Ratri TS! Tere Bin! Discontinued - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start uma. simply loved it .it was soo emotional with all the feelings come out soo wonderfully. really loved it .so trisha is no more and raghav is devastated after that and thinks that he is responsible for her death .you have showed his condition soo beautifully. really this update bought tears in my eyes .loved to see the teams concern for raghav and they taking help from Dr kamat to take him out of trauma. loved to see them missing third old joyful raghav who now rarely talks to each other .waiting to know what has happened to Trisha . thanks soo much for this awesome update dear .really loved it soo much .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love the update a lot... So emotional update it's... Trisha s no more!!!it's shocking... Can feel Raghav's situation... Raghav s blaming himself for the horrible incident... That Raghav who just couldn't think a day without seeing her now he had spent a year ...it's too difficult... Hope Trisha s alive... Because no one had seen her dead body... Want the joyful Raghav back...
It's awsm Uma... Tears were flowing from my eyes during reading this... Love the title too... Will wait fr next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesome start uma di .really loved it soo much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Deeply felt Raghav n his situation at this time of phase... ! He is depressed as his love is gone... n he blames himself as he forced her to go there...
Nice but a sad starting... ! Liked every part of narration Uma.. very sincerely you have used every detail n words properly showing the expressions... ⭐️👏
I loved Raghav n Trisha convos in the flashback... n the way he convinced her to go..
Rarely he knew that this was the last time he was looking at her while seeing her off.. ! Now this is a reality but one thing is there... Investigations only gave the details of the dead.. but the faces were not clear.. so might be that Trisha is alive... 😳


Raghav: ek saal ho chukha hai trisha tumare bina. muhjse aur pardhash nai hota. Laut aao trisha. Just come back.
He leaned on her portrait. Fresh tears started forming in his eyes. How he wished for one chance just one chance to confess his feelings for her.

What a pity... he is talking to her pic what he wanted to tell her in personal... ! Loved his feelings so pure... n i felt for him n his inner struggle... ! Loved it n waiting to know more... as speculations are on that she must be undercover... 😉
Hoping for it.. will wait for the next... Good job Uma... Keep going my sis.. !!!

God bless you... n you have done every justice to the update.. .! Showing Raghav's POV is not an easy task... you have done a wonderful job... ! ⭐️👏
Thanks... !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Sorry for being late Uma, actually not keeping slightly well...was very tired the whole day...
Awesome start to the story dear, the way you started off making the entire team realise about her demise, so subtle and so natural👏
Raghav's plight is well shown by you my dear...the way he talks to her portrait...really felt for him.
The flashback was so good to start with their usual tiffs but ended with a disaster for us and for Raghav.

Loved it sweetie...please continue soon...thanks for this my dear👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Why have U deleted the update ?? 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Az07



Np I am bit nervous because of story line


Please don't be nervous Uma... i know you will rock.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: babita..

Why have U deleted the update ?? 😭


Uma why have you deleted it dear?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


Uma why have you deleted it dear?


Manisha it took a lot of stress for me to update this story even days I had to work on. I was nervous and anxious when u guys only didn't turned up I am a bit hurt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07


Manisha it took a lot of stress for me to update this story even days I had to work on. I was nervous and anxious when u guys only didn't turned up I am a bit hurt


I have given my reason in your other story thread sweetheart, i was not well...down with viral. please forgive me if possible and please continue...my request😭

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