MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 36

It was lovely. Chery on cake was kiss. I know we wont get anything even physically close to a kiss but hand holding, hug, those small mannerisms of couple etc can be shown but what we get every time is bhashan on bechari dukhiyari aurat. I mean she can save bhashan for shahs.

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anuj plans to take Anu out for picking their wedding ring.

A beautiful evening was ruined with meaningless sermon on middle class women. Although, I bet all middle class women are doing just fine than how it is forced to believe in this show.

Here is an alternative from la la land….😳

Anuj arrives, sees Kinjal has come out to see them off. He thanks her and holds Anu’s hands, and they both get into the taxi.

She is seen sitting at the edge of the seat looking nervous

Anuj: Anu, uncomfortable lag raha hai? aaram se baitho…😊

Anu: merely nods… but still looks uneasy😳

Anuj: kya hua? Koi parishani hai? …opens his arms and says “come here” 🤗

Anu: She scoots closer, and rests her head on his shoulders and slowly begins to talk….

“itni raat ko mein kabhi baahar nahi gayi….. ajeeb lag raha hai.” …. Nuzzles her face deeper into his chest… “woh bhi aap ke saath”😳😳

Anuj: Closes his arms around her tightly… and simply smiles.😊 “I know!” looks down to meet her eyes and says – “ mujhe pata tha tumhe awkward lage ga… but I wanted you to select your ring”❤️❤️

Anu: surprised! “kya hum ring lene jaa rahe hai? woh bhi iss waqt?”😲🤔

Anuj: Haan, mere dosth ke dukaan hai, meine request kiya tha…. You know I didn’t want you to feel embarrassed when it is crowded..🤪

Anu: is touched by his concern… says “mere liye aap hi sab kuch hai, mera gehna toh mein ne chunn liya”😳😳

Anuj: Smiles and winks at her.😉😳

They reach the store, pick the ring, finish shopping, and step out of the store.

Anuj: "We still have an hour…" … looks around and sees an icecream vendor is about to close down for the day. He points towards it and says… “chalo!” and literally drags her😎

Anu: Sprints along with him balancing her steps…😲

Despite her fuss about eating ice cream in the wee hours of the night, they both end up having it. They stroll lazily and sit at a secluded spot.

Anu: "pata hai? ye sab mere liye bahut ajeeb hai. Mere pehle shaadi mein… " 😕 she pauses seeing him expressionless. 😳 She feels that she must make a concious effort to stop reiterating her past to him. So, she changes topic..

"itni mehngi diamond ring ki kya zaroorat thi?.... aap hi mere liye sabse keemti heera…. " and snakes her arms with his, scooting closer to snuggle beside him.❤️🤗

Anuj: haan, Anu! Mujhe pata hai… mein keemti heera and all that you know! 🤔

jaanti ho, sabse precious,…keemti cheez kya hai?

Memories! .. yaadien. …

Ring ki keemat kuch lakhon ka hoga..par jab bhi tum isse dekhogi, tumhe aaj ka shaam yaad ayega.

This evening may not have been very romantic…..phir bhi… aaj se saalon baad bhi tumhe yaad ayega ki, hum aise saath baithe the…❤️❤️❤️

He sees that her eyes have welled up…

"Cheezon ka kya? Aaj rahega toh kal nahi…. par aise lamhon ko humse koi nahi cheen sakta…. Waqt bhi nahi." ❤️

Anu: shakes her head in agreement. Gets rid of her tears and says… "toh iss shaam ko aur yaadgaar banaye…" comes close to him, cups his face in her hands and claims his lips. 😳😳

Moments later, she pulls back…

Anuj: wiping his lips, says "icecream flavor se bhi meetha …."😳😉

Anu: ek baat boloon? Without waiting for his response…

she touches his cheeks and continues…."ye achcha hai… "

feels shy, looks down and says "par mujhe woh aap pehle jaisa… woh zyaada pasand.. "😳😳 and snuggles against his chest unable to meet his piercing gaze…

Anuj: wraps his arms around her tightening his grip and laughs… "achcha! woh kyun?"

Anu: manages to mouth words… "gudgudi hoti hai… 😳

She looks at him and sees that he is grinning mischievously …she pounds her fist against his arms and says...... "pata nahi.... bass pasand hai"😳😳😳

Anuj: Smiles at her impishness. “mujhe achcha lagta hai, jab tum apni mann ki baat kehti ho… “ lifts her face to meet her eyes, looks at her lips yearning to freeze the moment in time. ❤️

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All "things" around are precious because there are memories attached to it. We must move on and continue to make memories

Without the kiss, a simple scene along these lines is too much to ask?! 🤔 There are so many other alternate possbilities I could think of!!

She sees him in person in his new look, I wish she had complimented him. I wrote everything I really wanted to see in today's episode, even went ahead and imgined myself beside him 😉😳

Anyway, aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comment to let me know.

err! please dont ask why the vendor was open till midnight!

Hats off to you for making this dumb couple look sensible in your Stories👏

The best thing about your drabbles is that they are short and sweet(trust me that's what lazy people like me want😆😆 )

err!can I ask why the jewellery shop was open till midnight

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Shah family visiting Kapadias for a formal ritual without Anu.

An alternative small scene from la la land 😳 While the Shahs are all still on their way … AK calls Anu

She picks up the video call. … and is pleasantly surprised to see Anuj in maroon kurta, clean shaven, looking elegant. She is happy to see him excited.

Anu: aap kitne achche lag rahe hai?!😳

Anuj: Beams with joy.... "Thank you, Anu! " Runs his hands over his cheeks and ask “ye kaisa hai?”...😎

Anu: bohot bohot pyaara hai,😳❤️ …. par kyun…..and she feels shy.😳

Anuj: chuckles and says… “tumhe yaad hai? Jab hum udaipur gaye the… taxi mein… “ 🤗 ( reference to earlier drabble**)

Anu: moments later…. "Haan… yaad aaya" 😳

Anuj: batao, kaisa laga?😊

Anu: aapne mere liye ye kiya… bohot achcha hai…..

Anuj: sacch?! 😉

Anu: aap jo bhi pehnenge, jaisa bhi honge, mujhe hamesha pyyare lagte hai😳🤗

par aaj .... aisa lagta hai jaise chaand chamakne laga hai....😳😉

Anuj: happily flicks his eyebrows and asks "matlab… aaj tak pheeka tha? mujh mein chamak nahi thi? bolo!😲😕

Anu: aap bhi ne… sabka ulta matlab nikalna zaroori hai, kya?🤔

She sees her family walking in far behind him in the video..

"Aap peeche dekhiye…." 😊

Anuj: ulta toh tum kehti ho, jab tum mere samne ho, toh mein peeche kyun dekhu?

Anu: aarey! Bapuji, samar sab aa gaye, aap ke peeche dekhiye..!🤪

Anuj: "oh no!: makes a face 😕 and continues "I wanted you to see me first …chalo baad mein baat karenge.... I love you! " ❤️🤗 and throws a flying kiss.

Anu: Touches her phone screen as if to feel his face…😳😳

Call ends.....

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I wish someone had mentioned about his new look in a casual way. It would have been nice if Anu did, but I would have taken even if Mukku or Devika mentioned it.

Anyway.... I wrote this to fulfill my wish, by conveying what i wanted to my AK....😳

Let me know if you liked it. I had other drabble ideas as well on his new look, but chose to post this one

Did you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know...

**reference to my earlier drabble #21 (Check the 1st post index on this thread)

Originally posted by: shrizz

Hats off to you for making this dumb couple look sensible in your Stories👏

The best thing about your drabbles is that they are short and sweet(trust me that's what lazy people like me want😆😆 )

err!can I ask why the jewellery shop was open till midnight

Jewellery shop was open because it is Anuj's friend's, he had requested them specially for the sake of Anu.

Yeah, I too like short posts in general. I have "TLTR" syndrome (too long to read) due to attention span difficiency!

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

It was lovely. Chery on cake was kiss. I know we wont get anything even physically close to a kiss but hand holding, hug, those small mannerisms of couple etc can be shown but what we get every time is bhashan on bechari dukhiyari aurat. I mean she can save bhashan for shahs.

I am tired of the abhala naari bhashan at the drop of a hat. I mean, who isnt tired of it by now? Too much of anything is bad, IMO!

Casual intimacy is nothing explict at all. It can/must be depicted on TV.

Scene: It is the evening of Anu & Anuj’s engagement ceremony; he has come to fetch her from her room.

Here's nugget to let out my imagination run a tad bit wild, whipped up something small 😳

Anu is standing in front of the mirror, her eyes cast downwards. He walks in from behind and encloses his arms around her waist and rests his chin on her shoulders.❤️

Anuj: Basks in the lovely reflection of their image as acouple. Moments later… "Anu!"

Anu: Her eyes still cast downwards, .. "mm…." 😳

Anuj: "dekho na! aaj ye aaina bhi sharma raha hain hume dekh ke"😳❤️

Anu: "huh?" And looks up and meets his piercing gaze. Turns around, resting her palms on his chest

"Aap bahut handsome lag rahe hai…" ❤️

Anuj: "tumse zyaada toh nahi.."😉

Anu: In his eyes, she sees her own reflection. "mein aur bhi khoobsurat lagne lagti hoon jab aaine mein nahi, khud ko aapke aankhon mein dekhti hoon…"😳

Anuj: Raises his eyebrow in appreciation, "shikhayat hai mujhe tumhari aaine se, tum mujhse milne aati ho, usse milne ke baad…."

Then turns her around to face the mirror…. "aaj se hum ek doosre ke parchai hai… jo kabhi saath nahi chodthi…"❤️🤗

Brings his face close to hers, his cheeks brushing hers…

Anu: Turns around and runs her fingers over his cheeks…😳

Anuj: chuckles, closes his hands over hers and runs them along his cheeks "ye ...shaadi tak badh jayega… " opens his arms enticing her for an embrace.🤗🤗

Anu: realizing what he was directing to, her flushed cheeks had conveyed more than what she intended to.

She took cover in his chest while her arms tightened around him.

The drum of her heart beat for him and his for her; and at that moment their hearts soared to the sky free of all worries.❤️❤️

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The scene was beautiful and well executed. Although some minor tweaks to it could have elevated the scene couple of notches higher.

Those poetic lines in hindi can be found in any movie/fiction. Hindi is not my 1st language. The show's professional writers would proably do a better job in writing shayri. I was expecting something along those lines.

Anyway, let me know if you liked this small nugget.😳

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: It is the evening of Anu & Anuj’s engagement ceremony; he has come to fetch her from her room.

Here's nugget to let out my imagination run a tad bit wild, whipped up something small 😳

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Smitha.... it is pure love..

I like these lines so much

Anuj: Raises his eyebrow in appreciation, "shikhayat hai mujhe tumhari aaine se, tum mujhse milne aati ho, usse milne ke baad…."

Uffff… beautiful dear… small tweak could have notched it up higher… but this one is love 😘

Runs her hands on his cheeks 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Smithaaaaaa I’m going into my la la land 🤩🤩🤩