Tumhi Dekho Na| MaAn | updated pt 2 pg 5/ 05.12 - Page 2

Beautiful update 💕💕

Ah, sahaj pake so meetha hoye ❤️

Such a lovely update. You are good in describing the scene, their thoughts, the inner turmoil so well. While the actual spoken dialogues are so few, the emotions shared are numerous.

In a serial, all we hear are dialogues and portraying these emotions are left to actors. While some actors are able to do justice (like Gaurav and Rups) some fail.

As a writer you have captured all the nuances so well, wrote it so well that all emotions are presented to readers in a crystal clear manner.

Beautiful post and as always please continue ❤️❤️

Wah Hinz, it seems you watch the scenes in the show and extend them to play out beautifully.👏

Anuj should let Anu apply the care as he already has different plan. 🤣

Hinz this is sooo good awesome pleej continue..

You do paint quite a beautiful picture gurl 🤩🤩😍

Adorable MaAn

Thanks for the tag dear

This is so beautiful..... I just can't wait to read the next part 🥰🥰🥰😍😊😊

Thank you for tagging, dear 🤗🥰

Yeh phirse moments pai cliffhanger dal diya 🤔

But koi nehi 😛...part is really awesome 💓💓

😍😍😍

So sweet !

Love your stories bc they paint such a pretty scene 😘

If only someone would blow hair out of my eyes 😅😂

Simple yet beautiful💓💓