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eagerly waiting for this one uma .do update soon
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PART 1



SUBTITLE: Tere Bina Zindagi Zindagi Toh Nahi!!!!


10:30 am: CBI office - conference hall

Rajbir, bikram and swathi was busy in there own works. Dr. Aarathy entered the hall and wished everyone.
Swathi: hi aarathy! Tum yahan iss waqath ?
Aarathy: actually mein aap logo ko invite karne aayi hai . Kal meri ghar mein ek chotha sa party hai. Aap sab ko aana hoga. Waise raghav kahan hai? Abhi takh aayi nahi hai kya?
Rajbir: woh aaj chuthi pe hai.
Aarathy: chuthi pe hai? Lekin kyun?
Bikram: bhool gayi hai kya? Aaj trisha ki barsi hai.
Aarathy's face fell down. She had completely forgotten about that.
Swathi: yakeen nahi ho raha hai. Ek saal ho chukha hai. Trisha ke bina.
Rajbir: uske bina bahuth adhurasa mehasoos hota hai. Hum sab kitne enjoy karthe the ek saath kaam karthey. Hasi masakh kitne ache mahool dhe lagtha nahi ki hum bahuth kaam karahi hai.
It has been one year since trisha had passed away. The entire CBI team just couldn't digest the fact there bossy and sweet Trisha is no more in this world. The incident has shaken them. Raghav was the one who was affected the most. They knew he blames himself for her demise. Whatever happened was destined no one could change it. But raghav just couldn't cope up himself with this fact. After trisha's death he is no more the raghav everyone knew. He had become unusually quiet and reserved. He rarely speaks. Even if he speaks it will be related to work. He never jokes or teases anyone. It looks like the team had not only lost Trisha but also Raghav along with that incident.

Raghav's residence

Raghav was lying down in his bed and looking at Trisha's photo. One year! It has been one year ever since she left him. How he missed her bossy tantrums, friendly care and affection. Her desperate warnings when he teases her or irritates her. His life used to revolve around her. He use to enjoy his work along with her. Her presence makes him forget his pain due to his past. He always felt of being belonged with her. In her absence he realised she is the one who actually brings out the cool and jovial Raghav. His life has become so mechanical without her. How he wished at least once he should have confessed his feelings for her. He still remember that fateful day.

...FLASHBACK - ONE YEAR AGO...


CBI OFFICE - TRISHA'S CABIN

It has been late night and only raghav and trisha was left back in the office. They both were doing paper works regarding the recent cases the team have solved.
Raghav: trisha parso tumari chehere bhai ki shaadi hai na.
Trisha: ha raghav. Chandigarh mein hai. Mera poora parivaar wahan hai.
Raghav: tume nahi jana hai kya?
Trisha: raghav hum itne dino se museum robbery aur murder case mein busy the. Muhey sach much mein nahi lagtha tha case itni jaldi solve ho jayegi. Issliye mein apni family ko shaadi ke liye bheja.
Raghav: ab toh case solve hogaya hai. Aur hamari pass koi pending cases bhi nahi hai. Muhey lagtha hai tume shaadi attend karna hoga.
Trisha: nahi raghav koi emergency aayi toh?
Raghav: hum sab hai na. Hum samalenga. Dho dino ki toh baath hai trisha. Shaadi toh zindagi mein ek baar ho jatha hai. Tumara bhai bahuth khush ho jaogey jum tume apni shaadi mein dekhkar.
Trisha: muhey cheif se baath karna hoga. Agar woh manjaye toh dekhloongi.
She spoke with the chief and he granted her 2 days leave as usually she never takes much leave.
Trisha: ok! Ab toh dekhna padega koi flight milegi ya nahi. Tum bhi na!
She shook her head. Raghav smiled. He knew its not that trisha didn't want to attend her cousin brother's wedding, she being an introvert is never comfortable in all these social function.
Trisha: kal subah dus bhaje ka flight mila hai.
Raghav: ok fine. Tum jaldi kaam khatam karke jao aur packing karlo.
Trisha rolled her eyes showing her irritation antics. He smiled.
Raghav: aur kal subah mein tume airport drop karlethi hoon.
Trisha: kyun?
Raghav: har baar counter question karna zaroori hai kya?
Trisha didn't speak further. But she was happy that she could meet him before leaving.
Frankly he didn't want to miss a chance meeting her tomorrow. Otherwise he have to wait 2 days to meet her if he drop her in airport its only a one day gap. He himself chuckled that he can't stay without seeing trisha. If only her mother has not requested him to convince trisha to attend marriage he would have never forced her to attend the wedding. { before leaving to Chandigarh trisha's mom had spoke with raghav and requested him if the museum case they were handling at the moment finishes before the marriage date, somehow convince trisha to attend wedding.}

Next day morning

Raghav had picked up trisha from her residence and they both were on the way to airport. Trisha was giving work related instructions to raghav and to others through phone.
Raghav: trisha kaam hojayega jab se tum aayi ho bus kaam related baathe karthey rahthe ho. Dho dino ki toh baath hai.
Trisha: tum toh muhsey baath math karo. Tum mumma ki wajahse muhey force kiya na.
He looked at her astonishingly. How did she knew that?
Trisha: aise maath dekho muhey. Tumari tarah mind reading expert toh nahi, kuch saal hogaya na hum saath mein kaam karthe toh kuch cheeze apne aap pata chaltha hai.
Raghav smiled.
Raghav: sirf isliye nahi trisha, dho din toh sahi tumare bina hum sabko sukoon toh milegi.
Trisha: what you mean raghav? Mein kya koi Monster hoon kya?
Raghav: ab tum apne apko pehchana hai toh mein kya bolo?
Trisha: how dare you raghav? Dekho jab mein nahi hongi na tab tume meri value samjhaungi.
She turned her face angrily. Raghav smiled.
Raghav: pata hai jab tum gusse mein ho tum bahuth khoobsurat dikhthi ho.
Trisha: zyaada patane ki koshish math karo. Aur aage dekhe gadhi chalo.
Raghav saw that she was secretly smiling to his comment though she didn't show it out.

Airport

Raghav got trisha's luggage and accompanied her till the entrance.
Raghav: wahan paunchthey hi phone karna apna khyal rakhna
Trisha: tum bhi.
Raghav was standing there till she left from there.

After reaching Chandigarh trisha had called raghav and informed about her safe arrival. After that trisha was not able to talk with raghav on phone as she was too busy with her cousin's wedding.

On trisha's cousin brothers wedding day eve; everyone were working together at conference hall along with the news channels on. What news followed in it no one ever expected. There has been bomb blast in various parts of Chandigarh. And unfortunately trisha's cousin's brothers wedding hall was one among the area were bomb blast had happened shocking everyone. The CBI team had contacted immediately the CBI officers from Chandigarh branch to inspect the wedding area. The entire area had been badly affected by the bomb blast and people had died on spot. There bodies had burnt badly and is not in a state to even identify.
The entire team was too numb react. It was too difficult for them to digest the fact that Trisha passed away. Raghav was too shocked to react. He couldn't believe that his trisha is no more. He didn't speak to anyone for more days after that incident. And he buried himself in his bedroom refusing to come out. He was blaming himself for sending trisha to attend the wedding. She didn't want to leave to Chandigarh. If only he had not forced her she would have been alive. The team just couldn't watch his state post trisha's death. They didn't knew how to console him and bring him back to normal state. They approached Dr.Kammath and his counselling sessions had helped raghav a lot. Initially he just use to refuse for the sessions but Dr.Kammath just couldn't leave him at his wish seeing his mental trauma.
Slowly raghav started from recovering from the shock. He joined back to office but very rarely he speaks. Because of trisha's death raghav had to take over the charge of team. But he was no more the raghav whom everyone knew. The cool and jovial raghav was never seen after trisha's death.

...Flashback Ended!...

Raghav was looking at trisha's portrait in his room. He never expected that in his life like his parents one day he will lose his trisha. She was the one who was close to his heart after his parents. He just can't believe that he is destined to be alone. He always loved trisha. From the moment he saw her. But never opened up. Mainly because of his past. Though she never voiced it out he knew too she too had same feelings for him. He should have at least once opened up about his feelings for her. Every moment he is regretting for not doing that. Trisha was right he is knowing her value in her absence. He caressed her portrait.
Raghav: ek saal ho chukha hai trisha tumare bina. muhjse aur pardhash nai hota. Laut aao trisha. Just come back.
He leaned on her portrait. Fresh tears started forming in his eyes. How he wished for one chance just one chance to confess his feelings for her.

Ps: i always have written stories from trisha's side. First time i am trying it from Raghav's emotional plight. I hope i did justice to this part. If I failed to apology in advance.


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SUBTITLE: Tere Bina Zindagi Zindagi Toh Nahi!!!!


10:30 am: CBI office - conference hall

Rajbir, bikram and swathi was busy in there own works. Dr. Aarathy entered the hall and wished everyone.
Swathi: hi aarathy! Tum yahan iss waqath ?
Aarathy: actually mein aap logo ko invite karne aayi hai . Kal meri ghar mein ek chotha sa party hai. Aap sab ko aana hoga. Waise raghav kahan hai? Abhi takh aayi nahi hai kya?
Rajbir: woh aaj chuthi pe hai.
Aarathy: chuthi pe hai? Lekin kyun?
Bikram: bhool gayi hai kya? Aaj trisha ki barsi hai.
Aarathy's face fell down. She had completely forgotten about that.
Swathi: yakeen nahi ho raha hai. Ek saal ho chukha hai. Trisha ke bina.
Rajbir: uske bina bahuth adhurasa mehasoos hota hai. Hum sab kitne enjoy karthe the ek saath kaam karthey. Hasi masakh kitne ache mahool dhe lagtha nahi ki hum bahuth kaam karahi hai.
It has been one year since trisha had passed away. The entire CBI team just couldn't digest the fact there bossy and sweet Trisha is no more in this world. The incident has shaken them. Raghav was the one who was affected the most. They knew he blames himself for her demise. Whatever happened was destined no one could change it. But raghav just couldn't cope up himself with this fact. After trisha's death he is no more the raghav everyone knew. He had become unusually quiet and reserved. He rarely speaks. Even if he speaks it will be related to work. He never jokes or teases anyone. It looks like the team had not only lost Trisha but also Raghav along with that incident.

Raghav's residence

Raghav was lying down in his bed and looking at Trisha's photo. One year! It has been one year ever since she left him. How he missed her bossy tantrums, friendly care and affection. Her desperate warnings when he teases her or irritates her. His life used to revolve around her. He use to enjoy his work along with her. Her presence makes him forget his pain due to his past. He always felt of being belonged with her. In her absence he realised she is the one who actually brings out the cool and jovial Raghav. His life has become so mechanical without her. How he wished at least once he should have confessed his feelings for her. He still remember that fateful day.

...FLASHBACK - ONE YEAR AGO...


CBI OFFICE - TRISHA'S CABIN

It has been late night and only raghav and trisha was left back in the office. They both were doing paper works regarding the recent cases the team have solved.
Raghav: trisha parso tumari chehere bhai ki shaadi hai na.
Trisha: ha raghav. Chandigarh mein hai. Mera poora parivaar wahan hai.
Raghav: tume nahi jana hai kya?
Trisha: raghav hum itne dino se museum robbery aur murder case mein busy the. Muhey sach much mein nahi lagtha tha case itni jaldi solve ho jayegi. Issliye mein apni family ko shaadi ke liye bheja.
Raghav: ab toh case solve hogaya hai. Aur hamari pass koi pending cases bhi nahi hai. Muhey lagtha hai tume shaadi attend karna hoga.
Trisha: nahi raghav koi emergency aayi toh?
Raghav: hum sab hai na. Hum samalenga. Dho dino ki toh baath hai trisha. Shaadi toh zindagi mein ek baar ho jatha hai. Tumara bhai bahuth khush ho jaogey jum tume apni shaadi mein dekhkar.
Trisha: muhey cheif se baath karna hoga. Agar woh manjaye toh dekhloongi.
She spoke with the chief and he granted her 2 days leave as usually she never takes much leave.
Trisha: ok! Ab toh dekhna padega koi flight milegi ya nahi. Tum bhi na!
She shook her head. Raghav smiled. He knew its not that trisha didn't want to attend her cousin brother's wedding, she being an introvert is never comfortable in all these social function.
Trisha: kal subah dus bhaje ka flight mila hai.
Raghav: ok fine. Tum jaldi kaam khatam karke jao aur packing karlo.
Trisha rolled her eyes showing her irritation antics. He smiled.
Raghav: aur kal subah mein tume airport drop karlethi hoon.
Trisha: kyun?
Raghav: har baar counter question karna zaroori hai kya?
Trisha didn't speak further. But she was happy that she could meet him before leaving.
Frankly he didn't want to miss a chance meeting her tomorrow. Otherwise he have to wait 2 days to meet her if he drop her in airport its only a one day gap. He himself chuckled that he can't stay without seeing trisha. If only her mother has not requested him to convince trisha to attend marriage he would have never forced her to attend the wedding. { before leaving to Chandigarh trisha's mom had spoke with raghav and requested him if the museum case they were handling at the moment finishes before the marriage date, somehow convince trisha to attend wedding.}

Next day morning

Raghav had picked up trisha from her residence and they both were on the way to airport. Trisha was giving work related instructions to raghav and to others through phone.
Raghav: trisha kaam hojayega jab se tum aayi ho bus kaam related baathe karthey rahthe ho. Dho dino ki toh baath hai.
Trisha: tum toh muhsey baath math karo. Tum mumma ki wajahse muhey force kiya na.
He looked at her astonishingly. How did she knew that?
Trisha: aise maath dekho muhey. Tumari tarah mind reading expert toh nahi, kuch saal hogaya na hum saath mein kaam karthe toh kuch cheeze apne aap pata chaltha hai.
Raghav smiled.
Raghav: sirf isliye nahi trisha, dho din toh sahi tumare bina hum sabko sukoon toh milegi.
Trisha: what you mean raghav? Mein kya koi Monster hoon kya?
Raghav: ab tum apne apko pehchana hai toh mein kya bolo?
Trisha: how dare you raghav? Dekho jab mein nahi hongi na tab tume meri value samjhaungi.
She turned her face angrily. Raghav smiled.
Raghav: pata hai jab tum gusse mein ho tum bahuth khoobsurat dikhthi ho.
Trisha: zyaada patane ki koshish math karo. Aur aage dekhe gadhi chalo.
Raghav saw that she was secretly smiling to his comment though she didn't show it out.

Airport

Raghav got trisha's luggage and accompanied her till the entrance.
Raghav: wahan paunchthey hi phone karna apna khyal rakhna
Trisha: tum bhi.
Raghav was standing there till she left from there.

After reaching Chandigarh trisha had called raghav and informed about her safe arrival. After that trisha was not able to talk with raghav on phone as she was too busy with her cousin's wedding.

On trisha's cousin brothers wedding day eve; everyone were working together at conference hall along with the news channels on. What news followed in it no one ever expected. There has been bomb blast in various parts of Chandigarh. And unfortunately trisha's cousin's brothers wedding hall was one among the area were bomb blast had happened shocking everyone. The CBI team had contacted immediately the CBI officers from Chandigarh branch to inspect the wedding area. The entire area had been badly affected by the bomb blast and people had died on spot. There bodies had burnt badly and is not in a state to even identify.
The entire team was too numb react. It was too difficult for them to digest the fact that Trisha passed away. Raghav was too shocked to react. He couldn't believe that his trisha is no more. He didn't speak to anyone for more days after that incident. And he buried himself in his bedroom refusing to come out. He was blaming himself for sending trisha to attend the wedding. She didn't want to leave to Chandigarh. If only he had not forced her she would have been alive. The team just couldn't watch his state post trisha's death. They didn't knew how to console him and bring him back to normal state. They approached Dr.Kammath and his counselling sessions had helped raghav a lot. Initially he just use to refuse for the sessions but Dr.Kammath just couldn't leave him at his wish seeing his mental trauma.
Slowly raghav started from recovering from the shock. He joined back to office but very rarely he speaks. Because of trisha's death raghav had to take over the charge of team. But he was no more the raghav whom everyone knew. The cool and jovial raghav was never seen after trisha's death.

...Flashback Ended!...

Raghav was looking at trisha's portrait in his room. He never expected that in his life like his parents one day he will lose his trisha. She was the one who was close to his heart after his parents. He just can't believe that he is destined to be alone. He always loved trisha. From the moment he saw her. But never opened up. Mainly because of his past. Though she never voiced it out he knew too she too had same feelings for him. He should have at least once opened up about his feelings for her. Every moment he is regretting for not doing that. Trisha was right he is knowing her value in her absence. He caressed her portrait.
Raghav: ek saal ho chukha hai trisha tumare bina. muhjse aur pardhash nai hota. Laut aao trisha. Just come back.
He leaned on her portrait. Fresh tears started forming in his eyes. How he wished for one chance just one chance to confess his feelings for her.

Ps: i always have written stories from trisha's side. First time i am trying it from Raghav's emotional plight. I hope i did justice to this part. If I failed to apology in advance.


Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
😊

wow..

My take..
Trisha escaped and is now undercover...

Loved the 1st part...!!

Love how you narrate feelings..
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear off to read it
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will review by tmrrw dear...is it ok?
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

will review by tmrrw dear...is it ok?



Np I am bit nervous because of story line
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
This is absolutely a heart felt beginning Uma 👏
Loved it to the core! It was a pathetic and a sad day that Raghav forced Trisha for Chandigarh. But never in his dreams he ever thought of it.
Trisha was right he is knowing her value in her absence.

He, today is shattered and not able to speak much and one year has passed as if it's destined. I wish she comes back as the faces of the dead were not properly detected. And more so, cos his love is not so little that she will leave him and he will be waiting all his life! Even not, then too he will be waiting for her all his life with her memories within him!
I just cud not take that he blames himself for her demise. Very emotional, yet a dense update with a beginning so sad and more to come! Uma, this is too lovely a start sweetie, i loved the narration and the feelings expressed!
You have given a beautiful and an emotional pic of a reality so bitter!
Thanks dear and luv ya ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it dear
Is trisha really no more or undercover
Whatever it is it's really a very emotional story


Plz update next part soon just not able to control myself


Awesome dear
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Which app did u used to make this banner dear
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Awesome update dear just read it ,will give a detailed review in a while

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