Unmasked (Ratri ff) chapter 14 and 15 updated on page 14-15 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Too beautiful 👏

Loved the elevator scene, though it's a short one, but adorable enough ❤️ I respect other two for moving back to them 😉

So, Chief is no more an accused for the team. I loved how you have woven the whole plot so far Ritu, it's so natural and reflective to the reality ⭐️

Waiting for more and more to the romantic moments for RaTri the most 😉 In luv with your story, thanks dear and luv ya ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Loved both the chapters Ritu...even i thought the same when the first chapter ended...that there is definitely some plan from vidushak. ..that's why they could find him so soon...
I loved how the entire team is so well knit and all are together finding ...or rather trying to find out vidushak. ..

Waiting for your RaTri scenes dear...

Just in love with the progress of your story...thanks dear...loved it.. 👏 ⭐️

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Lovely.. Awesome n very nice progression Ritu... ⭐️👏

Very natural... seems as if its been plotted by the CVs... 😳

So.. all was set by Vidushak... n someone is there who is leaking the infos n plannings...

Nice to know that the whole team wants our RaTri to be together... n give them space... n all together they need to see them close..

Will be waiting for the " Said " moments...

Thanks dear n God bless... !

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Nice going Ritu 👏

I loved the way things have gone ahead! Vidushak himself oust his plan, and gave back Chief to the team. Who must be giving the information from inside CBI? A million dollar query dear.

Now will be looking forward to the RaTri moments as the team wants them to be together and the case be closed. And what a charming prince like Raghav took his coat and told Trisha that he is coming with her.

Lots in wait 😉

Thanks and luv ya Sweetie ❤️🤗

( Hope you have read my last page's comment too 😳 )

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Ritu... you will get Babita's review by Monday... she is preparing for her exam... !

Originally posted by: Directional.

Thanks for telling..😊 wishing her all the best for her exams.. 😊

Would wait for her review..😳

Originally posted by: babita..

Nice bringing of the story to this level Ritu 👏👏

I just loved the way things have reached here. The case taken at the place of shootout and then coming to the fact that Chief was not an accused. The Vidushak giving back the Chief, knowing upon Raghav's intruding into the reality.

Then, the team unity and Trisha and raghav leaving for office and all others praying for their being a pair and Raghav's case be closed forever.

It's a nice feeling when all good is happening with the awaited and coming RaTri moments in the next, i'm so moved today, that finally we will get some relaxation from the cases and all. 😉

Loving it the most and waiting for them

Thanks Ritu, thank you so much, Loves ❤️