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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

awesome update uma. it was just soo cute. really had a smile on my face while reading the full update .Ratri going as a undercover couple to solve the case .loved to see the ccd scene soo much .Raghav saying that trisha isn't that dangerous as she looks .loved to see Ashiks comment that they don't need to act as a couple as they already look as one. loved the mangalsutra scene soo much it was really soo cute .the dining table part was really soo awesome loved Ratris love story soo much .really u have narrated the scene so wonderfully. finally the last lipstick scene was really soo wonderful it really showed raghavs feelings towards trisha thanks u soo much for this awesome update. really loved reading it a lot.

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

So sorry for being late Uma, i just logged in and saw that U posted the update.

I will first review yours then will go to other threads, loves ❤️

I shall try to be on time from next time dear 😳

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

RaTri as undercover couple, and Raghav smirking, what else do we need 😉😆

Lovely update Uma 👏👏

I just loved Raghav teasing and irritating Trisha, and then put around the mangalsutra Wow !!! Trisha, smiles plus blushed ❤️

Loved to hear Ashik saying that they do not have to act like couple, as they are behaving like ones 😆 Awesome narration of Raghav smirking every time and Trisha getting... 😉

The story that Raghav created 😉 What a false and every one listened to it as if he is saying the truth ! Everyone loved it, except Trisha, who wants a detail as to why he made that story 😆

Too awesome Uma ⭐️⭐️

Both in one room 😉 Raghav act like sleeping and saw her getting ready ! What a fab and loving scene it was ! Loved Trisha looking at him, blushing and leaving. Raghav touching the lipstick with his lips and...

Beautified persona Uma, just loved it and will eagerly wait for the next. Thanks dear and loves ❤️

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Uma i'll be able to review by tmrrw morning or late night...i hope its ok with you...😊

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
thanks for the update Uma...an awesome one as usual👏
Nice plot of the case and both going as undercover husband wife
They naturally behaved as husband wife😆 best dialogue sweetie...i loved it...

Thanks Manisha. They unintentionally behave like a couple normally. And Ashik being a psychiatrist could access it in one glance.

The story which Raghav narrated, so filmy and cute...irritated Trisha...😉

They always end up fighting at small things and then smiling...so cute moments Uma😊

The way you pen down the description of her beauty is lovely dear👏👏👏

Thanks a lot once again, waiting eagerly to see how the story progresses...
Thank you Manisha
Loved it👏👏

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Shaina744
Love the story a lot... Raghav called Trisha as his wife and Trisha felt so happy... So nicely Trisha convence Dilip sr,... Raghav gave Trisha his mother's mangalsutra ...wao... Raghav narrated his love story...khun se likha hua khat!! And after that their argument for bed. As always Raghav won this...Raghav kissed Trisha's lipstick... Waoo...
Such a romantic story it is... Tnx a lot fr the story... Extremely sry fr late review... Actually was busy in puja and went to my friend's birthday party... Tnx a lot fr the awsm story

Thank you Shaina

Glad you like it

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Swatishubh
Cute update Uma 👏
Thanks
Loved the undercover couple and like they behaved, they were not supposed to do much of acting 😉
They unintentionally behave as one

Nice to see the noble purpose they took and carried on with their mission on. Loved Raghav's story and later Trisha bursting on him 😆
Raghav never leaves a chance to tease her
Beautiful looking Trisha made him simply falling for her every time. Loved him peeping and watching. And then envying the lipstick 😉 Loved it to the core as if he wants to be a lipstick from now!
Thanks!
Loved the manglasutra scene so much and the way he put on around her neck, it was a treat to watch. A sign from the Almighty. And Trisha blushed and enjoyed this.
Unknowingly her feelings came out
Lovely going dear, loved it and will wait now the case in progress. Thanks dear for this loving update!
Luv ya ❤️🤗

Thank you

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Awesome update Uma... ⭐️👏

Loved the undercover couple... n Dilip Sir relying on Trisha ... gave the permission... Hope all goes well... !
Let's see what happens next
Raghav did not leave a time to tease Trisha n as a whole he was actually making her at ease n feeling good inside... 😉 Manlgasutra scene is the perfect example to this... 👏
Yes excatly that was what going inside him.
Nice story made by him... Love marriage n dont know what else in their life... 😆... all making Trisha banging her head on the wall n saying ... why Raghav... 😛
He never leave a chance to tease her
Nice moves... one room sharing... Raghav smirking... acting if he is sleeping n enjoying the beauty getting ready... n then lipstick... 😛 😉
That's my favourite part
Good one... i enjoyed it a lots dear... but sorry for being late... I logged out when you posted this one... so now only logged in n ...😳
Thank you bhai

Thanks for this beautiful story in making... God bless you... !!!

Thanks so much for this comment

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: bloomie
so sweeet
oh my ...ashik was right they actually act like a married couple
what a love story
love letters written in blood
for a moment there
I thought trisha would say she almost got raghav arrested
awesome update
cont soon

Thanks dear

Though Raghav was irritating her she kind of enjoys it in heart though she won't show it out