MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 18

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Posted: 3 years ago

First of all i love that song. It fits exactly here.❤️

And even though you dont know tourist destinations in udaipur but you got it right, its all about palaces and lakes😆

And after confession such kind of scene was much needed instead of that boring mahasangam.

And so true what you said here that its not about what you like in other person or what you feel about him, its about how do you feel when you are with that person.

Loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aha i loved smm!!! Beautiful potrayed the feelings🤌🏻❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Km181



You didn't go off tangent at all..I too could not help myself for thinking and listening to this song..


while Anupama is about 90s song somehow I am more in love with such golden era songs.. lyrics are so meaningful... bet people for antakshari and everyone recalls old songs only, that's there magic.


They do spring to mind more easily, don’t they. Every song from Anand is a classic as is the movie :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: QueeN456

Smitha main honestly bol rhi hu.. Maine tera drabble nhi pdha..bcz Bohot lamba sab pdhne mujhe... Trust me mere exam hone de.. Main book ki trh... Sab tere os padhungi... N sab drabbles k sath ek bada lamba appreciation post krungi... Please dont mind..

No worries dear!❤️ I keep updating the 1st post index, so you can read them all at once when time permits . Thank you!🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Just happened to read last few shots! And they are mind-blowing! Esp the tourist spot Wala.


I hope they have one such discussion. It's a huge thing for Anuj to get married to someone he had worshiped all his life without an ounce of expectation. They should talk it all. I really want a glimpse of Anuj's life when he wasn't around Anu! How he kept loving her, in his words.


I know too much to ask.


But thanks for portraying this! Lovely!


Please do continue writing this lovely piece of art

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sooo much better than the actual show. Tere dimaag aur haathon ko chumma for writing such lovely moments.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Bol_do

Sooo much better than the actual show. Tere dimaag aur haathon ko chumma for writing such lovely moments.

Wow! Thank you 🤗 Not sure if I am worthy of so much of praise. Thank you, appreciate it.❤️



Thanks to everyone(many who I have forgotten to tag, sorry!) who read and take time to post your comments. Much appreciated. Love!❤️🤗

Edited by SmithaRam - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Thanks to everyone(many who I have forgotten to tag, sorry!) who read and take time to post your comments. Much appreciated. Love!❤️🤗

Some of you have even mentioned of coming out of the shell and started participating in this forum after reading this fiction. I am humbled! ❤️🤗

Edited by SmithaRam - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Scene: Anu is in the Shah house, she has been hurled insults and cursed for announcing her marriage. Anuj is on his way home.

It is meaningless to see/hear the same dialogues, chars repeat the same mistakes over & over again. It is akin to beating a dead horse!

Here's an alternative that I came up with. Aisa hota toh ....?

Anu & Anuj have returned from Udaipur together (based on my prev drabble post). Anuj has dropped her off at shah house and returned to his apartment. After Anu’s verbal lashing to the family she is disappointed. She tells them that she is not setting foot in this place again where she is not valued.

She walks out, every step on her way out she is reminded of how each family member had insulted her, her own children that she gave birth to were embarrassed about her. She is distressed and keeps walking, then hires an auto.

Her phone rings, it is Anuj she begins talking and he figures that she is upset.

Anuj: Anu, maine aise hi phone kiya tha, waha sab theek hai?😳❤️

Anu: She starts pouring her heart out… goes on and on recounting everything to Anuj.

Anuj: is intently listening, while warming up left over food.He eats while still on the phone, and then settles down on the sofa.

After the long phone conversation, he tries to calm her down and says. …

Anuj: kaash mein tumhare saath hota. Mujhe yakeen hai ki tum akeli handle kar sakti ho, lekin iss waqt mujhe tumhare saath…

The door bell rings… he says " iss waqt koun ho sakta hai? …. Must be some kids playing a prank…”🤔

She hears the bell through the phone and tells him “ jaake dekhiye ne… “

He gets up and opens the door to find Anu is standing there!

He jumps with joy,🤗 but she is too upset to respond to his happiness and walks in with tears in her eyes.😒

She tosses her phone on the coffee table and settles on the sofa, holds her throbbing head.

Anuj brings her a glass of water and sits beside her.❤️

Anuj: eyes towards her forehead and asks “dard ho raha hai?”😲

Anu: bass thoda sa…🤔

Anuj: sar dabaa doon?❤️

Anu: nahi, isski koi zaroot nahi. and then she sets the glass on the table, comes close to him and rests her head on his chest.❤️

Anuj: opens his arms and put his hands on her shoulders and pulls her close; kisses her head that is resting on his chest.🤗❤️

He then begins to lightly massage her shoulders. Anu relaxes, feels as if the burden is vanishing in touch, she nuzzles heaving a sigh of relief.😳😳

Her phone rings – She sees that Baa is calling her. She is in no mood to talk and declines the call. After couple of mins, her phone rings again, it from the Shah house. She ignores the call again.😳🤓

She turns to Anuj and asks –

Anu: woh Samar ne bataya tha, aise phone ki ghanti na bhaje aisa koi… woh kya hai?

Anuj: you mean ringtone?🤓

Anu: nai, woh phone ki ghanti hi na bhaje, aisa kaise karte hai?🤔

Anuj: chuckles, takes her phone, and shows her how to mute her phone.😆

Anu: gets excited and asks…. Aur mujhe koi phone kare, toh mera number hi unko nahi lage… aisa kar sakte hai kya?😳

Anuj: laughs.. you mean block a number?

Anu: haan.. samar ne sikhaya tha… mein bhool gayi.. who kaise karte hai?☺️

Anuj: batao, tumhe kiska number block karna hai?

Anu: baa😊

Anuj: surprised… are you sure?

Anu: haan, bataiye ne…

Anuj: Anu, tum sacch mein baa ka number block karna chahti ho?🤔

Anu: haan, haan… nudges at his arms pushing him to show her…

Anuj: ye lo … ho gaya….

She takes her phone and tosses it back on the coffee table,goes back to resting on his chest.

Anuj: guesses that she has had enough from the Shahs, and wants her to sleep peacefully

Anu mein tumhare liye thakiya leke aata hoon.😳

Anu: nahi, mein yahi theek hoon.😉😳

Anuj: chuckles...okay baba and tightens his arms around her.

He asks her....ek taraf tumhara poora parivaar...aur doosri taraf mein akela. Tum un sabko chodkar...mere pass...ajeeb lag raha hai?🤗


Anu: clicks her tongue and says...."na!, bahut halka mehsoos ho raha hai"☺️

Saari duniya ke liye aap ek insaan hai, par mere liye aap hi saari duniya hai"❤️

She lifts her head to look at him.

Anuj: raises his eyebrows and begins to say... Accha! ...

Interrupting him, she closes her lips on his, slowly tightens her arms around him deepening the kiss❤️😉😳🤗


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It breaks my heart seeing Anuj's plight. Anu carries a lot of baggage. I wish they both talk about it.

Now the show is hanging by single thread - MaAn/AK. It wont take too long for this charm to wear off either. My drabble will also soon come to and end :(


Anyway, Aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comments to let me know😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu is in the Shah house, she has been hurled insults and cursed for announcing her marriage. Anuj is on his way home.

It is meaningless to see/hear the same dialogues, chars repeat the same mistakes over & over again. It is akin to beating a dead horse!

Here's an alternative that I came up with. Aisa hota toh ....?

Anu & Anuj have returned from Udaipur together (based on my prev drabble post). Anuj has dropped her off at shah house and returned to his apartment. After Anu’s verbal lashing to the family she is disappointed. She tells them that she is not setting foot in this place again where she is not valued.

She walks out, every step on her way out she is reminded of how each family member had insulted her, her own children that she gave birth to were embarrassed about her. She is distressed and keeps walking, then hires an auto.

Her phone rings, it is Anuj she begins talking and he figures that she is upset.

Anuj: Anu, maine aise hi phone kiya tha, waha sab theek hai?😳❤️

Anu: She starts pouring her heart out… goes on and on recounting everything to Anuj.

Anuj: is intently listening, while warming up left over food.He eats while still on the phone, and then settles down on the sofa.

After the long phone conversation, he tries to calm her down and says. …

Anuj: kaash mein tumhare saath hota. Mujhe yakeen hai ki tum akeli handle kar sakti ho, lekin iss waqt mujhe tumhare saath…

The door bell rings… he says " iss waqt koun ho sakta hai? …. Must be some kids playing a prank…”🤔

She hears the bell through the phone and tells him “ jaake dekhiye ne… “

He gets up and opens the door to find Anu is standing there!

He jumps with joy,🤗 but she is too upset to respond to his happiness and walks in with tears in her eyes.😒

She tosses her phone on the coffee table and settles on the sofa, holds her throbbing head.

Anuj brings her a glass of water and sits beside her.❤️

Anuj: eyes towards her forehead and asks “dard ho raha hai?”😲

Anu: bass thoda sa…🤔

Anuj: sar dabaa doon?❤️

Anu: nahi, isski koi zaroot nahi. and then she sets the glass on the table, comes close to him and rests her head on his chest.❤️

Anuj: opens his arms and put his hands on her shoulders and pulls her close; kisses her head that is resting on his chest.🤗❤️

He then begins to lightly massage her shoulders. Anu relaxes, feels as if the burden is vanishing in touch, she nuzzles heaving a sigh of relief.😳😳

Her phone rings – She sees that Baa is calling her. She is in no mood to talk and declines the call. After couple of mins, her phone rings again, it from the Shah house. She ignores the call again.😳🤓

She turns to Anuj and asks –

Anu: woh Samar ne bataya tha, aise phone ki ghanti na bhaje aisa koi… woh kya hai?

Anuj: you mean ringtone?🤓

Anu: nai, woh phone ki ghanti hi na bhaje, aisa kaise karte hai?🤔

Anuj: chuckles, takes her phone, and shows her how to mute her phone.😆

Anu: gets excited and asks…. Aur mujhe koi phone kare, toh mera number hi unko nahi lage… aisa kar sakte hai kya?😳

Anuj: laughs.. you mean block a number?

Anu: haan.. samar ne sikhaya tha… mein bhool gayi.. who kaise karte hai?☺️

Anuj: batao, tumhe kiska number block karna hai?

Anu: baa😊

Anuj: surprised… are you sure?

Anu: haan, bataiye ne…

Anuj: Anu, tum sacch mein baa ka number block karna chahti ho?🤔

Anu: haan, haan… nudges at his arms pushing him to show her…

Anuj: ye lo … ho gaya….

She takes her phone and tosses it back on the coffee table,goes back to resting on his chest.

Anuj: guesses that she has had enough from the Shahs, and wants her to sleep peacefully

Anu mein tumhare liye thakiya leke aata hoon.😳

Anu: nahi, mein yahi theek hoon.😉😳

Anuj: chuckles...okay baba and tightens his arms around her.

He asks her....ek taraf tumhara poora parivaar...aur doosri taraf mein akela. Tum un sabko chodkar...mere pass...ajeeb lag raha hai?🤗


Anu: clicks her tongue and says...."na!, bahut halka mehsoos ho raha hai"☺️

Saari duniya ke liye aap ek insaan hai, par mere liye aap hi saari duniya hai"❤️

She lifts her head to look at him.

Anuj: raises his eyebrows and begins to say... Accha! ...

Interrupting him, she closes her lips on his, slowly tightens her arms around him deepening the kiss❤️😉😳🤗


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It breaks my heart seeing Anuj's plight. Anu carries a lot of baggage. I wish they both talk about it.

Now the show is hanging by single thread - MaAn/AK. It wont take too long for this charm to wear off either. My drabble will also soon come to and end :(


Anyway, Aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop in your comments to let me know😊

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