Tumhi Dekho Na| MaAn | updated pt 2 pg 5/ 05.12 - Page 5

Ab main mukka maar hi dungi🤔 pehla tumhe (you know in good humor) aur doosra tumhari Anupama ko.

Matlab how dare she snub anuj like that and make him feel small.

Uske baad vo chaar lines main kon do prani ek doosre ki company enjoy kar rahe thhe?😵

Vibes anu anuj ki thi but she kind of fought with him toh cant be them. Aur agar wo dono kisi aur ke sath hue, toh gaddar ho jaega

Unme se kisi ka khwab bhi ho sakta hai... actually that sounds more plausible. Kavya vanraj ka romance toh tum likhne se rahi😆

Le...de di maine apni theories. Quantum ki perturbation ke baad, yahi sar dukha hai mera.

Note- tum cliff par chamgadad ki tarah latak rhi ho

Sunday evening cliffhanger! Maza aa gaya.

You really love your angst :)

Do update soon!

U made my Sunday morning with ur awesome update 🥰 ❤️


Thanks for the tag 🤗

Nahi behen main predict kar karke apna sar phodna nahi chaati hoon 🤣😂😂

Main sabr karungi Anuj ki tarah . Waise utna hai nahi par I don't have a choice na . Neither with the story nor with yours ladki

Tu toh humme mat satao pleej 🤣

Waaaahhhh kya likha hai. I really loved it,and the building up angst is killing me. Amazing update 😃

Thanks for the update, as usual you have a knack with words. 👏👏

First part felt like poetry, that moment when they come close, bliss ❤️

Second part angst, guilt...why I feel hurt when Anuj feels so😢

I know you won't leave Anuj in this state for long. Though unwillingly, I will wait this time 🙏

Last part..I love Anuj's dream in serial, please please let's this be a reality.😍

Ack cliffy 😫

Maybe she’s cold bc she realized she got attracted ?! Got a little hot for her ? && now has the Anuj-syndrome of not wanting to take advantage of him or make him uncomfortable with her feelings 😂😂

hi , thanks for the tag. Very nice part 2. You have brought out beautifully an awkward situation. Both being matured and honest with each other , they both feel guily if they have crossed their understanding. Probably in your next part you may bring clarity to them that they are undergoing a natural transformation and not to feel guilty about it.

From Anuj side his reaction is what he has been all along, cautious and not influential.

From Anu side :

Wishing she didn't have to be so cold, she thought as she battled the unwarranted rigidity that crept up in her which didn't allow her to be accessible at that point.

How she wished to turn around and say it was her, not him that was the issue...She felt miserable to make him feel guilty again, guilty of something he hadn’t done.

Bit rude , but aware of her unwarranted coldness. So expect her to take the next step to correct.

Last conclusion .... as usual our Dream man's sweet dream??

Acha hai? Yeh koi poochne ki baat hai ... Yeh toh bohat acha hai❤️ Finally I got to read something I craved for. Anu's resistance to accept the feelings and Anuj restlessness.pls continue and update it soon😍

Sorry for late response behen..I did read your OS yesterday and its as usual mind blowing..tera romance/emotional wala OS sabe best hai..aur I will predict more storylines for it..abhi toh humara track record hai in predicting upcoming tracks😛 haala ki 90% guesses toh galat hothe hai par hum haar nahi maanenge😂😂😂