Ratri TS!Manzil Pyaar Ki! last part pg 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: babita..

Very nice beginning to a pyar ki manzil 👏👏

Thank you
Loved the bond the team takes every where and the Holi party seemed only an example that the team is so different when not at work, they are after all human beings who have right to enjoy and get entertained.
Team is like a family I always loved there bonding
The bhaang that raghav brought for Trisha changed their lives forever. The intimacy they had was not flashing in to their minds as real but as an imagination, I wish they would have talked at that time only.
His one prank changed everything there life but it was destiny they had to end up together. It was not easy for both them. They are not sure about the flashes. Whether it is reality or not.
Nothing is written that's not dignified Uma, it's humane. The people U love come across this and this is what RaTri shared.
I am revealed I as extremely nervous writing this story
Things were not in their hands as they were totally drunk.
Yes they were not in senses. There love came out with out there senses
The time passed and the weakness engrossed Trisha that worried almost every one including Raghav. And the Lucknow trip revealed her that she is pregnant.
Her weakness had been noted by everyone it can't been hidden for a long time
A very awkward, embarrassed situation for her when the reports come as positive. But she has to move on to Raghav now and have to tell him but the imaginations and reality were the same.
You have to wait and c how she is going to handle these. She still don't have clarity about what all had happened on Holi day. Including there marriage
Loved how she embraced him and he in turn so worried embraced her too. Loved their bond so special and full of love !
There bond is special love, friendship, trust and concern
A difficult time for Trisha to tell Raghav about their baby now. Hard to tell but she will have to. I'll wait for how Trisha moves ahead from now and what decision she takes. Obviously telling raghav about the incident and it's outcome is so necessary, but how this is what will be in wait.
Yes you have to wait and see how she is going to handle this situation
I wish Raghav comes up as a mature and responsible man to claim his baby and rescue Trisha from getting embarrassed in front of the society and marry her.
Raghav never runs away from his responsibility he can never hurt Trisha.
But shall wait what U have planned to pen down Uma ! Lovely start, and interesting to know what follows next.
Thanks and huggies ❤️🤗
Thank you


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
awesome teaser dear loved it a lot .did u see my RaTri scenes thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Wao so romantic teaser... Trisha fainted infront of Raghav... Nd he s worrying for Trisha... Such a cute teaser dear... Update next part soon... Tnx fr the awsm teaser...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: babita..

U have shown Raghav as a doctor too ??

Nice teaser and very emotional one. Will wait to see RaTri scenes and Trisha's condition.



We knew he is a psychiatrist to be a psychiatrist he definitely have to complete mbbs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rr2000

Please update the next part soon loves
Nd I am new to this forum so I don't know much about posting please help by guiding
Regards 😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: DEKER

wao such a nice teaser trisha fainted in front of raghav liftong het in his arms and you have prsented raghav as a doctor too i just love it ,😳please update soon dear



Thanks
If raghav is a psychiatrist he had to complete is mbbs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47


Part 2 - last part

Trisha was shocked to core. She is pregnant. She knew both raghav and trisha was not in there senses. She didn't know how to handle this situation. She loved raghav from the bottom of her heart. Truly and deeply. But she is not sure whether he has the same feelings for her. For sure he teases her and flirts with her. But more than that he never had expressed anything to her.
Trisha lied down on the bed in her hotel room. She was totally stressed. Her pregnancy was adding a toll on her health. She closed her eyes.
Trisha saw she and raghav running and playing in swathi's house. Raghav entered some room. She closed the door. He cupped her face and called her beautiful. She shared her worry about the marriage proposals for her. He confessed his love for her and then applied vermillion on her forehead.

Trisha woke up and started breathing heavily. Raghav had confessed his love for her. He had married her. Trisha consoled her beating heart. She smiled happily. Raghav loves her. That fact had gave her so much strength. But her happiness didn't stay for a long. Raghav doesn't remember what all had happened that day. If he had he would have spoke with her. She knew he loves her. They have got married. Now she is pregnant with his baby. If she want she can reveal this to him. Being a gentleman he will never allow anyone to point a finger at her. But she want him to take initiative. She want him to remember there marriage and intimacy. She want him to be with her due to love not as his responsibility. At the same trisha had no idea till how long she can hide her pregnancy? She don't know what will happen when her family learns about. She felt sorry for them. They had trusted her. And she had broken there trust. She had tears in her eyes.

It became almost evening when raghav had returned back with the team after finishing there work. They had gone directly to trisha's room. They all were extremely worried. Trisha pretended to be healthy in front of them. She didn't want them to worry for her. They were happy to see her alright. Being a keen observer raghav understood that trisha looked tired. They were discussing about the development of case. After sometime when it finished everyone retired to there rooms but raghav stayed back.
Trisha: kya hua raghav?
Raghav: are you really fine trisha? You look so tired.
Trisha: ha raghav. Lagtha hai tume meri fikhar ho rahi hai?
Raghav: fikhar toh ho rahi hai. Akhir apni anokhi boss hai.
Trisha smiled.

After finishing the work in Lucknow the team had returned back to Delhi. Trisha started taking care of her health. But she was scared. Till when she can hide her pregnancy she had no idea. She felt guilty seeing her parents. She had became really quite. Raghav had noticed her change. Though she smiles to his teasings she rarely talks. If she talks that will be related to work. Raghav did asked her why she is so silent these days? She just smiles or gives some silly excuses.
He even noticed trisha's changed food style. She who is diet conscious started having different types of food. Sometimes she eats certain food which she never liked in her entire life. She had became really pale. Raghav kept on asking her whether she had any health issues. But she always make him keep quiet by her strict warnings. Raghav had became extremely worried for her. One day he decided to speak with her even if she shouts.

Trisha's cabin

Trisha was engrossed in her work. Raghav came and sat near her. Trisha could make out that he is worried.
Trisha: kya hua raghav? Tum itna parishan kyun ho?
Raghav: tumari wajehse.
Trisha: meri wajah se?
Raghav: ha. Tumari wajah se. Pichli kuch dino se mein notice kar rahi ho. Tum bahuth tired ho. Bahuth pale dikh rahi ho. Tum bahuth silent hogayi. Aur tumari khane ki tarika. Kabhi kuch nahi khathi. Kabhi kabhi tum aisa khana khathe jise tume bikul pasandh nahi ho. Kal ki bath toh dekho. Tum samose chaat kaha rahi thi jo tume bilkul pasandh nahi ho. Kya hua tume?
Trisha: kuch nahi hua. Tum kuch zyaad sochrahi ho.
Raghav: nahi trisha
Trisha: raghav muhey bahuth kaam hai. Please muhey taang math karo.
Raghav: trisha baath kya hai? Tum itna indifferent kyun ho rahi ho? Kuch bhi ho muhey bata tho.
Trisha: tume samjh mein nahi aata ek baar kehne se. Ok fine. Toh mein hi chaltha hoon yahan se.
She got up and was about to leave. But raghav stopped her by holding hands.
Raghav: trisha tum iss tarah kab takh bagthi rahogi?
Trisha: raghav haath chodo mera.
Trisha was struggling to leave his hold. But he was strong. She was becoming nervous. Her vision started blurring. Raghav understood trisha was loosing her consciousness. Before he could fell down he hold her in his arms.
Raghav was extremely shocked to see trisha fainting in front of him. He carried her to the sofa and made her lie down. He had noticed that she had became really pale. Being a doctor himself he checked her pulse and founded it to be high. After some time trisha opened her eyes. She saw a worried raghav. She became tensed. Did he knew about her pregnancy?
Raghav: trisha tum abhi issi waqath mere saath hospital aarahi ho. Tum bahuth pale ho. Aur tumari pulse rate bhi high hai.
Trisha: raghav please leave me alone.
Raghav: trisha tum samjthi kyun nahi ho? Tumari tabeeri theekh nahi hai.
Trisha: raghav leave my cabin now.
Raghav: trisha
Trisha: raghav that's an order.
Raghav got angry.
Raghav: ok fine boss.
Raghav left from her cabin angrily. Trisha had tears in her eyes. Raghav extremely angry. He left from the head quarters immediately.

Raghav's residence - night time

Though he left from office angrily he was so worried for trisha. He understood something is wrong with her. Knowing trisha he knew she won't open up that easily. He is worried of losing her. She is the only one with whom he can call as his own.
Raghav didn't feel like having food. He went to bed thinking about trisha.

Raghav saw he and trisha playing with colours in holi party. Then he gave bhaang to trisha. They had bhaang together. Then inside a room they both confessed there love and he applied vermillion on her scalp. After that he carried her in his arms to bed.

Raghav woke up. He was stunt. He understood all these days he was not imagining there intimacy. It was indeed reality which he forgot due to the effect of bhaang.
He wondered is that the reason for her indifferent behaviour? If she remembered then why she didn't open up in front of him.
After giving a lot of thought he decided to speak with trisha.

Next day

Raghav was waiting for trisha in the car park. When trisha came and parked the car he forcefully got car keys from her hand and put her at the back seat and drove the car.

Lake side

Raghav had taken trisha to lake side. Inside the car se tried to ask him where he was taking her. But he didn't answer her.
Trisha: kya hua tume? Muhey yahan kyun laya ho?
Raghav came near her. He hold her towards his chest. She became nervous.
Raghav: trisha holi wale din bhaang peene ke baad humne ek doosre se apni pyaar ka confession kiya. Aur uske baad humne shaadi karli.
Trisha had tears in her eyes.
Trisha: tume yaad aaga.
Raghav: tume yaad tha?
Trisha: sach kaho toh theekh se nahi. Kuch kuch flashes aarahi thi. Jab humne Lucknow gaya tab muhey ye sab yaad aagayi.
Raghav: tho phir tumne bataya kyun nahi?
Trisha: raghav ek baath batao tum yeh sab yaad aana ke baath muhjse baath karne ki faisala kyun ki? Issliye ki tumne bhaang ki wajhse muhyse shaadi karli issliye? Mein tumari responsibility ho issliye?
Raghav: that's enough trisha. Tume itni si baath samjh mein nahi aati? Beshakh humne bhaang peekar hosh khone ki wajhse shaadi karli par woh issliye hogaya kyun ki hum dono ek doosere se bahuthh pyaar karthi ho. Apni hosh mein hum iss baath ko kabhi accept nahi karthi. Trisha mein jantha tum muhey bahuth pyaar karthi ho. Aur mein bhi. I love you trisha!
Trisha had tears in his eyes.
Trisha: i love you too raghav.
He hugged her and kissed on her forehead.
Raghav: tum fikhar math karo. Mein tumari parents se baath karthi hoon.
Trisha: raghav ek baath hai mein tumse kuch kehna chathi hoon.
Raghav looked at her. She took his hands and kept on her belly. He looked at her anxiously.
Raghav: you are pregnant?
She nodded her head in an yes.
Raghav: toh phir itni din bataya kyun nahi?
Trisha: mein chathi thi tum sab kuch apne aap yaad karke apni pyaar ki wajhse muhey accept karo. Tumari responsibility banke nahi.
He cupped her face.
Raghav: tume pata hai tumne muhey kitni badi khushi thi. I love you trisha.
Trisha: i love you too raghav.
The end!




Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such an emotional and lovely update Uma...👏
Trisha was happy and worried at the same time to know about her pregnancy, she didn't remember anything but she was somewhere sure inside her heart that he too loves her and if she told her about her pregnancy, he would definitely accept his responsibility as a true gentleman.
But she decided to hide it from him till he himself doesn't come forward and expresses his love... it must have been so difficult for her...
She becoming weak day by day and her eating habits changing... how could this escape from Raghav's eyes... he was almost dying out of worry for her and when she fainted, he must have been shattered to see her like this..😭
The way he forced her to consult a doctor, he had that feeling of owning her...otherwise he wouldn't have said this with such an authority...😊
But she asked him to leave the office by order, so difficult for her...
He then had remembrance of that day in his dreams and he finally deciding to talk to her...lovely...well written..👏
The confession and the way they both came together, he coming to know about her pregnancy and he expressing his love for her openly...so romantic...👏❤️
I just loved each and every part of this story... just awesome... please continue to write such wonderful stories dear...
THANKS A LOT FOR THIS AWESOME STORY...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the update dear off to read it .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow, so Trisha wanted Raghav to know by himself and accept her out of love and not as a responsibility ! Lovely very lovely bcos she is a self respected lady and can go without him to move on. She had never thought of telling him that she was carrying his child, and bear everything all alone.
Very nice ending Uma 👏👏
I liked a concerned Raghav who knew she was going through some health issues and his worries were more then any other team member. Loved how he wanted to tackle her plight of health.
Trisha did not reveal anything and felt ashamed in front of her parents. A brave girl but she did the mistake and had done the wrong while breaking their trust.
I loved her repenting on this.
But the way Raghav took out everything from her was miraculous. The visions he had, he came across them again and everything got cleared.
The lake scene was purely romantic and lovely ! Liked how Raghav confessed and then Trisha too. And the gift he loved to have from her in the form of a child of theirs.
Lovely and finally they have got the manzil pyaar ki !
Fine ending to a two shot and very well narrated and penned down. Thanks Uma, for this beautiful story, hugs and loves ❤️🤗

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