Pyar hai....sirf tumse.. Part 8b (last part) on Page 33 - Page 9

Originally posted by: babita..

Hi Manisha, i'll be back in a while to review ! 🤗

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Such a nice update manisha

Thank you so much

Starting of the story shows hindu rituals. I love how you show Raghav taking the charge and following the rituals.

He wanted to prevent her from the stress of those rituals...

Raghav really hurts her she don't want to be a burden on him so refused to go with him but in her heart she was missing his presence around him.

She never wanted to impose her responsibility on him if he doesn't love her, so she let him go...

Trisha was lost in her thoughts and remembered the beautiful moments spent with her parents.

Poor Trisha stop eating food properly and made herself work for longer hours

She was all alone in this world now, no one to take care of her.. so she tried to keep her occupied in work without having proper meals so her health got affected because of this...

So Trisha fainted, Ragahv was so worried that he shouted on her and made her gorce to eat food and her medicine.

Raghav got very worried to see her in this condition and out of his worry he shouted at her when she refused his help.

Now Trisha is not that much angry with Raghav. Hope she confess her love.

That would happen in the next part

Eagerly waiting for the second part.

Originally posted by: DEKER

wow,it was awesome raghav completing all that hindu rituals and he understands trisha emotion, she is facing now that moment which raghav had in his childhood,

Thank you so much for liking it. He would never want her to go through the same stress he had to undergo during his childhood..

raghav shouted at trisha this part shows that how much he loves her and can't see her in this pain or broken condition and giving her some space to understand all things.

i love the dialogue raghav says when he shouted at her,the night seen when he hugs her tightly when she ie shivering it was too romantic 😳

All this happened out of shear love and care for her

all this was outstanding

Thank you so much

Welcome to the forum

Originally posted by: babita..

Hi Manisha, sorry dear for not reviewing yesterday. I had a bad net but i lost it totally after that. I tried a lot, but could not open any site. really sorry for that.

This happens with all of us, some day or another, right ??

Hope U understand ! Will be giving it now.

Originally posted by: babita..

Loved this update, so emotional and so close to every heart 👏👏

Thanks a lot Babita

It was the worst time for Trisha and Raghav sensed her trauma and felt bad as he himself has been through this when he was so young. Liked to see him performing all the rituals and doing the duty of a perfect son in law. !

He wanted to prevent her from that stress of those rituals, so he opted to do that himself..

Liked how things went well. But the trauma had to be started. The relatives whispering and she only acting like a wife in front of them. I felt so bad for her., becos the relatives were not bothered about her miseries, but were remarking over what they saw in the hospital, raghav ka Maang bharna with his blood. !

Relatives are like this many times... they don't understand someone's misery but gossips have to be there...

The marriage is real for Raghav but for Trisha -- she feels herself a burden over Raghav that her father thrown upon him during his death ! What Raghav said was not deliberate, but he wanted to do what he was up to do. But Trisha took it wrong. I don't even blame Trisha, becos she is a self respected girl and can't see raghav taking her home as a wife only as a responsibility and not out of love !

Both of them are right on their parts... its just that circumstances are not in their favour...

No one confessed their feelings yet, but love was always there within. The things changed into silence and they were hardly seen comfortable with each other. When he left her home, it was the saddest time for Trisha, and Raghav who unintentionally hurt her. was feeling guilty for bringing tears in her eyes. This couple took long time to accept what changes came into their lives --- specially Trisha !

This is the beauty of their relationship, they understand each other so well without the need for words...

The past made her realize once again that it was Raghav for whom she was always denying the proposals and her mother very well knew that he is behind her denials. It was a sweet convo of her mother with her that she recalled. Very emotional scene after that as what her mother said was getting proved. No one was there for her and she has asked Raghav to leave her.

Pathetic !

The circumstances are to be blamed for all this... the love prevails in the end...as always..

Good that she tried to come to join the office and everyone knew that RaTri were not in talking terms. Raghav when told this to them it was hard for him to feel so helpless.

They all understood her turmoil and they were helpless in this situation...

He had to take care of her ailing and starving wife, but had no guts ever to come near to her without her wishes.

Her anger was justified for him, as he never confessed his love to her and rather hurt her.

Nice to see him taking care of her but she was objecting every time. He followed her when she drove alone and was not keeping well. His fears are there, but can't do anything regarding her deteriorating health.

He will never let her suffer, even if he has to shout at her for her own sake... he just loves her madly..

Even Trisha knew that she was rude and her behavior was not good to him, but she was ignoring him for his concern as a duty and not out of love ! Very tense situation for Raghav and he was looking at the things, but nothing could be of help. I liked the inner trauma of both U have shown Manisha, very subtle yet very sensitive !👏👏

Thanks a lot for liking it... very difficult for me to write this..

But i loved the scene, when Raghav at last got angry over her poor health and was not ready to take meds. He was never like this before and Trisha took the food and meds silently. Did she saw love in his words and eyes ?? I saw 😳

This part was written to show the extent of love between the two... Glad you liked it.

Liked how she thought how much he was suffering in all this mess. Loved how Raghav thought how he could be so rude to her. The silent lovers are so awesome and their love is getting into their hearts slowly and gradually things started falling at their places.

Both of them care for each other, she saw him so worried for her...

I liked him putting the maid on duty and asked her about his wife all the day. And on coming home Trisha remarked to ask the maid whether i have taken pills or not. The silence is broken today for the first time ⭐️

She was very touched at the way he took care of her... this can't be only because of his sense of responsibility for her...

Loved this scene and later when she was shivering and threw the glass to alert him and he came and gave her the heat of his body to relieve her from shivering and they both slept in that position ! Choo chweet !❤️

Thanks for liking it...

Now whether she will take coffee or milk, she will take care of herself as promised to Raghav 😊.

Now will wait to see how they both changes into husband and wife from stranger friends !😉😳

Wait for my next part... posting in some time..

Lovely and very cute parts in the update, loved it so much. Manisha, thanks a tonne dear.

Loves ❤️

Thanks a lot... means a lot to me..

Will wait for Trisha's confession and Raghav's reaction

Posting the next part in sometime

Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely teaser Manisha 👏👏

Loved to see vermillion in Trisha's head. And Raghav realizing that she accepts this marriage but don't say anything. Very interesting to see that Trisha is tying her hair from that day of her marriege to raghav.

So sweet to see her like this and Raghav removed her hair to see her face, so romantic ❤️

Originally posted by: babita..

Take your time to reply, no hurries Manisha 🤗

Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely teaser
I knew Trisha will be applying vermillion on her scalp and hiding it. Just an intuition u know
Loved it I hope everything becomes alright between them soon

No problem manisha take your time

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

such a awesome teaser dear.loved it a lot

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Love the teaser a lot... So Trisha accepted their marriage...So cutee...waiting for part 4..update soon dear... Nd thanks a lot for this romantic teaser...