Ratri TS!Manzil Pyaar Ki! last part pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Nice and an interesting banner Uma👏👏

Really will wait to know the story line soon !



Thanks will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely banner dear .really loved it
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Waooo... Awsm banner dear... Really lovely...upload the part soon...
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Teaser 2

Trisha saw a worried Raghav. The keen observer he is had understood she is not fine. Even though she assured everyone that she is. Trisha could make out his concern for her. She just couldn't control her emotions. She just hugged him tightly. Raghav was shocked initially by her movement but he too hugged her back. He was worried of something happening to her. He just can't survive without her.
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awesome teaser dear .loved it a lot
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Part 1

The entire team had gathered together in the lunch hall. The team had solved a very complicated case of the murder of a famous film star. They were having a pizza party in the office for solving the case.
Raghav saw an eye to eye conversation between swathi, rajbir and bikram.
Raghav: kya chal rahi tum logo ke beech? Kya bolna chathi ho?
Trisha smiled and looked at them.
Swathi: wo kya hai na kal holi hai aur mere ghar mein holi party rakhi hai. Aap sab logo ko aana hoga.
Rajbir: bahuth mazaa aajayega. Hume jaana hoga.
Trisha: i am sorry swathi mein nahi aaapanonga. Tum log enjoy karo.
Swathi: kyun tume kal koi program hai?
Trisha: nahi aisa nahi hai.
Bikram: ab toh tume aana hoga. Please trisha.
Raghav understood that trisha is hesitating only because she is not comfortable in crowd. The introvert she is.
Raghav: trisha tume rango se kya problem hai?
Trisha: what non sense? Muchey rango se kya problem ho saktha hai?
Raghav: toh phir tum holi party mein aane mein itna dar kyun rahi ho?
Rajbir, bikram and swathi smiled seeing there usual tiffs.
Trisha: ok fine mein aajanogi.
Trisha rolled her eyes. Raghav smiled.

Next day - holi party!

The party was on full swing. Everyone was wearing white costumes and playing with colours. Trisha entered the party. She was wearing a white palazzo salwar suit. Looking so pretty like a fairy on earth. Raghav was stunt to see her in these costumes. She greeted everyone and was standing in a corner enjoying everyone playing holi with colours. She was stunt when she felt someone's hands on her cheeks. She was astonished to see raghav applying colours on his cheeks. She smiled shyly.
Raghav was lost in her reddish face. She looked so pretty. He cupped her face with his hands.
Raghav: happy holi trisha!
She smiled. With her hands she took colours from the side table and applied on his face.
Trisha: happy holi raghav!
Raghav was stunt by her actions. She ran away with shyness. Raghav too ran after her with colours. They applied colours each other like kids. Raghav was first time seeing her so casually. He was enjoying her care free nature.
Trisha became tired after so much running.
Raghav: trisha tume pani chahiye?
She nodded her head in agreement.
Raghav went to get water for her. But unfortunately he could only get bhaang. He purposefully didn't say it is bhaang to trisha knowing she won't drink it. Though trisha felt a different taste while drinking it but she didn't say anything. Raghav too drank with her. He was smiling seeing her.
Trisha: pata nahi raghav kuch alag sa lag raha hai ye peene ke baad. Bahuth light sa feel kar rahi hai.
Raghav smiled.
Raghav: yeh toh hona hi tha. After all bhaang aisi hota hai.
Trisha: how dare you? Tumne muhey bhaang dhe dhi? Tume mein aaj chodhoongi nahi.
Trisha started trying to hit raghav. But he started running. Trisha ran after him. Unknowingly he went inside the house and entered some room. Trisha followed him and closed the door so that he wont escape from her hands.
They both were exhausted after so much running. There have almost lost there senses because of the effect of bhaang.
Raghav came near her and cupped her face with his hands. She smiled looking at him.
Raghav: pata hai tum kitna khoobsurat dikhrahi ho aaj? Iss kapde mein?
Trisha: really?
Raghav: haan. Tum toh sach mein bahuth khoobsurat ho. Andhar se aur bahar se bhi.
Trisha: mumma ne toh meri peeche padi hui thi mere shaadi ke liye.
Raghav became worried.
Raghav: tum shaadi se hamesha bhagthe kyun ho?
Trisha: mein shaadi se bahgthe nahi hoon raghav. Balki mein shaadi ke liye tayar hoon.
He looked at her stunt.
Trisha: par sirf tumse.
Raghav smiled. Trisha was blushing.
Raghav: ek sach batao trisha tum muhey itna pyaar kyun karthi ho?
Trisha: tum bhi karthi ho muheyse pyaar.
Raghav: haan bahuth aapne aap se zyaada. Par mein darthi hoon meri past ki wajhe se tume kuch hogaya toh?
Trisha: muhey kuch nahi hoga. Tum hai na mere saath.
Raghav smiled.
Raghav: toh tumari mumma ki khawish poori karthe. Shaadi karlethi.
Trisha: sach mein tum muhejsey shaadi karegi?
Raghav: koi shaaq? Abhi karlethi.
He looked around and saw a statue of lord ganesha and a pooja thali. He took her hands and dragged her to there. She looked at him curiously. He took vermillion from the pooja thali and applied it on her scalp. Trisha closed her eyes. She had a feeling of completeness. He saw her standing with her eyes closed. She looked so innocent and pure. He came near her face and whispered in her ears.
Raghav: ab tumari mumma se kaho tumari shaadi hogayi aur unhe parishan hone ki zaroorath nahi.
Trisha smiled and turned. Raghav kept his hands on her shoulders. She closed her eyes on shyness. He turned her towards him. She was breathing heavily. Raghav was lost in her. Eyes closed lips shivered and cheeks adorned with reddish hue she looked like an innocent beauty. He was feeling difficult to control his temptations. He leaned on her lips and kissed her passionately. She too responded with equal passion. Without breaking there kiss he took her in his arms and went to bed. After that shared physical intimacy.

After sometime

Trisha was lying in raghav's arms and she unknowingly slept off. Raghav was looking at her with all the affection. He made her lied on bed without making her awake from her sleep. He kissed on her forehead. He made her wear her dress and covered herself in blanket. He was feeling thirsty. He went out and while walking down his eyes blurred and he was loosing his vision. He sat on the sofa and slept off unknowingly.

Around evening

Trisha opened her eyes with great difficulty. She was feeling severe headache. She wondered how did she ended up in this bedroom. She tried to recollect what had happened after drinking the juice brought by raghav. But she could literally remember nothing. Her entire body was paining. She thought to freshen up as there was colours completely in her dress and body. She went to the washroom and washed her face. {{{ since she was full in different types of colours she didn't recognise the vermillion on her scalp. She thought it to be colours too. And at this point she doesn't remember anything happened before}}}
She was cleaning herself. That's when a flash hit her. She and raghav in bed. She became startled. How is it even possible? What is she imagining? Did she saw a dream in her sleep? Such a wild dream. She became embarrassed.
Before leaving she decided to bid good bye to swathi and others. She saw raghav sleeping in the sofa near the stairs. She hit her head for her imaginations. She understood her love for him was making her imagine such things. She literally couldn't find any one. Everyone was taking rest due to bhaang effect. She understood everyone was enjoying the holi party. She shook her head and left from her.

Raghav opened his eyes slowly. His head was paining. He had no idea how he reached here. He remembered he was having bhaang with trisha. He tried to search for her. But she had already left. He freshened up and left to his home.

Same night

Raghav after having dinner went to his bed to sleep. When he closed his eyes he could see few flashes of him and trisha. He got up and started breathing heavily. What was that a dream? How does it feel so real? He understood his feelings for trisha had made him imagine such wild stuffs.

Next day - cbi office

Every one was discussing about the fun they had in holi party. Trisha and raghav was feeling awkward. They can't remember what exactly happened yesterday in party. Raghav came near her.
Raghav: i am sorry trisha mein ne tume kal bhaang de dhi juice nahi.
Trisha was astonished.
Trisha: what? How could you raghav? No wonder i was having such severe headache and i really can't remember what had happened yesterday.
Raghav: i am sorry trisha. Even i can't remember what had happened?
Trisha wanted to ask about the flashes she is getting. But didn't have the guts. Its same with raghav too.

Days started passing. But trisha and raghav didn't have the guts to open up to each about the flashes during holi party. They could not remember properly what had happened that day. They brushed away thinking it as there imagination. They continued to concentrate on there work like before with there usual tiffs, raghav's pranks and teasings.
As days passed trisha started becoming weak. She just couldn't understand why she is becoming fatigue for her day to day stuff. She brushed it away thinking it as her work stress.

The entire team had travelled to Luck now for a case investigation. They were staying in a resort.
Every one had gathered in the restaurant to have breakfast. They greeted each other good morning and sat for breakfast.
Rajbir: kya hua trisha tumari tabeer theekh nahi hai kya? Bahuth tired dikhrahi ho.
Swathi: ha trisha pichli kuch dino se mein bhi notice kar rahi hoon. Tum bahuth pale dikhrahi ho. I think tum anaemic ho.
Trisha: i am fine guys. Aap log khabaraye math. Mein bilkul theekh hoon. Bass kaam ki stress hai
Raghav: boss mein suggest kar rahi hoon aap yeh diet conscious khaana choodo.
Trisha: raghav!
By the time food came and the waiter served food for everyone. Trisha felt uncomfortable with the smell of food.
Bikram: kya hua trisha? Tum khaana kyun nahi khaarahi ho?
Trisha covered her mouth with her hands and ran away much to everyone's shock. Trisha vomited so badly and she became tired after vomiting. She washed her face. That's when it strike her. All these days she was thinking it as a dream or imagination. Can it be for real?
Trisha: oh no! It can't be. If so kya mein?
She kept her hands on her tummy.
She calculated and realised that she is really late for this month. Trisha could see her suspicion becoming true. She realised all these days the flashes she had was not her dream or imagination. It was indeed flashes of reality. Which they both had forgotten. Trisha came out from the washroom and saw her entire team waiting for her in her room. She could make out that they were extremely worried for her. She consoled them and informed that she is having a migraine and she wanted to take rest. She asked them to carry on with there work. They suggested her to meet a doctor. But she denied. They knew she is stubborn. They asked her to take rest and left from her room.
Trisha saw a worried raghav. The keen observer he is understood that she is not fine even though she assured everyone that she is. Trisha could make out his concern for her. She just couldn't control her emotions. She hugged him tightly. Raghav was shocked initially by her movement. But he too hugged her back. He was worried of something happening to her. He just can't survive without her.
Raghav: trisha i don't think you are really fine. You look so pale and tired. Mein doctor ko call karthi hoon.
Trisha became worried.
Trisha: raghav abhi nahi. Mein thodhi dher rest karna chathi hoon. Uske baad bhi mein theekh nahi hogayi i promise i will consult a doctor. Tum ab jao. Aur jaldi yahan ki kaam katham karo. Mein jaldhi wapas jana chathi hoon.
Raghav: ok as you wish. Tum apna khayal rakhna. Aur kuch bhi chahiye toh muhey call karna.
She nodded her head in agreement. He made her lie down on her bed and covered her with blanket.

After making sure that her entire team had gone out for work she enquired about a hospital near by in the reception. She just wanted to confirm about her suspicion. The receptionist arranged a cab for trisha to go to the hospital.

Trisha told her complaints to the doctor and she examined trisha. Doctor too suspected that trisha could be pregnant. She asked trisha to go for test to confirm about her pregnancy. Trisha was eagerly waiting for her results after giving her samples. She was extremely nervous. After sometime doctor called her inside and handed over her reports. Her reports were positive that means she is pregnant. Trisha understood her suspicion had turned out into reality. She is pregnant with raghav's kid!

Ps: i am very nervous about this story. I hope i didn't write anything not dignified. If you feel so i apologise.

Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start to the story... I liked the occasion chosen by you... holi and the way Trisha was made to attend the party was nice... she always tries to avoid parties...
The application of colours by both of them and then Trisha being given bhaang by Raghav... so genuine... might happen on a festival like holi... cute..
The way they both expressed their love for each other under the effect of bhaang and then their marriage... well written by you...
The flashes with both of them after waking up are expected... none of them remembered anything that happened on that day...
Everyone noticing her weakness, they all are concerned for each other... well presented...
OMG Trisha is pregnant and her dreams and flashes are true... eager to know what happens next...
I'm sure they both will be together in the end...
No dear the entire update was mind blowing and you don't need to be nervous at all... Loved every bit of it..
Waiting for the next part...
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Awsm update dear... Love it a lot. RaTri's marriage on a colourful festival... Waoo...Unknowingly they confess their love for each other...so now Trisha s pregnant... She had accepted the flashes of the intimacy with Raghav as her dream bt after knowing about her pregnancy she feels that it was not her dream...feeling worried about Trisha... Waiting eagerly fr the next part... Update soon... 😳 thanku sooo much for this Awsm update 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the update dear off to read it ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Off to read it, today very bad net with me Uma.
Sorry if i could not post the review, will come back tomorrow deffo. Hope U understand my problem dear 🤗

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