Ratri TS! Tere Bin! Discontinued - Page 10

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

This is absolutely a heart felt beginning Uma 👏

thank you!

Loved it to the core! It was a pathetic and a sad day that Raghav forced Trisha for Chandigarh. But never in his dreams he ever thought of it.

life is always unpredictable. you never know what's going to happen next.

Trisha was right he is knowing her value in her absence.

sometimes you realise value of someone who is close only when you have lost them.

He, today is shattered and not able to speak much and one year has passed as if it's destined.

the incident have shaken him. changed him a lot as his life used to revolve around her.

I wish she comes back as the faces of the dead were not properly detected. And more so, cos his love is not so little that she will leave him and he will be waiting all his life! Even not, then too he will be waiting for her all his life with her memories within him!

what is going to happen i can't reveal much. her memories make him continue to live.

I just cud not take that he blames himself for her demise. Very emotional, yet a dense update with a beginning so sad and more to come!

he was the one who forced her to leave so after this incident he has to blame himself. yes it will be sad

Uma, this is too lovely a start sweetie, i loved the narration and the feelings expressed!

You have given a beautiful and an emotional pic of a reality so bitter!

thank you so much. it was very difficult for me to write this part. glad you like it.

Thanks dear and luv ya ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Rr2000

Loved it dear
Is trisha really no more or undercover
Whatever it is it's really a very emotional story


Plz update next part soon just not able to control myself


Awesome dear

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome start uma. simply loved it .it was soo emotional with all the feelings come out soo wonderfully. really loved it

thank you tasha

.so trisha is no more and raghav is devastated after that and thinks that he is responsible for her death .you have showed his condition soo beautifully. really this update bought tears in my eyes

if i could bring tears i your eyes then i think i was able to convey the emotions

.loved to see the teams concern for raghav and they taking help from Dr kamat to take him out of trauma. loved to see them missing third old joyful raghav who now rarely talks to each other

team do care for each other. they are in a big misery. they have not only lost trisha but almost raghav too.

.waiting to know what has happened to Trisha . thanks soo much for this awesome update dear .really loved it soo much .

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Love the update a lot... So emotional update it's...

thanks shaina

Trisha s no more!!!it's shocking... Can feel Raghav's situation...

i am glad i was able to convey his feelings

Raghav s blaming himself for the horrible incident... That Raghav who just couldn't think a day without seeing her now he had spent a year ...it's too difficult...

life is so unpredictable

Hope Trisha s alive... Because no one had seen her dead body... Want the joyful Raghav back...
It's awsm Uma... Tears were flowing from my eyes during reading this... Love the title too... Will wait fr next part...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Deeply felt Raghav n his situation at this time of phase... ! He is depressed as his love is gone... n he blames himself as he forced her to go there...

it was unfortunate and unpredictable. happens in life.

Nice but a sad starting... ! Liked every part of narration Uma.. very sincerely you have used every detail n words properly showing the expressions... ⭐️👏

thank you bro. it took days for me to come up with this part.

I loved Raghav n Trisha convos in the flashback... n the way he convinced her to go..

Rarely he knew that this was the last time he was looking at her while seeing her off.. ! Now this is a reality but one thing is there... Investigations only gave the details of the dead.. but the faces were not clear.. so might be that Trisha is alive... 😳

can't reveal what had happened. but yes this time the team and raghav is facing the loss of trisha. very difficult and tough for them.

Raghav: ek saal ho chukha hai trisha tumare bina. muhjse aur pardhash nai hota. Laut aao trisha. Just come back.
He leaned on her portrait. Fresh tears started forming in his eyes. How he wished for one chance just one chance to confess his feelings for her.

What a pity... he is talking to her pic what he wanted to tell her in personal... ! Loved his feelings so pure... n i felt for him n his inner struggle... !

time just waits for no one. sometimes somethings had to be said on time.

Loved it n waiting to know more... as speculations are on that she must be undercover... 😉

Hoping for it.. will wait for the next... Good job Uma... Keep going my sis.. !!!

thank you bro

God bless you... n you have done every justice to the update.. .! Showing Raghav's POV is not an easy task... you have done a wonderful job... ! ⭐️👏

thank you bro. i am glad i was able to stand up according to the expectations.

Thanks... !!!!

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Sorry for being late Uma, actually not keeping slightly well...was very tired the whole day...

i didn't know manisha you were unwell. sorry. i was very nervous and anxious with this part. was waiting for your reply.

Awesome start to the story dear, the way you started off making the entire team realise about her demise, so subtle and so natural👏

the team is like a family. so they all are broken with trisha's sudden death.

Raghav's plight is well shown by you my dear...the way he talks to her portrait...really felt for him.

thank you manisha it was difficult for me to show his inner plight. glad u like it.

The flashback was so good to start with their usual tiffs but ended with a disaster for us and for Raghav.

it happens life is unpredictable.

Loved it sweetie...please continue soon...thanks for this my dear👏👏

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Please don't be nervous Uma... i know you will rock.👏

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

I just loved it Dear Uma...👏👏

Originally posted by: babita..

Uma, first of all, Raghav's looks in the first pic are making me nervous 😉 Should i read or hide myself from those killing eyes ❤️ 😆

ok babita next time i will make sure i won't come up with thse pictures so that you will be able to concentrate reading😆

Nice update and so emotionally touched, making all your readers 👏

thank you babita

Raghav's life has become still after Trisha and he blames himself which is the worst part. I wonder how things changed in one day and he lost his love ! But to a relief, the faces were not clear of the dead so.. 😳 may be ??

he had been depending upon her ever since she came into life. her sudden death has affected him. she was someone whom he had to call his own in this world. life is unpredictable.

Now the flashback ! It's so loving to read the convo and Raghav sending her to Chandigarh on her mother's wish, otherwise he would have never done that. The love was there but never told by anyone of them ! I bow to your narration and every time U mentioned how Trisha shook her head and raghav insisted on her leaving, though he never wanted that. ⭐️

thanks babita. they both have that love for each other but didn't open up. the ultimate thing in this story is somethings should be said on time. otherwise you will not be able to do so ever.

Loved how the whole team is sad over one year has passed and the saddest part is that Raghav has become a silent and no more that raghav now.

they are like a family and the incident have shaken them so badl

His eyes search for her, his heart bleeds for her, his skin burns for her and his soul is dead as she is not with him ! Loved the last scene with him holding her pic and remembering her and ..

Too hard to write more. So heart wrenching and very soft update. Wanna know what really happened to Trisha, and if she is alive !

you have to wait and watch what's going to happen next. raghav is totally living with trisha's memories.

Thanks Uma for this lovely and emotional update, so wonderfully written and so thoughtfully penned down ! Loves ❤️