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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

wah humare chacha chachi bhi aagaye😃

bhai bhabhise bhi mile😳
maine wapas buddu banaya unko🤣

haan 😃
Atlast mil liye 😆
Kitni khush ho rai h 😆
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(Banner credit goes to my dear Ketaki19😳)


Chapter 6


After reaching the hotel, both freshen up and then all four goes to have dinner. After having the dinner they come back to hotel and goes to sleep in their respective rooms but Chintu's sleep has gone after seeing the girl in the fare.
He takes out the anklet and caress it as if trying to feel her.

Chintu's (ST)- Kuch toh tha uski aankhon mei jo wo mujhse kehna chahti thi..uski uss hasi ke pichhe bhi ek udaasi thi..kya tha wo? Kya mai sahi soch raha hoon ya ye meri imagination hai? Par aaj se pehle maine aisa kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya jaisa maine use dekh kar kiya..but then he smacks his head..Chintu beta tu na uss Tsunami ke saath reh reh kar sach mei pagal ho gaya hai, tu kabse aisi baatein sochne laga? Chal ab soja..and keeping the anklet safely under his pillow he sleeps promising to give it back if they meet again.

While on the other hand, Dolly also goes back to home after giving treat to Lolly and shopping some grocery.

Reaching home she gets busy in the household works and forgets about the fare incident. After having her dinner, she goes back to her room and changes to her night dress. While changing she notices her one of the anklet missing and remembers the fare incident. She had tears in her eyes as these anklets are her mothers last gift to her and due to her foolishness she lost one of them. She takes out the other anklet also and keeps it safe in the Almirah and then goes and starts writing her feelings in her diary. After penning down her feelings she feels lil relieved and goes and lays on her bed but cant able to sleep because of the guilt but at last her eye lids closes automatically due to tiredness.


Morning

Chintu and Ketaki again goes to fare along with Chacha-Chachi after having their breakfast. Ketaki and Chacha-Chachi were shopping but Chintu's eyes were searching the girl in order to give back her anklet or is that he wants to see her once 😉. He searches the whole fare but doesn't find her and getting disappointed comes back to the three and asks them to make a move as its lunch time. They were crossing the ghaat when his eyes falls on her and he finds her lil upset maybe because of her anklet. Then he looks at her side and finds the same girl who dragged her yesterday with her and today seems like she is trying to cheer her up.

In trance, he starts walking towards them but was stopped by Ketaki.

Ketaki- Bhai..Wahan kahan ja rahe ho?

Chintu- Huhh..umm..kahin nahi bas aise hi..

Ketaki- Aap thik ho na? Kal se aap khoye-khoye se lag rahe ho? Kahin aapne mere liye bhabhi toh nahi dhund li..she teases him.

Chintu- Haan..mai bilkul thik hoon..aur tu na apne dimag ke ghode zara kam duadaya kar..samjhi?..he warns her.

Ketaki- Samjhi..ab chalo.

Chintu- Haan..saying he once looks at her direction and finds the place empty, sighing he goes to have lunch.


Night

All were settled in one room and having their dessert when Ketaki asks Chacha ji.

Ketaki- Chachu Lathmar Holi kya hoti hai?

Chacha- Beta Lathmar Holi bhi ek tarah ki holi hai par Mathura mein alag tarah se kheli jaati hai and he explains how it is played.

Ketaki- Wow..phir toh bahot maza aata hoga na.

Chacha- Haan beta..mera ek dost Mathura ka hi tha aur wo toh bahot tareef karta tha..baaki toh hum khud experience karke hi bata sakte hain.

Ketaki- Toh der kis baat ki hai..hum bhi chalte hai na dekhne.

Chintu- Oye..zyada uchhalne ki zarurat nahi hai..hum kahin nahi ja rahe hain.

Ketaki- Kyu??Aapko har chize ke liye mana karna zaruri hai.

Chintu- Haan kyunki tu apni masti ke chakkar mei apna bilkul bhi dhyaan nahi rakhti hai..tujhe pata hai na ki tujhe bheegne se kitni jaldi zukaam hota hai?

Ketaki- Par bhai..

Chintu- No bhai-wai..

She then turns towards Chacha ji with a baby face in order to melt him and he melts.

Chacha- Chintu beta..tum fikar mat karo..kal toh sirf Lathmar holi hai jo sirf dekhni hoti hai..rango ki holi toh kuch din baad kheli jayegi..toh hum ja sakte hain dekhne..he convinces him.

Chacha- Thik hai Chachu aap keh rahe hain toh hum chalenge.

Ketaki- Yayy..thanku bhai thanku Chachu.


Next day, they goes to see Lath Mar holi (holi in which people hit with sticks). It is one of the famous holi in India celebrated in the neighbouring towns of Mathura: Nand Gaon and Barsana associated with Radha and Krishna.
It is believed that Lord Krishna visited his beloved Radha's village on this day and playfully teased her and her friends. Taking offence at this, the women of Barsana chased him away.

Following the same ritual, dressed in colourful clothes, the women of Barsana playfully beat men from the neighbouring Nand gaon village with lathis, while the men try to protect themselves with shields. The second day mens from Barsana go to Nandgaon to play holi with women at Nandgaon.



It is celebrated a few days before the actual Holi in the neighbouring towns of Barsana and Nandgaon near Mathura in the state of Uttar Pradesh. In the sprawling compound of the Radha Rani temple in Barsana, thousands gather to witness it.

(Courtesy to above info. Google)

All were enjoying the Holi but Chintu's eyes were searching that girl.


Jagdamba Nivas

Nani- Panna ji..jaldi kariye der ho rahi hai.

Nana- Aa raha hoon Jagdambe.

Nana- Ab ye Krishna beta kahan reh gaya?

Krishna- Mai yahan hoon Nani.

Nani- Acha hua tum aa gaye..ab tumhare Nana ji bhi aa jaaye phir nikalte hain.

Nana- Mai bhi aa gaya..saying he sees everywhere.

Nani- Ab kise dhund rahe hain aap?

Nana- Dolly ko..wo bhi toh chalegi humare saath.

Krishna- Wo kya karegi wahan aa kar?

Nana- Ye kaisa sawal hai Krishna? Jo tum karoge wahi wo bhi karegi..he snaps at him.

Nani- Wo nahi aa rahi hai.

Nana- Kyu?

Nani- Uski tabiyat thik nahi hai toh humne use mana kar diya aur saath-saath ghar bhi dekh legi wo.


Listening this Nana goes to Dolly's room and finds her standing near the window.

Nana- Dolly beta kya hua tumhe?

Dolly- Kuch nahi Nana ji bas thoda sar dard hai.


Nana- Toh beta yahan kyu khadi ho? Aram karo..mai yahi hoon tumhare saath.

Dolly- Nahi-nahi..aap chale jayiye..mai manage kar lungi..aap meri vajah se apna program cancel mat kijiye.

Nana- Par beta..

Dolly- Please Nana ji..[B]

[B]Nana- Thik hai..
feeling dejected he leaves half heartedly.

After he is gone, she cries hiding her face in the pillow remembering her parents.


On reaching the place, where all were enjoying the Holi, Nani's eyes were roaming all over the place.

Krishna- Nani..aap kisi ko dhund rahi ho kya?

Nani- Haan.

Krishna- Kise?

Nani- Tumhare jija ji ko.

Krishna- Jija ji toh Pandit ji ko dhundne hai.

Nani- Pandit ji se toh rishta dhunda nahi ja raha toh humne socha hum hi kuch jatan karle.

Krishna- Matlab?

Nani- Matlab yeh ki Mathura ki mashhur Holi dekhne ke liye dur shehro se log aate hain. Toh humne socha ki koi acha sa ladka pasand karke hum hi kuch baat aage badha lete hain..isse hume humare mutabik ladka bhi mil jayega aur uss ladki se chhutkara bhi..and smirks.

Krishna- Wah Nani..maan gaya aapko..kya dimag lagaya hai.

Nani- Chalo ab tum bhi humari madad karo apne jija ji dhundne mein.

Krishna- Haan-haan kyu nahi..aakhir saale ka bhi toh faayda hoga jija ji ki vajah se..both laughs evilly and starts searching for their prey.



"Apologies for the mistakes 😛"
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holi aayi isme bhi 🥳 color n dance
mast update di
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Posted: 10 years ago
achha hain ji. Lathmaar holi ajab andaj hain iss holi ka 😆 ladkiya sari bhadas nikalti hongi 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

holi aayi isme bhi🥳color n dance

mast update di

haan 😃
Shukriya 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Divya--

superb dear👏🥳

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shukriya 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dnyanu16

padh liya maine😆

very good 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dnyanu16

achha hain ji. Lathmaar holi ajab andaj hain iss holi ka😆ladkiya sari bhadas nikalti hongi🤣

shukriya ji 😳
😆 puchh le jakar 😆
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Chapter 7



One week later

Chintu was getting ready in his hotel room lost in his thoughts when again Ketaki enters the room in her typical style calling out to him.
Upon not getting any reply she reaches near him and finds him in thoughts. She smirks and decides to tease him.

Ketaki- Ahmm..bhai agar bhabhi ko sirf imagine hi karna hai toh shaadi karne ki kya zarurat hai?

[BChintu[/B] (shocked)- Nahi..mai toh..mai toh bas..

Ketaki (laughing)- Haha...ye kya bhai aap toh abhi se bakri ban gaye maine toh suna tha ki shaadi ke baad biwi ke aage muh nahi khulta..par aap toh abhi se mai mai karne lage..haha..and she starts laughing loudly.

Chintu realises that she is pulling his leg & runs after her- Ketu ki bachiii..ruk ja abhi batata hoon mai ki kiski bolti bandh hoti hai.


Ketaki too runs for her life- Ketu ki bachi? Mai khud ki bachi kaise ho sakti hoon?..lagta hai bolti ke saath-saath dimag ki bhi batti gul ho gai aapki..haww bechari meri bhabhi batti gul mangetar mil rahe hain unhe.

Chintu (stops)- KYAA???

Ketaki- Uff..bhai mere chhote-chhote kaano par reham karo..

Chintu- Reham..ab toh mai bilkul bhi reham nahi karunga tujh par..bahot bolne lagi hai tu..saying this he again starts chasing her.

Both were running and chasing round and round the whole room until Chachi comes and shouts at them.

Chachi- Ye kya ho raha hai? Aaj ke din bhi dono bacho ki tarah lad rahe ho..Chintu beta ye toh chhoti hai par tum toh samajhdari dikhao ab shaadi hone wali hai tumhari.

Ketaki- Hehehe..


Chintu- Bachi nahi dadi amma hai ye hum sab ki Chachi..har waqt budho jaisi baatien karti hai.

Ketaki (frowns)- Don't call me dadi amma.

Chintu- Dadi amma dadi amma dadi amma..he teases her more.

Ketaki- Chachi dekho na bhai ko.

Chintu- Ab Chachi se kyu complaint kar rahi ho dadi amma.

Ketaki- BHAI..bandh karo mujhe wo bulana.

Chintu- Tu mujhe pareshaan karna bandh karde mai dadi amma bulana bandh kar dunga.

Ketaki- Kabhi nahi.

Chintu- Thik hai phir mera bhi kabhi nahi.

Ketaki thinks for a while and then smirks.

Ketaki- Ok.

Chintu- What ok?

Ketaki- Aajse mai aapko pareshaan nahi karungi.

Chintu- Hmm..thik hai mai bhi tujhe aajse dadi amma nahi bulaunga.

Chachi- Ab agar samjhauta ho gaya ho toh ready ho jao phir hume nikalna bhi hai.

Both nodes and after getting ready all four left for the venue.


Jagdamba Nivas

There is a lot of hustle-bustle in the house while the opposite in Dolly's room. Dolly was sitting in front of the mirror lost while a neighbours daughter was doing her little make-up and wearing her simple jewellery.
After finishing her task, the girl looks at Dolly and smiles seeing her hardwork.

Girl- Dolly tu toh bahot sundar dikh rahi hai..ek baar dekh toh aaine mei.

But Dolly just sat there with a lower head and doesn't moves her head upwards to look at herself even once.
The girl gets confused at her this behaviour but thinks it as her shyness and smiles.
Meanwhile, the groom with his family also arrives so she lefts the room to see them leaving Dolly all alone lost in her miseries.

Nani- Nana ji welcomes them inside and makes them sit and offers them snacks and beverages till the muhurat.


After sometime, Pandit ji announces that its time for the engagement, call the bride to start the rituals. The neighbour girl goes to take Dolly to the hall.

Girl- Dolly chal Pandit ji bula rahe hain.

Dolly listens to her but doesn't gets up to go. Then girl comes upto her, makes her stand and takes her in the hall.
The distance from her room to the hall was like a century for Dolly as she doesn't find her steps this much heavy any other time as she was hell-nervous because of this sudden engagement.

On reaching the hall, the groom gets mesmerised seeing her in deep blue chiffon saree complementing her skin color perfectly. He was so much lost in her that he doesn't even notice when she came and stand opposite to him. His concentration broke with the voice of Pandit ji who was doing the pre-rituals and then says to exchange the rings.


Nani gives the ring to Dolly to make her wear first. Dolly with shivering hands takes the ring and moves her hand towards him to make him wear it. She tries to make him wear it without touching it but it was very difficult like this way because he has stretched his fingers.

But like sensing her hesitance and her shivering hand, he softens his fingers a little so that she can make him wear the ring. She tries again and this time gets successful. After her, he too wears her the ring in the same manner seeing her nervousness.

Touched by his gesture, she raises her eyes a little and notices that he has worn a purple color sherwani but then downcast them again without seeing his face.
Once the engagement was done, both takes the blessings of their elders and then they were made to sit together and made to eat sweets.


In between all this, one soul was fuming in anger seeing all this i.e. Lolly. She was very upset and angry on Dolly for accepting to get married and not voicing out her feelings. She don't even want to come in the engagement but she was her bestie so to see how her would-be is she came to the engagement and seeing his gestures towards Dolly she was little relieved but the doubt was still there. So she decided to get it clear in her own way and comes back to her home as she was still angry on Dolly.

Then the elders went to discuss about the marriage and its pre-rituals with the Pandit ji which are to be held after the two weeks according to their kundali's. Discussing everything grooms family took their leave and Dolly also goes back to her room.


"Apologies for the mistakes 😛 "

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