Tumhi Dekho Na| MaAn | updated pt 2 pg 5/ 05.12 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Lovely start. Cool and Sweet Breeze after a Crude and Devastating storm at Tamasha house. Lovely start. Please continue.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Please continue. I've come here four times since morning to check for update!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

He blamed himself and was certain that ever since he had come into her life, Anu was made to face a whole lot of hostility and criticism for having a friend, a male friend, and one that harboured feelings for her for 26 long years.


Haan bhaii sab Teri wajah se hi ho raha hai...anupama k Life me problems,global warming, corruption,climate change sab ka zimedaar tu hi hai....ab bas population increase me bhi zara apna thora yogdaan de de😆😆😆


Anuj aap sorry kyu bol rahe hai ?”


Tera hi boyfriend hai na behen...tujh pe hi gaya hai bina galti k guilty feel karne k maamle me😆


Be it good or bad, she felt a sense of belonging with them and he appreciated her for being so annoyingly selfless.

Aur yaha hinz apni bharas nikaalte huye😆

Annoyingly selfless loll🤣🤣🤣


She knew she had to be bold with her words and actions to rid him of his guilt. She took a deep courageous breath and sussed if he was ready for what she was about to say and do


Dude my tharki mind expected you to write "she had to be bold with her action so she took a deep breath and proceeded to kiss him😆"

(Glad that you did not write so and chose to be an awesome writer instead of being my tharki freind)


Anuj aapko mai apna sabse accha dost maanti hoon” he smiled again “aur ab toh mai aapse,....” why did she stop now? what was she trying to say?


Bro after reading that first line I was like bhagwan utha lo mujhe but then I read the next line and I was like awwwwwwwww


Jolted by her soft touch and assuming their hands touched by mistake, he flinched and tried to pull his hand away in reflex but she held it firm enough to show her intent.


Anuj:0

Anu didi: 100

Anupama roked Anuj soked


He rushed out to open the door for her as usual and was tempted to offer her his hand but refrained from doing so thinking it would be too soon for him to take such advanced level liberties.


Haan he is absolutely right....it will be too soon to offer his hand for support....bas 26 saal hi to huye hai abhi pyaar karte huye kam se kam 100 saal to complete ho pehle🌝


bohot acchi lag rahi ho tum”

26 saal k pyaar me bas itna ich allowed hai....is mutual admiration club se hi kaam chalana hoga hum fans ko😆


aap bhi bohot acche lag rahe hai”

Wo humesha hi accha lagta hai behen kuch naya bata


haan...kal milte hai...” he replied plainly

Areee areee hello....aise kaise...abbi to raat baaki baat baaki (bold action bhi baaki)🤪



Anu ruko” he lifted her face and reached for the corner of his red shiny stole but changed his plan in a frienzied moment and took his lips close to her face instead and blew directly into her eyes.


And here you successfully kill me again🖤🖤🖤



Behen jaldi se update de de....mere ko itna maza aata hai na teri story par commentary pass karne me😳

Itna mast likhti hai tu jee karta hai phone se nikal k jhappi du tere ko😆😆

Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Teaser pg 1

Part 1: pg 2




Part 2:



Bewitched by her big, brown, lightly smudged, kohl lined eyes he forgot when he stopped blowing into them...Never before had he looked into them so deeply, they were beautiful and so willing to tell a story he yearned to listen.




Lost in the eyes that admired hers so endearingly, she gushed from within. Though misty, her eyes could see the passion in his so very clearly...So captivating was his lovestruck look that she didn’t care to blink.



Swept away in the moment of sheer bliss, with their senses running haywire, their breathing fell into perfect sync as they swayed together to the rhythm they had just composed for each other...



Oblivious to their impromptu proximity, they didnt realise how intimately close they had gotten in that moment, Anuj could wait another twenty six years if this was how he was to be be rewarded for his unrequited love and Anu had never felt love before if this is what love ifelt like, pure magic.



Immersed into each other, they came closer and joined their foreheads irresistibly to indulge and cherish their moment of unison when his phone rang putting an to their blissful tryst.



“Anuj!!!” she whispered at first and then shuddered profusely in the next to find herself in a compromising state.



“Anuj” she called his name again to bring him back to reality which had suddenly taken an awkward and unforgiving turn.



Irked by the call, Anuj was still reeling from his trance and momentarily failed to see the ghastly look that Anu wore before she turned around to face her back to him.



It took him quite a while of that moment to understand that she was disturbed when she started walking away without saying a word.



Perhaps she was shy, he thought and started to follow her. She heard his silent footsteps towards her and coldly said “Anuj aap abhi ghar jayiye, kal subah baat karenge”



Anuj was now getting worried and the guilt had made an instant return.

“Anu, I’m sorry” he said spontaneously...sorry? why? he wondered why he was apologising when they were both equally consented in that moment,



“Anuj, please!” she was stern in her tone this time as she turned around to face him making her displeasure obvious.



His eyes filled with guilt when he saw her flustered and regretful face and he couldn't figure why “Anu hua kya hai? maine kuch galat kiya? I’m really sorry” he apologised again hoping it was just a passing moment she would bounce back from but her look refused to change.



“ Anu, please mujhe tum ab dara rahi ho, batao kya hua? “ he grabbed her by the arm for a moment and retrieved it back immediately.



“Anuj, mai thik hoon...kuch nahi hua hai... bas shayad thak gayi hoon!” she replied in an upsetting monotone that drove him mad with remorse.



“kal office mein milte hai?” she said trying to end the bothering conversation and started walking away leaving him perturbed and sinful.



Wishing she didn't have to be so cold, she thought as she battled the unwarranted rigidity that crept up in her which didn't allow her to be accessible at that point.



How she wished to turn around and say it was her, not him that was the issue...She felt miserable to make him feel guilty again, guilty of something he hadn’t done.



Trying to understand her strange and varied emotions from the night, Anuj couldnt comprehend how she went from being his Anu to some stranger he didn't know in a matter of moments. He didn’t think he had done any wrong but her snub made him anxious.




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Cuddling up to her in bed, he twined his fingers with hers and caressed her serene face shining in the bright dawning sunlight...



She refused to be disturbed and pulled him closer nudging him to put her back to sleep.



He smiled at her cute gesture and stroked her hair ...He kissed the back of her hand and placed it on his heart where she belonged....





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ok thats Part 2 done, yaar cliff par hi jaan deni hai maine I guess😆

sorry but its Sunday already and I have a load of stuff to get done before tomorrow...dont know when the next part will be but I shall try to write it soon-ish...

tell me what you thought about this one please, I know it had a bit of romance, thrill and suspense, please bolna kya accha laga zyada...

thanks again for the lovely and interesting comments, loved reading them all and I wish someday I find the time to reply but please keep them coming🤗

@ sorry Juhi, dont know how I forgot to tag you in the last update, tu janti hai it was a mistake, please maafi dede😳

@shriz(minus one z) tum aaye toh aya mujhe yaad, forum pe aaj troll niklasmiley37 sorry mere jokes beemar ho gaye teri judaai mein😆

Edited by hinz - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago
#35

tag lo ji song ke sath


https://youtu.be/ALersMmKNl0

Posted: 3 years ago
#36

more tags


cliff ke liye advance mein maafi

Posted: 3 years ago
#37

hor das kinniya tagging kar diya mennu🤣

Posted: 3 years ago
#38

last lot, ab bhul gayi toh sorry

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Yaar yeh beech mein kya hua .

Ab main ispe essays ka assumptions nahi likhna chaati hoon yaar ....

Tu ek kaam karle pehle ek do parts likh kar post karde pleej 🤣😂🤣 i

Posted: 3 years ago
#40

yaar hum jaise show ke tracks predict karte hai na waise hi. mera update bhi guess kar na pleej, maza ayega



phir mai ideas churaungi tum sab se show ke writers ki tarah🤣

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