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Nicely written...now I am curious... please update next part soon... It's nice to read about this Angry Anuj, can't wait to see how he deals with this little devil.

Nice update

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Please update soon

🤩 WOW

The suspense in all the chapters are so interesting that you need to know what is next in the story.

How could you not write about the two people who have come special in India and international for last three months. The characters are so heaven that only good thing should happen to them. The two people have come so famous in the story, people over 40, 26 years apart but found each other some how but still human and also as individuals that they need to come together no matter what happens in the story MaAn.

The relationship is a good example for everyone that you are never to old to fall 🥰 or wish to be 🥰 by someone special.

I 🙇‍♂️ to your writing skill and the acknowledgement of how to put words down on paper to be understanding and easy to read and also keep the story flowing in the direction that you as a person wish to write.

I take my 🎩 of to you also a very big thank you for writing in English because my Hindi is not very good and I just could not get enough pleas4 continue soon

Originally posted by: Shumi945

Nice update

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Please update soon

Soon. I will try my best but not sure

Originally posted by: Km181

Nicely written...now I am curious... please update next part soon... It's nice to read about this Angry Anuj, can't wait to see how he deals with this little devil.

That part is not far and honestly even I loved writing angry Anuj 😊

Originally posted by: screen22

🤩 WOW

The suspense in all the chapters are so interesting that you need to know what is next in the story.

How could you not write about the two people who have come special in India and international for last three months. The characters are so heaven that only good thing should happen to them. The two people have come so famous in the story, people over 40, 26 years apart but found each other some how but still human and also as individuals that they need to come together no matter what happens in the story MaAn.

The relationship is a good example for everyone that you are never to old to fall 🥰 or wish to be 🥰 by someone special.

I 🙇‍♂️ to your writing skill and the acknowledgement of how to put words down on paper to be understanding and easy to read and also keep the story flowing in the direction that you as a person wish to write.

I take my 🎩 of to you also a very big thank you for writing in English because my Hindi is not very good and I just could not get enough pleas4 continue soon

Thank you so much for your appreciation. It mens so much and I am glad that yall are enjoying my story. Your whole analysis of the story is great and I hope I will be able to give better chaps in the future.🤗

Wow wonderful story please update soon

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Part 5

I found myself surrounded by complete darkness. It wasn't the thick night dark or an unpredictable threatening dark. It was just plain dark like a void of somekind and almost on instinct I kept walking, it was towards nothing in particular but I still felt the movement. I don't know for how long I walked or where exactly I reached but after some point I could feel the change in my surroundings. The black had reduced to a dark grey and it further went on to reduce to a ligher grey and as I kept moving I could make out a distinct white in the distance. Looking at it I felt a kind of euphoria that I couldn't explain and while moving ahead I didnt realise when my strides got larger and faster and finally there was a flash of blinding light. All of a sudden everything around me seemed palpable and the one that surpassed all was pain. If I could place it right then it was in the head region but I seemed not care because I knew there was something more pressing I had to deal with. As the senses started to kick in and I started to adjust to the materialsm of the things around me, I opened my eyes and the first thing that came out of my mouth was 'Anuj'

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I was working in my cabin on a Friday afternoon resembling the perfect definition of a workaholic. I had been concentrating more on work these days trying to escape reality but my thoughts time and again drifted to my love who was not here with me and I always pulled myself back with a lot of pain and longing. I still checked on her from time to time but all I could do was wait and to be honest this time I was getting impatient.

My chain of thoughts was broken by a knock on the door, it was Zain who had come to inform me about the arrival of someone. "He is here" he said with a smirk and I nodded with a snigger in response. I mentally prepared my self to derive all the pleasure I could from his deteriorating state. I am not usually vindictive or sadistic but this was surely a special case.

I heard another knock on the door a little while later and I didnt even bother to acknowledge the presence of the man in front of me. I just nodded to indicate that he could enter and he did. He violently walked towards me and his anger was hard to miss but I was enjoying it. All the while a leer never missed my face. When I finally looked up at the furious man I just smiled sweetly and asked him "What a surprise to see you here Mr.Shah, how may I assist you?"

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The past few days had been unbelievably tiring both mentally and physically. I couldnt make out just how had things turned around so bad all of a sudden and today was the last straw, I knew who did it, it was him again always taking away everthing that belonged to me. I wont let him go so easily, did he not learn his lesson. I'll have to show him who the real Vanraj Shah is.

All of a sudden few days back I received a proposal for selling the plot that I have been wanting to sell since ages. I was surprised but elated at the same time. I reviewed all the details and got an unexpected deal out of it so I readily agreed to it. The buyer wanted to view the plot once and I allowed him to but his engineers insisted that they dig it a little to verify the quality of soil. Since I wanted it sold at any cost, I permitted them to do all that they wanted but later they found a skeleton buried in the land. I never knew how and when a skeleton was buried in my land and since it was still in my name I had to do a few rounds of the police station. I was almost going to get locked up when the matter automatically settled. Someone came to own up that they had hasitly buried their dog there and forgot to inform the owner. He was fined and warned and I was in shock, I never realised that it was a dogs skeleton and not a man's. However, now my land had a spotty record and I knew it wont be sold that easily. I cursed my luck with no option left than to accept it.

The very next day of the fiasco was the day when a food critic was going to come to the cafe to write a review on it. He was well know in his profession and I had left no stone unturned to host his presence. He had inspected the entire cafe, the kitchen , the seating area, the hygiene, the raw materials etc. In the end he tasted few of our best dishes from the menu and interrogated the cistomers and staff about the same. I found him rather pleased when he left and I was mentally getting excited becuse if the review came out good then my cafe would reach a new height. His article was printed 2 days later in the local newspaper and what i read next almost made my eyes pop out of their sockets. He had titled the food as tasteless and non presentable and he gave a 2 star ranking to the maintenance of the place. The audacity of the man to print this crap when I did everything to please him, I fumed but yet again I cursed my luck. The working of the cafe drastically decreased after the review and I was terrified if I would be able to manage the family expenses. My ego would never let me ask from my children or relatives no matter how bad the state or how capable my children were.

After the review all the staff in my cafe had quit their job, the reason being they had all received a better and a more respectable job. On enquiring where and by whom I was treated to silence and they had all left without so much as a Sorry. Now I was completely left to depend on my savings and to top it off Rakhi had sent Toshu back to his house because she knew of the land and cafe and didn't want their dirt to reach her image. She had conveniently asked Toshu to return only after he was done cleaning up the mess and his family's records.

Today was the last straw as I was summoned to the police station. Apparently the goons I hired to hurt Anuj and Anupama were caught and they had opened their big fat mouth in front of the police. I couldnt make out how they were caught because as far as he knew neither Anuj nor Anupama had seen them then how the hell did they end up in jail. He was now stuck and he immediately called Mr. Malik for help, he was currently in California for a business meeting but he appoined his lawyer who had to bribe the police with a hefty amount for him to walk free of the matter. By now he was defamed in his society on all levels ranging from personal to professional and he had with extreme arrogance replied that one day he would become big and they would all bow in front of him. His family which for now only included Baa was his only support. When the police had come stating the charges against him, all the family members had permanently shifted to the flat Anuj had bought for them and Kavya had readied the divorce papers as if their marrige was a joke. It was only Baa and him left who were unanimously cursing Anuj and Anupama for their inability to be good humans.

I had pried some more and found out that Anuj had offered the job to my staff and they had wholeheartedly accepted it as if they didnt owe any loyalty to me. I had barged into Anuj's office with all accusations in mind and a frustrated temper from all the shit that had entered my life in the span of a week. It was when I finally entered his cabin was when I completely lost it because he was acting so sweet as if he didn't do anything and we were friends. His words Mr.Shah had a certain venom to it but I cared less. As I was about to hurl my rage at him, he had received a call from Samar. Looking at the caller ID my rage kept piling up but looking at Anuj, Samar had probably informed of something good because his smile wouldn't cease and the delight on his face was almost as if someone had blown life into him. Seeing him happy made me seethe with anger, how could this man be so happy when I was not, how could he be happy when I made attempts to snatch it away from him. How?

At that moment he hung up the phone and dashed out of his office without so much as giving me look or informing me before leaving let alone apologizing for leaving in the middle of a conversation. This had added fuel to my already infuriated state. I just sat there like a fool till someone asked me to wait in the lobby or reschedule my appointment untill he returned.

Who are you to tell me that I shouted.

I am Anuj's P.A and the person responsible in his absence, with that authority I can demand that you leave and I would suggest that you not return.

I will if I want to, no one gives me orders you get it and tell your sir that I wont leave him like that. He will answer me you get it I had screamed in tones ranging from high to higher. I sat in the lobby with my mind racing with all sorts of vindictive thoughts and one motive. Hurt #MaAn.

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Ok here goes. I really dont know how it is as it was rushed but I tried my best. Also do comment what you think of it. Constructive criticism is welcome. No proof reading has been done so forgive my mistakes and keep supporting.

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