare, tum chup nahi rahogi, tum unka har baat nahi maanogi, Sabse important, tum bhi thyohaar manaogi, sabki tarah enjoy karogi.❤️

Anu: accha baba, phir se aaise nahi hone doongi…Promise!😊. Ab toh chodiye..😳😳

Anuj: aise kaise chode doo? agar tumhe nahi pata, toh jaan lo ki promise ko aise seal karte hai...... Presses his lips against hers😉😳😳

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How many such scenes have we seen in movies/soaps etc? Why cant we get something like this ( without the kiss, ofcourse)?

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu is making gujjiyas in shah house kitchen. Anuj walks in and asks her why she is in the kitchen while the rest of the family is celebrating.

Here is an alternative, right from la la land!😳😳

He walks into the kitchen behind her clasping his hands around her waist.🤗 She is startled, turns around to face him, he looks disappointed.😔 She reacts with a questioning look. He lets go of her and turns off the flame. She stands wondering what he is doing.

Folding his arms across his chest, he asks her “ meri Anu, kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai?” (don’t recall what else he said)

Anu: Feels awkward not knowing what to say – “Mujhe aise kaam karna bahut achcha lagta hai. Khaana pakana, ghar ka kaam…. “☺️

Anuj: cuts her off abruptly and says “khaana pakana achchi baat hai, lekin Shah parivaar tumhe naukrani ki tarah treat kare,ye galat baat hai”😡

Yeh, baat mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga ….ke sab waha thyohaar manaa rahe hai aur tum yahaa…. “ is now very angry.😈😈

Anu: Jaane dijiye ne….😳

Ye lijiye, gujiya taste karke bataiye… ke..😛

Anuj: Aise akise jaane doo? Mujhe kuch nahi taste karna..😡

Anu: arey, aap itni si baat pe gussa..

Anuj: 😳😈.

Anu: Reaches out and holds his hands - Koi mujhe kaise bhi treat kare, mujhe farak nahi padtha. aap mujh pe aise haq jatate hai, itna pyaar karte hai,… yahi mereliye kaafi hai,…. ❤️And plants a kiss on his hands.😉

Anuj: turns his face away expressing his disappointment.😔

Anu: smiles at him, tip toes and plants a kiss on his cheeks.😳 Ab shaant ho jayiye……😳

Anuj: Naughtily hides his smile and acts as if he is still mad at her and pouts

Anu: Comes close to face him, stares in his eyes, sees her own reflection and comes further close and kisses his lips.😳❤️

Anuj: Looks at her and smiles , still pouting

Anu: Bahar chale, thyohaar manane?😲

Anuj: Aise kaise… hum 4 din se mile nahi,… thodi der mere paas… he holds her arms and closes her in his grasp.🤗❤️

Anu: koi dekh lega…😲

Anuj: dekhne do. Hum aisa kya galat kar rahe hai? Mein apni hone wali biwi se pyaar kar raha hoon…❤️❤️❤️

Anu: Baa dekhenge toh bahut badi museebat mein phas jaaongi… chodiye… trying to free herself from him😳😲

Anuj: Tightens his grip around her…. Tabi chodoonga jab tum mujhse waada karogi..🤗

Anu: kaisa waada?🤔

Anuj: Yahi ke, jab bhi shahs tumhe pareshaan kare, tum chup nahi rahogi, tum unka har baat nahi maanogi, Sabse important, tum bhi thyohaar manaogi, sabki tarah enjoy karogi.❤️

Anu: accha baba, phir se aaise nahi hone doongi…Promise!😊. Ab toh chodiye..😳😳

Anuj: aise kaise chode doo? agar tumhe nahi pata, toh jaan lo ki promise ko aise seal karte hai...... Presses his lips against hers😉😳😳

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How many such scenes have we seen in movies/soaps etc? Why cant we get something like this ( without the kiss, ofcourse)?

Smitha pyaar bs pyaar 🥰🥰🥰❤️

Lovely. I wish these doofuses are shown to be thoda toh human. Yeh devi devta hazam nahi ho rahe ab.

Damnn! I imagined the start to be sameee!🤌🏻🤯 He coming from back and holding her waist, like seriously omg!❤❤🙆🏻‍♀️🙈 Why it was not shownn!!😭😭😭 But yaar this was too cute, the kiss n naraz hona🙉🙌🏻😍.. i wish i had a bf somewhat like anuj kapadia n mai uski narazgi aise hatati🙃🥲

Btw thankyou sm for the tag!😚 was waiting since morning!:::

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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Exactly aisa hi hona chahiye tha....they can remove kiss if that is too much but kya yaar they didn't even touch....

Lovely scenario Smitha.

As much as we are disappointed with the romance aspect but this scene still managed to give me hot red face and welled up eyes...

👒 off to the actors.

This is do beautiful dear

Maja aa gaya padhkar....

Beautiful... ye na chup chap Bhavna ko DM kar do.. thodi akal aayegi use aur hume kuch interesting show main dikh jayega..

Lovely take ❤️