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Posted: 8 years ago
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He made a mental note to rub her hands and warm them once they get out of the car. They reached their office at record speed and ran to the elevator. The doors of the elevator closed and Raghav moved towards Trisha. He took her cold hands in his and the other two turned their backs to them to give them some privacy.

Really a lovable and adorable RaTri moment Ritu, thanks a lot for this 😉 🤗
Visual update it is 👏👏
Loved the progress in the story and Chief coming out clearly in the eyes of the whole team ! Loved to see the team coming to the perfect decision.
Now, the next thing coming up is to find out the departmental store now. Looking forward to it, with some more of RaTri story begin and their realization of love !
Ritu, this is becoming an epic ⭐️⭐️
Thanks dear and Loves 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

I loved both the chapters Sweetie...i'm feeling as if the show is running in front of my eyes...So now the team knows that their Chief is innocent and they need to search for him...

I enjoyed the short Ratri moment in the elevator...😉😳
Regarding the progress of the story...its really awesome...now they have a clue and they will go ahead to find their Chief and assure his safety...😊


Thanks for the updates dear...Loved the entire updates...Thanks...👏⭐️


Thanks sooo much Manisha.. 😃
Yes, they are aware of their chief's innocence now.. so the most important thing for them now is finding him alive.. and we know that nothing is impossible for them right?😊

Keep reading, many things are going to happen now.. loved writing the ratri moment..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

He made a mental note to rub her hands and warm them once they get out of the car. They reached their office at record speed and ran to the elevator. The doors of the elevator closed and Raghav moved towards Trisha. He took her cold hands in his and the other two turned their backs to them to give them some privacy.


Really a lovable and adorable RaTri moment Ritu, thanks a lot for this 😉 🤗
Visual update it is 👏👏
Loved the progress in the story and Chief coming out clearly in the eyes of the whole team ! Loved to see the team coming to the perfect decision.
Now, the next thing coming up is to find out the departmental store now. Looking forward to it, with some more of RaTri story begin and their realization of love !
Ritu, this is becoming an epic ⭐️⭐️
Thanks dear and Loves 🤗


Aww.. thanks to you Babita..😳
Loved writing that part.. more of these moments are coming soon..😉
Yes, next stop for them is the departmental store.. let's see what they find there.. time is limited as they have to find him as soon as possible..
I'm so happy for your comment dear.. thanks and loves..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Too beautiful 👏
Loved the elevator scene, though it's a short one, but adorable enough ❤️ I respect other two for moving back to them 😉
So, Chief is no more an accused for the team. I loved how you have woven the whole plot so far Ritu, it's so natural and reflective to the reality ⭐️
Waiting for more and more to the romantic moments for RaTri the most 😉 In luv with your story, thanks dear and luv ya ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good one Ritu.. ⭐️👏
So all unfold about Chief's being innocent... The real culprit is there with the mask left...
Loved to see some cute but hurried moments of RaTri... looking forward for more... 😳
Seemed as if this is what was due... n we watched the show n another episode... Keep the good job going... 👏
Loving the track.. the team coming closer n well knitted... n all the moments captured n taken ... i felt them so natural...
Thanks dear... God bless... !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Good one Ritu.. ⭐️👏

So all unfold about Chief's being innocent... The real culprit is there with the mask left...
Loved to see some cute but hurried moments of RaTri... looking forward for more... 😳
Seemed as if this is what was due... n we watched the show n another episode... Keep the good job going... 👏
Loving the track.. the team coming closer n well knitted... n all the moments captured n taken ... i felt them so natural...
Thanks dear... God bless... !




Oh! thank u sooo much... 😳😳😳
Lots of Ratri moments are coming soon once the matter of finding chief is resolved.. keep reading..
Thanks a lot for such encouraging comments..😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 12




When the team entered the store, the first person they saw was the man they were searching for. They introduced themselves and asked him to answer some questions. The man agreed. He took them to the staff room so that they could talk in private.
"Did you make a call two days ago from the phone booth near the store? At around 8:30 in the morning?" Trisha asked him.
"Yes ma'am." The man replied.
"The man you called was our CBI chief. Why did you call him? And what did you say?"
"I said that 'vidushak' has told me to give this message to him. A bomb has been fitted on a bus whose number I can't remember right now. The bus has been hired for a picnic trip for some school students and there is no way in which the bus driver can be warned. He needs to go to the garage immediately and stop the people from getting on the bus."
"And you just delivered the message without any questions?" Trisha asked surprised.
"Ma'am he told me that he is a CBI officer. He showed me his badge. And I thought that this is important as he said there is a bomb on a bus, so.." the man said.
"Did you read his name on the badge?" Raghav asked him.
"Yes. It said Dilip Chauhan."
The team exchanged glances on hearing it.
"And did he look like this?" Raghav showed him Dilip Chauhan's photo.
"Yes! Exactly!" The man exclaimed.
"Wonderful" commented Trisha.
"Have you ever seen him since that day?" Raghav questioned.
"His employee has been visiting the store since then to buy supplies and medicines from our store pharmacy. He comes in Chauhan's car."
"Have you seen it's numberplate?" Rajbir enquired.
"No sir, why would I see the numberplate? All I know is that it was a big, black car. Omni.
Yes, it was a black omni."
"When did they last come here?"
"Today morning, around ten o clock."


"If he is buying medicines, that means Mr Chauhan is alive." Rajbir said while exiting the store. "But we don't have the number of the car. How will we track it?"
"The numberplate would have been fake, I'm sure. It would have been useless." Raghav said.
"Then? What do we do now?" Asked Swati.
"There's one way. We can see how many CCTV cameras are there in this area. Then look for the black Omni in the area around ten o'clock and try to follow it's path through the CCTV cameras on the road."


After following Raghav's plan, they found the location where the car was last spotted. After arriving at that place, they started their search and finally found the car parked in a parking lot of an under construction building. Raghav and Trisha ran towards the car, gun in their hands, but found it empty. The team then searched the whole building and finally on the topmost floor, they found a locked room. Raghav examined the door for a long time to make sure that it wasn't another trap. They broke into the room and found their chief lying in a bed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 13





Next day, 9:00 am, at the hospital in Bikram's room.
"I still can't believe that you found him this fast." Bikram said while shaking his head.
The team was gathered around his bed, again.
"Show him the note, Raghav." Trisha said.
"When we found him alive and unconscious, we called the ambulance. That's when I saw this note." Saying this, he pulled out a note from the inside pocket of his jacket.
"This is your reward for finding out so fast that your Chief is innocent. Expected no less from you, though. See, this is why you are my favorite, dear Raghav." Bikram read aloud.
"What the hell? How did he know that we knew our chief was innocent?" Bikram asked baffled.
"It's nothing new. Hasn't he always known everything?" Rajbir said while rolling his eyes.
"But how does he get all the inside informations? When we thought that Sir was Vidushak, him knowing everything made sense but now again..." Said Trisha. "Someone in the CBI is involved somehow. That is the only way he knows things that he shouldn't. Don't you think so too, Raghav?"
"Well this is the most logical explanation right now, given the circumstances." Said Raghav. "But, why is he being this stupid? I mean, the way he is leaving notes and conveying to us that he knows things that are top secret, he is only putting himself in trouble, if he is really connected to CBI somehow. I don't think he is doing all this just to create chaos and trouble, he has a motive. He's up to something. We've to find that out before he becomes successful in his agendas."
"You're right." Rajbir said while the others nodded their head.



"By the way, Sir has been admitted here, right? Which room? I think I should go and see him. And how's his wife?" Bikram asked.
"He's in the floor above this one. His wife is with him and better than before." Answered Swati.
"I think you should wait till evening and then go to meet him. You aren't perfectly okay yourself and you have to cover a floor's distance. Don't go in this morning." Trisha said and patted Bikram on his shoulder.
"I'm leaving for office right now. Chawla sir, Joshi sir and Shukla sir have called a meeting. You all can come later." She rose from her seat.
"I'll come with you." Raghav said and gathered his coat.
The other three looked at each other on hearing that and once Raghav left with Trisha, they started grinning stupidly. "Aren't they just lovely?" Swati asked, smiling dreamily.
"I really hope that this Vidushak chapter will finally end this time. Raghav needs this closure. Otherwise, he wouldn't be able to express his feelings. And that would be harmful for both of them." Said Rajbir.




P.S. ONLY RATRI scenes in coming chapters..😃
Awaiting your comments..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved both the chapters Ritu...even i thought the same when the first chapter ended...that there is definitely some plan from vidushak. ..that's why they could find him so soon...
I loved how the entire team is so well knit and all are together finding ...or rather trying to find out vidushak. ..

Waiting for your RaTri scenes dear...

Just in love with the progress of your story...thanks dear...loved it.. 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely.. Awesome n very nice progression Ritu... ⭐️👏
Very natural... seems as if its been plotted by the CVs... 😳

So.. all was set by Vidushak... n someone is there who is leaking the infos n plannings...
Nice to know that the whole team wants our RaTri to be together... n give them space... n all together they need to see them close..
Will be waiting for the " Said " moments...

Thanks dear n God bless... !

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