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Posted: 3 years ago

Absolutely amazing 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘


Loved it to bits and pieces ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️… word by word… dil khush kar diya yaar tu ne 🤗




As a viewer, we might get frustrated but Anu has lots of baggage and wish she opens up to Anuj to reduce the burden n pain🥺




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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh goodd i sooo fking loved this one, this is soo besttt than the actual happening🤌🏻💕😭


And no it won't come to an end ofc n see dkp's new post, its maan's wedding ritual happening so many maan scenes and many SmithaRam's update

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Posted: 3 years ago

WOW.. I WISH AISA KUCH SHOW ME HOJAYEE..

Anupama blocking baa😍😍😍

And yes Anuj ab uski duniya hai.. loved that line❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago


Thanks Smitha for these little moments. I feel maybe the lack of continuity and inconsistency in the show causes issues, where as the drabbles are a logical progression. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is makes so much sense than what we are served on the show❤️...why can't we get something like this on the show...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Its a lovely write-up.

I am bummed at how things are turning out in the show. Losing interest fast. You’re right, MaAn and AK are the only things keeping it afloat.

Anyway fanfictions are where we thrive and this one’s beautiful 😎😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu is in the Shah house, she has been hurled insults and cursed for announcing her marriage. Anuj is on his way home.

It is meaningless to see/hear the same dialogues, chars repeat the same mistakes over & over again. It is akin to beating a dead horse!

Here's an alternative that I came up with. Aisa hota toh ....?

Anu & Anuj have returned from Udaipur together (based on my prev drabble post). Anuj has dropped her off at shah house and returned to his apartment. After Anu’s verbal lashing to the family she is disappointed. She tells them that she is not setting foot in this place again where she is not valued.

She walks out, every step on her way out she is reminded of how each family member had insulted her, her own children that she gave birth to were embarrassed about her. She is distressed and keeps walking, then hires an auto.

Her phone rings, it is Anuj she begins talking and he figures that she is upset.

Anuj: Anu, maine aise hi phone kiya tha, waha sab theek hai?😳❤️

Anu: She starts pouring her heart out… goes on and on recounting everything to Anuj.

Anuj: is intently listening, while warming up left over food.He eats while still on the phone, and then settles down on the sofa.

After the long phone conversation, he tries to calm her down and says. …

Anuj: kaash mein tumhare saath hota. Mujhe yakeen hai ki tum akeli handle kar sakti ho, lekin iss waqt mujhe tumhare saath…

The door bell rings… he says " iss waqt koun ho sakta hai? …. Must be some kids playing a prank…”🤔

She hears the bell through the phone and tells him “ jaake dekhiye ne… “

He gets up and opens the door to find Anu is standing there!

He jumps with joy,🤗 but she is too upset to respond to his happiness and walks in with tears in her eyes.😒

She tosses her phone on the coffee table and settles on the sofa, holds her throbbing head.

Anuj brings her a glass of water and sits beside her.❤️

Anuj: eyes towards her forehead and asks “dard ho raha hai?”😲

Anu: bass thoda sa…🤔

Anuj: sar dabaa doon?❤️

Anu: nahi, isski koi zaroot nahi. and then she sets the glass on the table, comes close to him and rests her head on his chest.❤️

Anuj: opens his arms and put his hands on her shoulders and pulls her close; kisses her head that is resting on his chest.🤗❤️

He then begins to lightly massage her shoulders. Anu relaxes, feels as if the burden is vanishing in touch, she nuzzles heaving a sigh of relief.😳😳

Her phone rings – She sees that Baa is calling her. She is in no mood to talk and declines the call. After couple of mins, her phone rings again, it from the Shah house. She ignores the call again.😳🤓

She turns to Anuj and asks –

Anu: woh Samar ne bataya tha, aise phone ki ghanti na bhaje aisa koi… woh kya hai?

Anuj: you mean ringtone?🤓

Anu: nai, woh phone ki ghanti hi na bhaje, aisa kaise karte hai?🤔

Anuj: chuckles, takes her phone, and shows her how to mute her phone.😆

Anu: gets excited and asks…. Aur mujhe koi phone kare, toh mera number hi unko nahi lage… aisa kar sakte hai kya?😳

Anuj: laughs.. you mean block a number?

Anu: haan.. samar ne sikhaya tha… mein bhool gayi.. who kaise karte hai?☺️

Anuj: batao, tumhe kiska number block karna hai?

Anu: baa😊

Anuj: surprised… are you sure?

Anu: haan, bataiye ne…

Anuj: Anu, tum sacch mein baa ka number block karna chahti ho?🤔

Anu: haan, haan… nudges at his arms pushing him to show her…

Anuj: ye lo … ho gaya….

She takes her phone and tosses it back on the coffee table,goes back to resting on his chest.

Anuj: guesses that she has had enough from the Shahs, and wants her to sleep peacefully

Anu mein tumhare liye thakiya leke aata hoon.😳

Anu: nahi, mein yahi theek hoon.😉😳

Anuj: chuckles...okay baba and tightens his arms around her.

He asks her....ek taraf tumhara poora parivaar...aur doosri taraf mein akela. Tum un sabko chodkar...mere pass...ajeeb lag raha hai?🤗


Anu: clicks her tongue and says...."na!, bahut halka mehsoos ho raha hai"☺️

Saari duniya ke liye aap ek insaan hai, par mere liye aap hi saari duniya hai"❤️

She lifts her head to look at him.

Anuj: raises his eyebrows and begins to say... Accha! ...

Interrupting him, she closes her lips on his, slowly tightens her arms around him deepening the kiss❤️😉😳🤗


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It breaks my heart seeing Anuj's plight. Anu carries a lot of baggage. I wish they both talk about it.

Now the show is hanging by single thread - MaAn/AK. It wont take too long for this charm to wear off either. My drabble will also soon come to and end :(


Anyway, Aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comments to let me know😊



Aisa hota to serial super hit hota..TRP 5 ko touch karti.

Wow, she sweet and serene..thanks for this.


@ red : wish Anu understands this soon. One actually doesn't need the world, just that one person who means the world.


@ green : agree this is the last thin battered thread tying me to the serial, but it won't take long as you said.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu is in the Shah house, she has been hurled insults and cursed for announcing her marriage. Anuj is on his way home.

It is meaningless to see/hear the same dialogues, chars repeat the same mistakes over & over again. It is akin to beating a dead horse!

Here's an alternative that I came up with. Aisa hota toh ....?

Anu & Anuj have returned from Udaipur together (based on my prev drabble post). Anuj has dropped her off at shah house and returned to his apartment. After Anu’s verbal lashing to the family she is disappointed. She tells them that she is not setting foot in this place again where she is not valued.

She walks out, every step on her way out she is reminded of how each family member had insulted her, her own children that she gave birth to were embarrassed about her. She is distressed and keeps walking, then hires an auto.

Her phone rings, it is Anuj she begins talking and he figures that she is upset.

Anuj: Anu, maine aise hi phone kiya tha, waha sab theek hai?😳❤️

Anu: She starts pouring her heart out… goes on and on recounting everything to Anuj.

Anuj: is intently listening, while warming up left over food.He eats while still on the phone, and then settles down on the sofa.

After the long phone conversation, he tries to calm her down and says. …

Anuj: kaash mein tumhare saath hota. Mujhe yakeen hai ki tum akeli handle kar sakti ho, lekin iss waqt mujhe tumhare saath…

The door bell rings… he says " iss waqt koun ho sakta hai? …. Must be some kids playing a prank…”🤔

She hears the bell through the phone and tells him “ jaake dekhiye ne… “

He gets up and opens the door to find Anu is standing there!

He jumps with joy,🤗 but she is too upset to respond to his happiness and walks in with tears in her eyes.😒

She tosses her phone on the coffee table and settles on the sofa, holds her throbbing head.

Anuj brings her a glass of water and sits beside her.❤️

Anuj: eyes towards her forehead and asks “dard ho raha hai?”😲

Anu: bass thoda sa…🤔

Anuj: sar dabaa doon?❤️

Anu: nahi, isski koi zaroot nahi. and then she sets the glass on the table, comes close to him and rests her head on his chest.❤️

Anuj: opens his arms and put his hands on her shoulders and pulls her close; kisses her head that is resting on his chest.🤗❤️

He then begins to lightly massage her shoulders. Anu relaxes, feels as if the burden is vanishing in touch, she nuzzles heaving a sigh of relief.😳😳

Her phone rings – She sees that Baa is calling her. She is in no mood to talk and declines the call. After couple of mins, her phone rings again, it from the Shah house. She ignores the call again.😳🤓

She turns to Anuj and asks –

Anu: woh Samar ne bataya tha, aise phone ki ghanti na bhaje aisa koi… woh kya hai?

Anuj: you mean ringtone?🤓

Anu: nai, woh phone ki ghanti hi na bhaje, aisa kaise karte hai?🤔

Anuj: chuckles, takes her phone, and shows her how to mute her phone.😆

Anu: gets excited and asks…. Aur mujhe koi phone kare, toh mera number hi unko nahi lage… aisa kar sakte hai kya?😳

Anuj: laughs.. you mean block a number?

Anu: haan.. samar ne sikhaya tha… mein bhool gayi.. who kaise karte hai?☺️

Anuj: batao, tumhe kiska number block karna hai?

Anu: baa😊

Anuj: surprised… are you sure?

Anu: haan, bataiye ne…

Anuj: Anu, tum sacch mein baa ka number block karna chahti ho?🤔

Anu: haan, haan… nudges at his arms pushing him to show her…

Anuj: ye lo … ho gaya….

She takes her phone and tosses it back on the coffee table,goes back to resting on his chest.

Anuj: guesses that she has had enough from the Shahs, and wants her to sleep peacefully

Anu mein tumhare liye thakiya leke aata hoon.😳

Anu: nahi, mein yahi theek hoon.😉😳

Anuj: chuckles...okay baba and tightens his arms around her.

He asks her....ek taraf tumhara poora parivaar...aur doosri taraf mein akela. Tum un sabko chodkar...mere pass...ajeeb lag raha hai?🤗


Anu: clicks her tongue and says...."na!, bahut halka mehsoos ho raha hai"☺️

Saari duniya ke liye aap ek insaan hai, par mere liye aap hi saari duniya hai"❤️

She lifts her head to look at him.

Anuj: raises his eyebrows and begins to say... Accha! ...

Interrupting him, she closes her lips on his, slowly tightens her arms around him deepening the kiss❤️😉😳🤗


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It breaks my heart seeing Anuj's plight. Anu carries a lot of baggage. I wish they both talk about it.

Now the show is hanging by single thread - MaAn/AK. It wont take too long for this charm to wear off either. My drabble will also soon come to and end :(


Anyway, Aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comments to let me know😊

Lovely Smitha...

Maine to visualize bhi kar liya dono ko Anuj ke apartment me..because I am sure they will not show any thing like that in the show.

Tumhara drabble kaise end hoga? Jab tak maan hai

Tab tak idea 💡 aate rahenge...makers goof up karte rahe ge romantic scenes me aur tum drabble continue rakh a.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aisa hi hona chahiye tha 💜💜 aur drabbles likhna mat chhodnaaaaaaa 🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: grace2021

Lovely Smitha...

Maine to visualize bhi kar liya dono ko Anuj ke apartment me..because I am sure they will not show any thing like that in the show.

Tumhara drabble kaise end hoga? Jab tak maan hai

Tab tak idea 💡 aate rahenge...makers goof up karte rahe ge romantic scenes me aur tum drabble continue rakh a.

Thank you! 🤗

It was just a passing thought that once the charm wears off, I will also have no motivation to write! 🤔 Let's see ...😊

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