New Chilly ff ~ Tum hi mere jeevansaathi ~ updated chap8 on pg24

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Nice update faru... Liked it.

Keep continue:)

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Akshnavlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

mast update di. Aakhir kar sagai ho gayi 😃 🥳

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Akshnavlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

di thode bade updates do na

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designersaini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

yippee maine padh liya 🥳
chap-4
i really really loved dis one
1st half mein lolly ki chaturai n nanu aur mahaan...sach mein dosti ho to aisi
2nd half is superb...kaise ketu ne sabki pitaai ki n my fav one kaise chintu ne ketu ko console kia n samjhaya...awww...sach kaha chintu ne ketu ki haste khil-khilate n use pareshan karte hi achchi lagti h aise hue nahi

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designersaini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

😆ketu ki shopping...bechara chintu pareshan ho gaya h ketu ki shopping se
atlst sab mele mein mil gae n dolly-chintu ka eye contact bh ho gaya...ye jab bhi eye contact ka padhti hoon mai i feel ki mera ho gaya h eye eontact wid those green eyes...hayeee 😆
n i think dat girl was dolly na...waise to i know suspense h but chintu paayal wapis nahi kar paya...aage kaam aaegi😆
overall vry nice

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designersaini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

ek taraf khushi h to ek taraf dukh...chintu is feeling happing after meeting dolly while dolly is sad dat she lost her mother's belonging
i really feel fr her...cant see her like dat...ab to bas jaldi se chintu mile use aur yahanse chutkara n achchi sukoon ki zindagi
mele mein dolly nahi gai but 9t a prob nani ji wo kami puri kar dengi jo abhi h...haina