Ratri TS!Manzil Pyaar Ki! last part pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice beginning to a pyar ki manzil 👏👏
Loved the bond the team takes every where and the Holi party seemed only an example that the team is so different when not at work, they are after all human beings who have right to enjoy and get entertained.
The bhaang that raghav brought for Trisha changed their lives forever. The intimacy they had was not flashing in to their minds as real but as an imagination, I wish they would have talked at that time only.
Nothing is written that's not dignified Uma, it's humane. The people U love come across this and this is what RaTri shared. Things were not in their hands as they were totally drunk.
The time passed and the weakness engrossed Trisha that worried almost every one including Raghav. And the Lucknow trip revealed her that she is pregnant.
A very awkward, embarrassed situation for her when the reports come as positive. But she has to move on to Raghav now and have to tell him but the imaginations and reality were the same.
Loved how she embraced him and he in turn so worried embraced her too. Loved their bond so special and full of love !
A difficult time for Trisha to tell Raghav about their baby now. Hard to tell but she will have to. I'll wait for how Trisha moves ahead from now and what decision she takes. Obviously telling raghav about the incident and it's outcome is so necessary, but how this is what will be in wait.
I wish Raghav comes up as a mature and responsible man to claim his baby and rescue Trisha from getting embarrassed in front of the society and marry her.
But shall wait what U have planned to pen down Uma ! Lovely start, and interesting to know what follows next.
Thanks and huggies ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
such a awesome update dear really loved it soo much .the teams bonding is sooo nice .all of them together coming and celebrating holi. loved to see their bonding soo much .loved raghav and trisha playing holi together. they were enjoying soo much loved how raghav secretly gave trisha bhaang to drink .soo both list their senses after drinking bhaang. loved the way the confessed their love for each other and then married by applying sindhoor in trisha maang .loved the flash back they both started getting what happened last night when they came to senses .loved to see trisha and Raghav thinking what have they dreaming .loved to see their embarrassment. so they went to solve a case and trisha got to know of her health .loved to see raghavs concern for trisha seeing her health .so now trisha is pregnant with raghavs kid .hope raghav is mature and responsible and takes care of trisha .loved the story soo much loved it soo much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Teaser

Raghav was so worried seeing Trisha fainted in front of him. He carried her in his arms and made her lie down. Being a doctor himself he could make out that Trisha had became so pale these days. He checked her pulse. He realised that her pulse rate is high than normal
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Cute teaser... Raghav worried for her...hope they are soon united.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U have shown Raghav as a doctor too ??
Nice teaser and very emotional one. Will wait to see RaTri scenes and Trisha's condition.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please update the next part soon loves
Nd I am new to this forum so I don't know much about posting please help by guiding
Regards 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wao such a nice teaser trisha fainted in front of raghav liftong het in his arms and you have prsented raghav as a doctor too i just love it ,😳 please update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice start to the story... I liked the occasion chosen by you... holi and the way Trisha was made to attend the party was nice... she always tries to avoid parties...

The application of colours by both of them and then Trisha being given bhaang by Raghav... so genuine... might happen on a festival like holi... cute..
The way they both expressed their love for each other under the effect of bhaang and then their marriage... well written by you...
The flashes with both of them after waking up are expected... none of them remembered anything that happened on that day...
Everyone noticing her weakness, they all are concerned for each other... well presented...
OMG Trisha is pregnant and her dreams and flashes are true... eager to know what happens next...
I'm sure they both will be together in the end...
No dear the entire update was mind blowing and you don't need to be nervous at all... Loved every bit of it..
Waiting for the next part...


Thank you
I was very nervous writing this story
I felt very much undignified somehow
But relaxed that you guys didn't feel that way.
I always loved Holi and bhang related scenes as in my place we don't have Holi. Wanted to write about it with Ratri
Yes Trisha is pregnant now how she is going to handle it you have to wait and c
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm update dear... Love it a lot. RaTri's marriage on a colourful festival... Waoo...Unknowingly they confess their love for each other...so now Trisha s pregnant... She had accepted the flashes of the intimacy with Raghav as her dream bt after knowing about her pregnancy she feels that it was not her dream...feeling worried about Trisha... Waiting eagerly fr the next part... Update soon... 😳 thanku sooo much for this Awsm update 👍🏼


I always loved Holi festival I am a Malayali and we don't have Holi festival here in Kerala. I was nervous to write this story on this plot. But glad that you guys liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Off to read it, today very bad net with me Uma.

Sorry if i could not post the review, will come back tomorrow deffo. Hope U understand my problem dear 🤗


No problem

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