4th, July, 2006 Written Update

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Posted: 19 years ago
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when i seen nobody updated it, i thought i will, maybe i dont do it the right way or not good at it, its my first time ever

i have tryed my best in the update i didnt watch it properly but still tryed to get most of the parts and maybe am wrong in the names

its my first time doing an update so please😳

it starts with ranvir hanging beside a wall with a rope and looking in another house through binoculars which shows a girl on her mobile talking to someone, on the other hand ranvir is talking to someone on his mic its his sir telling him details about what he is seeing in the house, ranvir tells his sir: there is a girl talking on her mobile she is beautiful, his sir says look everywhere and tell me what stuff you see in her house, he says theres a TV in the middle his sir says fix the camera ( i think he said camera) there so we can see what she says, ranvir says ok, he goes to that house being a cable man to fix her TV, when he's fixing it he asks the girl that can he have glass of water, the girl showing a "whateva" look to him goes to get a glass of water during that time ranbhir fixes the camera in the TV

and says to her "here madam, your cable is fixed" the girl says thank god i can see everything now, ranvir mumbles to himself "we too"

rannir and his worker friend savio are shown sitting down listening through headphones what the girl is talking, then ranvir takes them off and says nothing interesting, savio says i think we are wasting our time, just then ranvir's fiancee kinnari's call comes on his mobile, he is talking to her when savio starts making sounds like a women sayin stupid stuff, kinnari hears and gets very irritated and cuts the call(you should watch that part it was hilarious), savio starts running and ranvir chasing when there sir comes and says whats happening when savio tells him about the girl. ranvir asks for a day off, sir asks why, ranvir says engagement sir, sir says oh! yeah go, savio asks for a day off aswell sir aks why? is it your engagement aswell?

they show kinnari crying on her bed (its kumud of kusum serial) saying to her mom that why did i fall in love with him, where can he find a girl like me, and he still goes out with other girls, ranvir comes there and says to kinnari that you know savio, he makes good voices specially of women, kinnari looks abit calmed down and they both hug.

ranvir and kinnari are in a restaurant chatting away, kinnari is laughing and saying what was the need of puting a ring in my drink that day what if it got stuck in my throat?, ranvir says what do i know, i read it in a book, i thought it was very cool and romantic, kinnari says your a inspector and stay like a inspector dont get too romantic, just then ranvirs mobile rings, kinnari gets an idea that its from his work and says to him you can go, ranvir says what about the bill? kinnari says dont worry i will pay it. ranvir says so SWEET, kinnari pulls his cheeks and says so CHEAP!!. (i found that very funny aswell)

ranvirs sir tells him that they have to catch a don so be here tomorrow, ranvir gets tensed savio asks what happend? he says its my engagement tomorrow savio says oh yeah, you go and attend your engagement i'll looks after everything, ranvir says no kinnari will know and get used to that i will mostly be late.

the day of the engagement. kinnari is shown getting ready and ranbhir getting ready to catch the don, sir, savio and ranvir are there on the spot where they will catch the don, shooting and everything is going on, during that savio gets killed and before dying he tells them to go up, sir tells ranvir to go up and he does, there he sees the don and starts shooting and trys to catch him, the don keeps running, at last he shoots the don and at the same time the don shoots aswell, it goes flying hits the drum and then ranvir's back of the head and there he falls down.

kinnari gets a call and she is shocked. everyone is shown in the hospital, the doctors say ranvir is dead, ranvirs mom says use are lieing he cant die, kinnari and her mom are crying, they all are beside ranvir and savio's body ranvir's mom says wake up ranvir, show everyone you are alive, just then ranvirs body moves abit, everyone is shell shocked, the doctors say its a miracle but now he is in coma, they ask when will ranvir come out of the coma, the doctors say maybe today, tomorrow after some months, years or never.

they show ranvir wakeing up and getting flashes of him and kinnari together, he gets up and goes straight to kinnari's house, kinnari opens the door and is crying at seeing him, kinnari takes ranbhir in,( the house is quite empty, and has covers on the sofas) he tells kinnari look am back, now we will get straight married, kinnari says i think ranbhir you dont know anything, ranvir asks what? she says am married, ranvir is shocked, kinnari says i waited for you for so long but then i had to get married cause of my mom(something like that, didnt hear it properly), and they show kinnari's mom's photo has a flowers haar on it, ranvir asks how much time is passed? kinnari says 8 YEARS, ranvir is shocked, kinnari says sir told me you have came out of coma i knew you would come to meet me so this why i came to this house.

they show ranvir going to his own house and sees his mom sitting on the chair he says mom i have came back, his mom looks happy to see him, ranvir's sir comes there and says who you talking to? ranvir says with mom and when he looks back at the chair nobody is there, ranvir gets shocked, his sir says your mom passed away waiting beside your hospital bed two years back, ranvir sees his mom standing, his mom is saying "yes i am dead"

i think it finishes there

NEXT WEEK:it shows that he is seeing dead people like his friend savio

Edited by srkz gal - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow thanks! That was a great update. Great first try! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Belle1989

Wow thanks! That was a great update. Great first try! 😃

thanks i was so nervous, what will people say

i know it wasnt that good, but i didnt expect much from myself for the first time

thanks again😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for the update!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks everyone

use have really been nice 😊
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thank u so much great update...please do it every week if possible 👏
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wow thanks for the awesome update
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Thank you Salma 😊 Lovely update 👏 👏 Although it was quite hard to read because the text was too tiny 😆 I really like this show,its interesting and different 😃 Sudhanshu can act very well,hes an awesome actor 👍🏼 I like him,he has become one of my favourite actors 😳 Thanks once again Salma 😃

Aryan
Edited by Aryan~Bhai~MBBS - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aryan~Bhai~MBBS

Thank you Salma 😊 Lovely update 👏 👏 Although it was quite hard to read because the text was too tiny 😆 I really like this show,its interesting and different 😃 Sudhanshu can act very well,hes an awesome actor 👍🏼 I like him,he has become one of my favourite actors 😳 Thanks once again Salma 😃

Aryan

oh sorry! i thought the size of the writting would be fine😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great update you captured the story well

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