Manhattan Dreams-SS |Vikram&Shobha| Chap3 pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiranpreethee

Great to read the second chapter and I like the positive outlook of the story. So are we going to be treated to cute and romantic vibes scenes soon?

Mature love stories is another type of understanding and I believe depth. The passion would be different as two mature persons come with experience of life and they will have a different outlook about love, commitment, relationship etc. So looking forward to the meeting of Vikram and Shobha after 5 years separation.

yes light fluffy moments in store for the next few chapters
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character Sketch 1

Touted as "The Cuties" by Shobha

Aman Sachdev (Played By Sidharth Shukla)
A few things you need to know about him
He's a/the
  1. Cancer Specialist
  2. Closet Romantic😳
  3. ViBha shipper 😃
  4. Problem solver
  5. EASIEST Bakra to prank😆
Nickname(s) :- Chotechand (by Shobha)

Ragini "Gini" Oberoi (Played By Aamna Sharif)


Few things about her

She's a/the
  1. Child Specialist
  2. Shobha's younger sister (more to be revealed in chapters)
  3. SANEST Saint amongst Of All Oberois😆
Nickname(s) :- Gini (by Aman) & Melody (by Shobha & Vikram)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
thanks for commenting!!!!!!!!! sorry about not updating yesterday!!! had a l'il accident whilst I was out!!!! 🤢 bruised my knee really badly 😭 and the pain was hindering my creative thinking but I'll update double to make up!!!
😳 sorry aagain

Lekha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear, looking fwd to Vibha meeting, take care of your knee. Sorry to hear abt it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: shanti05

Nice update dear, looking fwd to Vibha meeting, take care of your knee. Sorry to hear abt it.


Feeling much better now😳 Currently writing 😳 keep on a loookout!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful story just read both parts and love it. Will wait for next update.😊hope they will meet together.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful story just read both parts and love it. Will wait for next update.😊hope they will meet together.

thank you ... been a l'il under the weather🤢😭 can you tell me your name???😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just read the two chapters. Thanks for the PM, Lekha! You have a very nice concept in there. There is so much scope for elaorating it. 😊
Keep it up. I am happy that you are bringing ViBha together with new characters. Do update soon. 😊
Oh, and take care of your health! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

<font size="2">I just read the two chapters.Thanks for the PM, Lekha!You have a very nice concept in there. There is so much scope for elaorating it.😊</font>

<font size="2">Keep it up. I am happy that you are bringing ViBha together with new characters. Do update soon.😊</font>
<font size="2">Oh, and take care of your health! 😊</font>

thanks a lot may.

So nice to meet you.

Currently still a lil under the weather. But I'm writing a chapter now.
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Sorry this took long 😳 Was recouping from my end of the year sickness

Happy New Year!!! May 2015 bring you happiness!!
First update in the new year!!!

Enjoy
Word Count :- 753

Chapter 3

She's A Basketcase
2 Weeks Later

2 weeks flew by like a whirlwind.. Both Vikram & Shobha skyped regularly & kept emailing photos in those two weeks and they had made a promise to each other that they will never leave each other once they meet...

Chaos was ensuing in the Oberoi house

Chotechand Shobha screamed.. Jaldi kar naa airport jaana hai.. Shobha was agitated as so much had to be put together still with so little time left
Pascal she called the butler and said can you please tell dadisa that I am going to the airport and make sure the guest bedrooms are ready for use i am taking Bosco and going to the airport please tell him to keep the car ready for us to leave...
Yes m'am Pascal says and leaves

Chotechand aa rahe ho ya main niklu Shobha shouts she slowly limps into Aman's room and sees him still asleep she caressed his hair and smiles and leaves to go to the airport
Vikram & Nani were on a flight to NYC which had tired them out.. but Vikram had looked extra weary his eyes were especially looking forward to seeing Shobha. Nani & vikram had ended their plane ride and were extremely anxious about meeting Shobha who was waiting patiently amonst the crowd in La Guardia international arrivals...


Listen to this song whilst you read their reunion!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NWAvSnFAjs (Open In a New tab )
Teri aankhon ke sajde me rehna
Palko ke parde me
Jab tak hai Jab tak hai jaan
Teri baahon ki narmi me
Saanson ki garmi mein
Jab tak hai Jab tak hai jaan
Vikram scans the crowd and his eyes fall on Shobha who has tears in her eyes and looks at nani & says Nani aap yahi rukiye and rushes towards her.. As for Shobha she too rushes to him as fast as her limp can take her towards her love

Both had tears in their eyes Shobha touches his face feeling every ounce of that beautiful face she grew to love so much

Vikr...aap aagaye she fiercely hugs him tears streaming down her eyes You're real she whispers hugging him

I'm here he adds tightening the hug pulling her close enough to capture her lips with his

She eagerly reciprocates the kiss feeling every emotion!!

I missed you so so much 5 years is excessive time to be away from you my love." he said as a single tear tickled down his eye to her cheek and she looked at him in shock and guilt.
I am sorry I don't think I deserve your love Shobha says suddenly feeling overwhelmed I am sorry..." she said not able to meet his gaze due to the guilt of deserting him while tears made their way down her cheeks.

Vikram was getting irritated and frustrated because of her saying sorry but he kept soothing her and says your surprise is also waiting Nani bhi aayi hai which brings a radiant smile to her face, Nani had that smile inducing quality that had brightened Shobha's dull tarnished life.

Vikram Smiles warmly at Shobha's smile

Nani she screams and limps wincing every time she takes a step.Her leg starts paining immensely but she overlooks it & takes Nani into a bone crushing hug & says Nani I missed you so much ... please mujhe maaf kardijiye I left so unceremoniously..

Naa meri Pari Nani says, tabiyat kharaab thi teri.. I won't hold anything against you.. she notices the wince in Shobha's face & guides her into the car let's go home she says

On the 4 hour car journey Shobha snuggles into Vikram falling asleep she's so grateful that he's back.

After the life threatening car accident that she was in a few months ago she keep hadn't fallen asleep in peace.

Nightmares haunt her images like Samarth strangling her and Sarika trying to physically hurt kept her sleep at bay and she did not want to burden any of the family members with her nightmares

Vikram had seen Shobha wincing , but he decided to let it pass & talk to Shobha about it sometime.

On the last one one hour of their journey, Vikram & Nani decide to wake up Shobha and talk she flutters awake and smiles

Nani Vikram Shobha says I have a plan she says bohot din ho gaye kisiko prank kiye hue.. I am so excited to prank Chotechand & Melody ghar chaliye batati hun mera plan she has a glimmer of craziness in her eyes

I love you so so so much Shobha Vikram says & laughs You do know you are a big basketcase naa?? he adds laughing heartily

Nani also agrees laughing at Shobha Basketcase??? Vikram puttar come up with some other nickname naa!!!


Shobha pouts angrily and huffs..


Fin
Happy New Year Again my loves!!!
Lekha
Edited by -Destiny- - 10 years ago

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