Pyar hai....sirf tumse.. Part 8b (last part) on Page 33 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments and reviews. Actually I had not planned to write this part tday. But somehow I was feeling quite low for no obvious reason and didn't feel like studying, so I thought of rather writing my story which makes me feel better.
But truly... Whatever I wrote was not at all planned, I had planned nothing about this part till now. I just wrote whatever came to my mind. I didn't even read it once before posting as I had to go somewhere.
Wen I read your lovely reviews, sometimes even I wondered whether actually I have written it...I needed to read it again myself after reading your reviews... Thanks a lot for all your love and support..
I really mean it...
I have my exam somewhere may be in August or September... DNB has still not given the dates. But I will be active in the forum for sure.
Although I plan to start my next story after my exam, but you never know...even me myself dunno if sometime... Something like today happen... I might write my next one...But I'm not sure...

But I will be active in the forum for sure everyone..
I'll keep on writing poems as they take very less time compared to a story...
Loves to all..
Individually will reply later..

❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments and reviews. Actually I had not planned to write this part tday. But somehow I was feeling quite low for no obvious reason and didn't feel like studying, so I thought of rather writing my story which makes me feel better.
But truly... Whatever I wrote was not at all planned, I had planned nothing about this part till now. I just wrote whatever came to my mind. I didn't even read it once before posting as I had to go somewhere.
Wen I read your lovely reviews, sometimes even I wondered whether actually I have written it...I needed to read it again myself after reading your reviews... Thanks a lot for all your love and support..
I really mean it...
I have my exam somewhere may be in August or September... DNB has still not given the dates. But I will be active in the forum for sure.
Although I plan to start my next story after my exam, but you never know...even me myself dunno if sometime... Something like today happen... I might write my next one...But I'm not sure...

But I will be active in the forum for sure everyone..
I'll keep on writing poems as they take very less time compared to a story...
Loves to all..
Individually will reply later..

All the best for your exams dear ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love this update a lot... Raghav s constantly trying to propose Trisha indirectly... Bt Trisha doesn't want to accept his proposal so easily... Team members also tried to help him bt Trisha strictly ordered to not to help him...I love the ways in which Raghav was trying to propose her... Lift scean was too good... Trisha consoled him so nicely nd told him not to think about past... Mmm so they do bhangra.. Such a cute moment you have created Manisha...haww Raghav proposed Trisha infront of team members!!!! Nd bossy Trisha warned him not to do such things again... Now let's see how Raghav proposed Trisha... M really very excited!!!! Will wait for the next part... Update soon...
Wish u all the very best for your xm...nodoubtly you will rock it... Thankuu sooo much fr the part... Such an adorable it is...love you a lot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update Manisha ma'am .loved it soo much it's soo romantic. ...loved raghavs ways to propose trisha. thanks for such a awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Awesome update Manisha 👏👏

Thanks a lot Babita...

I loved raghav's continuous tries to win over Trisha but everytime she was saying No.
I loved to see him so deeply indulged in proposing her. Loved his every try and loved him craving her YES.
Ya I wanted to give it a few failed attempts from my side. Glad you like the repeated attempts...

Trisha did not let him go so easily and all his attempts were kinda rejected. I liked how he asked for his Dil in front of every one and she felt so shy and ran away from there. I loved him going after her and asking for one more chance.
She is such an introvert and doesn't like an open proposal in front of others...

Now the next day is for Raghav and this time he will finally do what his potential makes him to do. Will wait for that.
Lovely chapter and a cute times watching RaTri so involved and in a good chemistry when they danced with the bhangra group, though both danced so badly 😉
This scene was not planned earlier...glad you liked it...

The sketch scene was lovely and so romantic when he held her hand and ask for marrying him. The NO in front of every one made every one knows what she said, and i loved this style of raghav too much 😉
Thanks a lot...😊

The lift scene was at it's best when Trisha took care of him being so scared of darkness and his past coming back to haunt him. Loved her pacifying him and then he opted to drop her home after a dinner. Lovely atmosphere overall and even DC knows what's going around.
I wanted to make it enjoyable...I hope I could...
The time has now come to see the couple getting married, rather remarried soon and pyar jo sirf ek duje se hai -- will come out to the world openly and with new beginning !
Just fabulous !!! ⭐️⭐️
Thanks dear..😊
Loves to you...

Please I'm sorry if I could not meet upto your expectations...please forgive me this time...i'm really sorry if you don't like this part...please please please...



Will wait for your new threads, and all the very best for your exams later. But U have done a great job dearie and i loved it to the core 👍🏼
Loved this part and happy that the story did not ended, we will have more chapters with RaTri in this way !!!!
Loves Manisha for everything U do ❤️
THANKS A LOT FOR YOUR LOVE...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update Manisha just read it dear .will come back a comment in detail .


Thanks Tasha, no problem...take your time...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DEKER

awesome update sweetheart loved it a lot...👏👏👏

poor raghav, he is trying a lot to complete the challenge.. and how much he cares about trisha...he doesn't allowed her go home alone at late night😳...too cute dear.The lift part is amazing trisha hugs raghav so romantic and raghav continued his conversation her and becomes a talkative person with all his usual pranks at that situation only for Trisha...❤️and after that the bhangra dance at dhaba....enjoyed this part a lot.ohh how much he irritate Trisha, even he tried to propose her when the meeting is going on...poorTrisha, i loved that part especially when he says that he lost something and ask trisha to check ...oo...so...,cute 😆☺️and romantic but she got angry by this as she doesn't like that he proposes her in front of others and give Raghav a last chance...

Thankyou...so...oo...much dear for such a wonderful update it was awesome, beautifully written enjoyed each and every part lot...eagerly waiting for next part...love you a lot dear❤️🤗❤️ .But studies comes first so do it whenever you are get time ...we can wait till that dear


Thanks a lot sweetie...you are ever so supportive...I know and love you for that...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07

First of all sorry for the delay. I had back to back OT today and I was too tired

No problem...its ok...

Read the update twice. Can't believe you have written this part in a hurry. Trust me it was too good! Best part of this story. Raghav is all Pranky Pranky and Trisha is all blushy blushy
Thanks Uma...really what I said is true...I'm so glad you liked it...😊

Started with team teasing them and Trisha not showing out her shyness and in usual boss mode. It looked so realistic there.
Thanks a lot dear...

Raghav proposing her with her sketch I am sure the sketch might have been too good that Trisha lost in it in between the meeting. Raghav was lucky that he didn't get her firing for doing such things in between meetings. Even DC left them leaving the meeting!
I wanted to show something which she won't expect...that too when chief is there...

Then the lift scene. Raghav being claustrophobic and Trisha helping him out. Even the power failure gave them sweet moments in lift. Then there dinner date in Dhabha along with there Kharab Bhangra dance! I would really like to see such a scene in show too ( if v r that lucky).
I too hope so Uma...

Then the lunch scene. Raghav searching for his heart and proposing her in front of everyone. It was too cute but could understand Trisha too it might have been embarrassing for her though she was feeling shy.
She is a real introvert...she would never like this...

Now Raghav have one last chance I am sure he is going to make it in this. Eagerly waiting for the proposal. All the best for ur exams Manisha. Hope u will be active in forum. I was eagerly waiting for ur other two stories but ur exams are more important.
Thanks Uma...i'll update next and final part by tomorrow...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update Manisha soo cute really loved it soo much ...it was soo romantic...you are really awesome dear .raghav is trying hard to impress Trisha and complete his challenge .this shows much much he loves her ...loved how he made her sketch and give to her .the lift scene was soo cute Trisha hugging raghav and telling her that she's with him loved to see her gestures...the dhaaba dance scene was soo cute .trisha asking raghav to dance ...was soo cute .loved raghavs way to impress trisha by saying that his heart is with her .soo cute lovely scene...loved it soo soo much .u are simply awesome dear thanks for such a awesome update loved it soo much


Thanks a lot dear...I am so glad that you liked what I wrote this time...I really didn't plan this part...Thanks a lot...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

sorry for the late review dear...was having exam dear ...so was little busy studying


Studies come first sweetie...Loves to you dear..😊

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