Manhattan Dreams-SS |Vikram&Shobha| Chap3 pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shiningstar2014

Very beautiful 👏 Vibha lovestories r always welcome here 😳


some day I want to be a published author!! this is just a test drive...
may I know your name please???


Thank youu so much for commenting!!!
Lekha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-


some day I want to be a published author!! this is just a test drive...
may I know your name please???


Thank youu so much for commenting!!!
Lekha

Hi Lekha I am Sweta nice to have u here waiting eagerly for ur next update it would be refreshing to read a fresh story on our fav couple
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Sweta lovely meeting you !! thank you for commenting dear!!! see you tomorrow hopefully!!! will be updating!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mom is dragging me for lunch and shopping interrupting my writing process so apologies in advance if its not upto par today
update at 9 pm IST

lekha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will wait dear, take ur time !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looking forward to your story. Happy Shobha did not leave them because of Sarika. Now waiting for Vikram to woo her back to India.
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Originally posted by: kiranpreethee

Looking forward to your story. Happy Shobha did not leave them because of Sarika. Now waiting for Vikram to woo her back to India.

naa tauba.. meri itni himmat!!!😆
Update coming up in a bit!!!

Thanks for commenting hope to see ya as a regular
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Writing for ViBha is so easy ... Tried to keep it as happy as possible... the backstory of the Oberois will be revealed in the upcoming chapters
Next Update Tomorrow 😃

Also here's a chapter you were probably not expecting me to write
Thank you to all those who have commented!!!! Makes me One happy writer !!!


Word Count :- 994


Chapter 2
Just like I had promised

Nani & the kids wanted to come along with him ... Vikram had failed to mention to Nani about the fact that their Shobha was sick.. Nani I don't want you to be alarmed just wait nani... jiyu rehu please go wait inside your rooms... Vikram says a little anxious... The kids obey and leave

Puttarji kya hua ??? Nani beseeches Vikram worriedly with pain seeping in her heart

Nani Shobha has been sick really sick.. Usse cancer tha nani vikram cries his heart ACHING... I promised her that I'll be there in sickness and in health & I broke part of the said promise

Gal sun Nani says tu jaana chahta hai na meri pari ko laane wapas she adds slowly caressing his head mai bhi aaungi tere saath. bacchon ko Sharda aur Garima ke paas chodke chalte hai apni pari se milne hmmm Vikram nods and hugs nani saying Best birthday gift ever...

Meanwhile In The Sachdev House

Sharda was at peace with what was happening with her family Shobha was recovering well, she had her nephew Aman to thank for that.. Vikram made her daughter so happy. Everything was falling back into place she started to think of Vikram as her own son despite not being blood related.. she sees Her partner in Crime Pammi (Nani) walk in smiling and nudges her

Kya hua aap itna khush kyu lag rahi hai di..(nani from Sharda's mouth sounds weird to me😆) she asks her BFF smirking knowing that her baby Garu had played catalyst to this entire fiasco

humari khushi is back soon sharda nani says Vikram & I are leaving to get Shobha back and we wanted to leave the kids with you and Garu if that is okay with both of you

Garima comes & Interrupts saying ofcourse Nani ma we both love the kids to bits and we want you to go safely and call us as soon as you meet bhabhi ok Vikram bhaiyya has my skype id and we will talk.. aap aur bhaiyya meri di ko bacchon ke adoption ke baare me mat bataiye... we want a full family re union haan

nani laughs haan baba haan I won't deny you anything Garu she says pulling her cheeks we need time to leave samjhi 2 weeks ke andar Vikram is arranging for our visas...


In NYC

The air is crisp and the inmates of The Oberoi mansion are giggling away at something.. its Christmas eve there is this one lady who remembers Her Beloved's birthday every year her eyes welled up with unshed tears happy birthday Vikram she says crying holding onto the photograph of theirs with jiyu when she was 6 the last time she saw her daughter badal gaye honge naa aap Vikram??? she thought sadly..

Dr Aman Sachdev who was walking by notices her tears starts talking Shobhi di aap ro kyu rahi hai ?? he asks her with warmest of warm voice

Chotechand mujhe kuch nai hua Shobha turns around and says with all smiles she could muster... bas aaj Vikra.. khair tu ek kaam karega please mere liyye ?? she looks at him hopefully please jaa kar Garima ko skype karo.. mujhe bacchon ke bare me puchna hai...

Ok boss he says smiling knowingly...


The Skype Chat & Call

Crazygal_garu123 :- cant talk in call aap batao kya hua ...aaj bhi Vikram bhaiyya ke baare me??

DashSach2225:- Han par Garu Video call now!!!! Chachi hai saath ???

Crazygal_garu123 :- nahi hai ... aap mujhse baat karein naa accha lekin mein friend ke yeha jaa rahi hu in a bit... aap jaldi connect ho...

DashSach2225 :- ok done


a moment's pause

oii Garu aaj Vikram bhai ka birthday hai kya??? Aman asks her

OMG YES Aman bhaiyya kya di??? ek minute I want them to come face to face now aap laptop sleep mai rakho aur di ko leke aao... mai Vikram bhaiyya ko laati hu Aman nods and screams Shobhi dii Garu aapse baat karna chahti hai jaldi aayein

Chotechand chillana band kar by god ! ab kya hua hoga Shobha wonders silently

Plan Milap part one done Aman thinks and smiles gleefully... then puts a poker face and says aap baithke baatein kare I'm off to the hospital phir aaj shaam ko Gini ke saath date and all he blushes making Shobha giggle

Jaa ab ... she whacks him giggling and turns on the laptop and she freezes.. on the other side there is Vikram... Garu had said that Aman had wanted to talk to him but she had set up both of them elaborately and left satisfied to her friend's place...

Vikram... Vik.. Vikram aap... Shobha was shocked and crying...

Please, Please my love don't cry please... aaj 5 saal ho gaye hai tumhara chehra dekhe.. bohot badal gayi ho haan... Aur aaj tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari?? Vikram asks her

Considering everything I'm doing ok way better than ok Shobha whispered... Jiyu Aur Rehu ko miss kar rahi hu aaj bohot aap ke saath hai naa?? she beseeches

Haan & they miss you immensely Vikram says omitting the fact that the kids now have 2 parents and that He had adopted them legally he had wanted it to be a surprise.

Acha waise aaj aap ka special day hai naa Happy 40th Birthday my love aap ko bohot miss kar rahi hu Shobha says. Her eyes twinkling...

Yaad tha tumhein?? Vikram asks surprised

Haan.Har saal roti thi main... with regrets that I never got to wish you in person in the last 5 years humari photo dekh ke jee bhar jaata tha she says...

No more regrets Shobha Vikram says Main aa raha hun tumhein lene "Just Like I Promised" 2 weeks just 2 more weeks sare visa issues sort hone ke baad I''ll be there with a big surprise for you he smiles into the laptop

I waited 5 years Vikram.. what is two weeks she says smiling...



Fin!!

See you tomorrow lovely people!!!

Lekha

proof read for errors sorry if there are any other mistakes
Edited by -Destiny- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will proof read tomorrow have a great day!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great to read the second chapter and I like the positive outlook of the story. So are we going to be treated to cute and romantic vibes scenes soon?
Mature love stories is another type of understanding and I believe depth. The passion would be different as two mature persons come with experience of life and they will have a different outlook about love, commitment, relationship etc. So looking forward to the meeting of Vikram and Shobha after 5 years separation.

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