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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: babita..

Jealousy is prevailing in Raghav😳

I will be waiting for the update, this is looking so interesting.👏👏



Obviously Raghav have to feel jealous seeing someone so close to Trisha after all he loves her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Interesting teaser once again... A jealous Raghav... getting frustrated at someone becoming so important for her, I'm sure he won't let his love go away from him so easily. There must be something else between Trisha and Sooraj which is still under cover... Trisha won't easily accept anyone else too...

Waiting for this lovely story..👍🏼



Raghav have to feel jealous seeing someone close to Trisha
Trisha is an introvert so someone becoming close to her is something irritating him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Such a cute teaser. Love to see Raghav jealous. Please update soon



Thank you will update tonight have finished typing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

When will you post the first part? Waiting eagerly...



Tonight I have completed typing
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Part 1

As usual in the morning after preparing breakfast for everyone trisha got ready in her formals to go to office. When she came down with her handbag and car keys she was surprised to see some visitors in her house at this time.
Trisha's father: aao trisha! Mr and mrs. Malhotra se milo. Yeh hamari publishing company ke saath ek naya youth magazine launch karne wale hai. Aur yeh meri badi beti hai. Cbi mein kaam karthi hai.
Trisha: namasthe!
Mrs.malhotra: trisha yeh mera beta sooraj malhotra hai.
Trisha turned towards the gentleman sitting next to them.
Trisha: aunty mein sooraj ko pehele se janthi hoon. College mein meri 3 saal senior dhe. Aur hum arts club mein bhi saaath the!
Sooraj came forwards and shook her hands.
Sooraj: surprised trisha?
Trisha: yes. Expect nahi kiya tha. Itni saalo badh iss tarah achanak.
Sooraj: mein pehele se janthi thi yeh tumara ghar hai. Issliye tumare liye kuch laya tha.
He handed over a small packet to her. She was surprised to see her favourite orange and lemon candies in it.
Trisha: tume abhi bhi yaad hai muhey yeh candies pasandh hai?
Sooraj: of course kaise bhool saktha hoon? College fest ke bech mein tum hamesha yeh khathe the.
Trisha: aaj kal yeh milna bahuth mushkil hai. Thanks sooraj! Ab iskeliye tume return gift toh dena padega. Bas paanch minute dho mein tumari favourite carrot halwa banadethi hoon.
Trisha went to kitchen. Trisha's and sooraj's parents were amazed. Sooraj excused himself and went to talk with trisha.
Sooraj: sach kahun toh i am surprised to see you as a cbi officer.
Trisha: aisa kyun?
Sooraj: mein ne socha tum college ke baad journalism ki field mein kuch karogey. Yah phir tumari papa ke saath publishing house join karogi.
Trisha: mein ne as a newsreader course ke beech dho teen mahina internship kiya tha. Tab samjh mein aayi meri nature ke liye yeh field suit nahi karthi. Media mein bahuth business aur politics involved hai aaj kal. Uss samey just mein ne cbi ki written test likha. Socha nahi tha uss mein accepted ho jao. Mumma toh bahuth khilaf the. Par papa ne support kiya.
Sooraj: so independent. I am impressed.
Trisha smiled.
Trisha: aur tum?
Sooraj: college ke baad mein ne London gaya tha. Wahan se mein ne diploma karli visual impaired bachon ko train karne ke course mein aur dho teen saal wahan experience ke liye kaam karli. Aur wapas india aayi. Pichli kuch saal mein mumbai mein kaam karhi thi aur ab Delhi mein muhey transfer ho gaya.
Trisha: interesting! lo tumari favourite carrot halwa. Ab muhey chalna chahiye. Varna late ho jaongi.
Sooraj: thanks trisha! mein tume drop kardho?
Trisha: no thanks sooraj. Mere pass ghadi hai. See you later. Bye!

Cbi office

Everyone was there in conference hall listening to news.
Rajbir: raghav tumare pass koi chocolate hai? Pata nahi aaj bahuth man karaha hai koi chocolate khaney ka
Raghav: sorry mere pass nahi hai.
Trisha: chocolate nahi balki tume candy detha hoon.
Everyone looked at her surprised. She was not a person who likes sweets. She gave candies to everyone.
Bikram: aaj kal yeh candies milthe bhi hai? Kaha se le aayi isse?
Trisha: pata nahi sooraj ne diye muhey.
Raghav became alerted.
Raghav: yeh sooraj kaun hai?
Trisha looked at him.
Trisha: meri senior the college mein. Hum arts club mein bhi saath the. Bahuth saalo baad mila aaj. I am just surprised. Sooraj ko aaj bhi yaad hai muhey yeh candies pasanth hai.
Raghav was feeling uncomfortable. He felt like breathless. He himself don't know why. Hearing about a guy from trisha didn't give him a good feel. He somehow didn't like her speaking about someone else.
Trisha: pata hai sooraj visually impaired bacho ko train kartha hai. Itne saal Mumbai mein the ab Delhi ko transfer hua.
Raghav was getting irritated by the praising of this sooraj from trisha. From the moment she came she was speaking about sooraj. He can't believe that someone became so important to her in a short span of time. He threw his mobile out of anger.
Everyone looked at him.
Raghav murmured: sorry galthi se girgayi haath se. Boss aap continue ki jiye aap ki sooraj ke bare mein.
Trisha rolled her eyes in irritation.
Trisha's phone rang. After attending the call -
Trisha: guys ek naya case aaya hai. Rohan mehra 28yrs, mehra hotel group ki md Rakesh mehra ke chotey bhai kaal raat apni saagai ke beech unka murder hua. Unki fianc Koyal sharma mashur builder prateekh sharma ki beti hai. Inn logo ne apni power use karke ministry se cbi ko yeh case handover kardiya tha. Lets go guys.

Sharma mansion

Trisha, raghav, bikram and rajbir had came there for preliminary investigation. Dr. Arathi and her forensic team had already came there.
Trisha: mauth ki wajeh kya hai?
Dr. Aarathy: gala kathne se. kissine bahuth safayi se carotid artery ko kissi sharp cheez se yani koi scalpal se kat diya hai. Itni safai se katdiya ki yeh koi trained insaan hi karsaktha hoon.
Rajbir: security ki byan ki muthabikh jab sagaai shuru hone wala tha yehan kissine current bandh kiya hai. Aur generator bhi; rohan ki mauth uss waqath hogayi. Lag bhag 5 minute yahan current nahi tha. Jab woh jake check kiye pata chala kisine janbhoojke fuse ko unplug kiya aur generator ko bhandh kiya.
Raghav: matalab yeh ek planned murder hai.
Trisha: right. Hume function mein shaamil hui poori guest se pooch taj karna padega. Aur yahan jo koi bhi shaamil thi yani servants, waiters etc ussese bhi.
Raghav: aur hume function ki photos aur video bhi check karna hoga.

Cbi interrogation office

Rohan's entire family and koyal's family had been called for interrogation. Trisha and raghav was interrogating everyone.
Trisha: koyal are you ok? Kya aap humse abhi batah karsaktha hoon?
Koyal nodded her head in yes.
Trisha: toh bataye koyal aap rohan ko kaise janthe the?
Koyal: ji mein rohan ko humari shaadi ki proposal hone ke baad hi mila. Humari ghar mein. Rohan aayi thi apni bhaiya aur bhabhi ke saath muhey milne.
Raghav: aur aap unhe kab se jantha hoon?
Koyal: pichli ek hafte se.
Trisha: what? Aap unhe bas ek hafte milne ke baad shaadi karne ki faisala karli.
Koyal: ji. Papa bahuth interested the jab yeh proposal ke baare mein sunkar. Woh almost shaadi fix kiya tha. Humse milvana just ek formality tha.
Trisha shook her head with disbelief. Raghav noticed her reactions. He had a smile on his face. Trisha stared at him.
Trisha: so aapko yeh shaadi mein interest nahi tha?
Koyal: ji aisa nahi tha. Rohan ek bahuth acha ladka tha. Aur meri family ko bhi pasandh tha. Muhey unhe napasandh karne ki koi wajeh nahi tha.
Both raghav and trisha was looking at koyal with disbelief.
Trisha: tumari aur rohan ke beech sab kuch theekh se chal rahi thi?
Koyal: ji sach kaho toh mein ne rohan ko sirf do baar mila. Ek hafte pehele jab woh aayi thi muhjse milne aur kal humari sagai mein. Jab bhi mein unhe call kartha hoon woh busy hoga. Shaayad apni dostho ke saath bahar. Mujshe utna baath nahi kartha.
Trisha: agar aisa tha toh aap unse shaadi kyun kar rahi thi?
Koyal: ji woh papa
Trisha: ya forget it.
Raghav: aap ke papa ke alwa aapki ghar mein sab yeh risthey se kush the?
Koyal: sach bolu toh nahi mumma aur meri choti behen kavya iss shaadi se khilaf the.
Trisha: kyun?
Koyal: woh rohan hamesha aapni dostho ke saath ghoom rahe the. Woh koi kaam karne mein interested nahi the. Issliye.
Raghav: waise aap kya kartha hai?
Koyal: ji mein ek interior designer hoon. Pichli chaar saal se humari construction company mein interior designing department mein kaam karahi hoon.
Trisha: aap abhi jaa saktha hai zaroorath pade toh hum firse bulalengey.
Koyal's younger sister kavya sharma was interrogated after that.
Trisha: kavya ji aap koyal aur rohan ki shaadi ke khilaf the aisa kyun?
Kavya: woh meri behen ko deserve hi nahi kartha. Meri behen kitni achi hai. Aur woh aapne dostho ke saath aiyashi karna pasandh kartha hai. Sirf woh baath nahi na jane unki life mein kitni ladkiya the. Aur sagai ke pehele din
Raghav: pehele din kya hua?
Kavya: unhe kisi brothel mein arrest karvaya tha.
Trisha: yeh baath aapko kaise pata chala?
Kavya: ji muhey yeh baath raj se pata chala.
Raghav: ab yeh raj kaun hai?
kavya: hamari company ke ek bahuth talented architect hai. Aur woh di ke team member bhi hai.
Trisha: aur aap kya kartha hai?
Kavya: mein ek graphic designer hoon. Pichli ek saal se hamari company ke graphics department sambhal rahi hoon.
Raghav: kya koyal aur ghar mein se kisi ko rohan ki arrest ke bare mein patha tha?
Kavya: mein ne papa aur mumma ko bataya. Papa ne muhey strictly warn kiya di ko yeh baath batane se.
Trisha: filal aap jaa saktha hai kavya.
Trisha: raghav ab hume iss raj ko bulana padega. Mein rajbir se kehkar unhe bulva dengey.
Raghav: ya tab takh hum isse prateek sharma ko aur rohan ke bhai ko interrogate karengey.

Trisha: toh batyiye sharma ji jab aap rohan ke character ke bare mein sab kuch janthe huae bhi koyal ko ussey shaadi kyun karva rahi thi?
Prateek sharma: dekhiye iss umar ke ladke kuch shararathe karthe the. Yeh itni badi baath nahi hai. Ek baar shaadi hogaya toh woh responsible ho jayengey. Aur meri koyal itni achi hai ki woh kisko bhi pyaar se sudharengey.
Raghav: aap choot bol rahi ho sharma ji. Jab koyal ke liye rohan ke proposal aaya tha theekh usi waqath aapki construction company ko mehra's group ki nayi hotel ki construction contract mili. Yeh koi ithifaaq nahi ho saktha. Agar aap chahe tho humare pass aapki company ki contract papers dikhasaktha hai. Bahuth khabaragayi na aap apni company ki nayi contract mehra's group rohan ki mauth ke baad withdraw kiya toh aapko bahuth nukhsan ho jatha aapke company ke liye.
Prateek sharma: haan yeh baath sach hai mere company ke saath mehra's ki new hotel ki construction ka bahuth bada contract offer kiya tha iss proposal ke saath. Issliye mein apni beti ki shaadi rohan ke saath fix kiya tha.
Trisha: koyal aapki beti hai. Koi kutha nahi uski zindagi ke saath kaise saudha karsaktha hai aap?

Rakesh mehra and his wife Hema mehra was called after that.
Trisha : toh batayi rakesh mehra itni badi contract offer karke apni bigade huae bhai ko koyal se shaadi kyun karvarahe the?
Rakesh mehra: mein apni bhai ko ek ache isaan banana chahte the. Woh koi kaam karne mein interested nahi hai. Tab hema ne muhey samjaya rohan ke shaadi karvayengey toh woh responsible hoga.
Hema: ji mein ne hi rohan ke liye koyal ko pasandh karliya. Bahuth baar offical meetings mein aur parties mein humne koyal ko dekha. Bahuth seedhi sadhi ladki hai. Muhey laga yeh rohan ko definitely badlengey.
Rakesh mehra: rohan ke character ke bare mein sab ko pata tha. Koi bhi itni aasani se uske saath risthe judna nahi chathi. Issliye mein ne apni nayi hotel ki construction ki contract sharma ko offer kiya saath saath koyal ki haath bhi maanga rohan ke liye. Muhey pata tha sharma ko business iss duniya mein sabse important hai. Apne parivaar se zyaada. Aur woh yeh offer kabhi nahi tukhrayengi. Jitna mein ne koyal ke bare mein jana muhey pata tha woh apni papa ke khilaf kabhi nahi jathi.
Raghav: lagtha hai aap sab daily soap ki bahuth badi fan hai. Aapki story sunkar aisa lagraha hai apni zindagi mein ek kahani likhrahi thi rohan aur koyal ko lead banakar.
Trisha smiled hearing his sarcastic comment. She wondered how can he always lightens the atmosphere.

Raj was brought for interrogation by that time.
Trisha: so raj batayi aapko rohan ki arrest ke bare mein kaise pata chala?
Raj: ji meri room mate ek journalist hai usne muhey yeh bath bataya
Trisha: jitna hume pata hai aap aur koyal pichli chaar saal se ek team mein kaam kar rahi hai. Phir bhi aap yeh bath koyal ko nahi bataya balki kavya se bataya aisa kyun?
Raj: ji woh mein unhe upset karna nahi chatha tha
Raghav: bahuth pyaar kartha tha na koyal se issliye uski takleef nahi dekh saktha.
Trisha and raj looked at him amazed.
Raghav: mein aaj subah notice kiya tum kiss tarkey se koyal ko console kar rahi thi. Bahar ke logo ko wo sirf ek dosth ya colleague ki concern lagega but ek psychiatrist ko tumari body language se samjh saktha hai tumari feelings ke bare.
(He looked at trisha and continued) itne saal ek saath din raat kaam karahi hai so its natural to fall for a colleague. (trisha lowered her eyes.) Rohan ke bare mein janthe huae bhi aap koyal ko aapki feelings ke bare mein kyun nahi pataya?
Raj: mein ek anadh hoon. Ek orphanage mein pale bade huae. Kuch ache logo ke sponsorship ki wajah se padayi complete kar li. Aur ek architect bani. Jab koyal company join karli aur meri team mein shaamil hui dheere dheere mein unki taraf attracted hone laga. Bahuth pyaari ladki hai. Malik ki beti hai aisa kabhi woh behave nahi ki. Ek aam ladki ki tarah as an intern join karli. Apni kabliyat ki basis par designer ki post mili. Hum sab ke saath ek employee ki tarah kaam karhi hai. Pyaar toh hogaya. Par mein unse kaise batao? Woh hai toh meri boss ki beti aur mera koi parivaar bhi nahi hai. Mein unki dosthi bhi kohna nahi chathi. Koyal iss risthey sirf apni papa ke liye haan kehdhi. Woh kabhi apne papa ke khilaf nahi jaa sakthi. Aur boss ke liye yeh shaadi sirf ek business contract ke saudha the. Woh kisi bhi haal par yeh shaadi rukh nahi sakthi.
Trisha: kahi aisa toh nahi ki koyal ko bachane ke liye tumne rohan ka murder kiya?
Raj: nahi mein ne kuch nahi kiya. Trust me!
Trisha: filaal aap ja saktha hai. Par jab tak yeh case solve nahi hui tum yeh sheher chodh kar nahi jaa sakthi.

Conference hall - evening

They have interrogated each and every guest who had came for the engagement. Also rohan's friends, ex girlfriends and the attenders who worked in the function.
Rajbir: humne sabse poochtaj karli aab tak koi lead nahi hai.
Bikram: aur function ke footage se bhi hume kuch nahi mila.
Trisha: mein ne cyber cell ko contact kiya. Function mein jo bhi shamil the un sabke call records pichli ek hafte ki yaani koyal aur rohan ki shaadi fix hui tabse le ke aaj tak ka manguai hai. Kal takh miljayengi. Hope uss mein se hume koi clue mile. Aur raghav tume kya lagthe kaun ho saktha in sabke peeche?
Raghav: shaakh karne ke liye bahuth log hai. Rohan ki ex girl friends, kavya aise bahuth log par hamare paas koi paka lead nahi hai.
Rajbir: ho saktha haai raj ne yeh kiya ho after all woh koyal se pyaar jo kartha hai.
Raghav: nahi raj nahi hai
Bikram: itni yakeen se kaise keha saktha hai tum?
Raghav: aarathy ne hume bataya kisi trained insaan hi yeh murder kar saktha hai. Raj ek architect hai. Woh kaise itni saafayi se 5 minute se bhi kam samyi mein andhere mein rohan ko kaise marsaktha hai?
Trisha: humne uss angle mein bhi check karli. Function mein mehra's aur sharma's ki family doctors aayi thi. Hum interrogate bhi karli par koi paka sabuth nahi hai unke khilaf. Aur humne sabka fingerprints bhi liya tha. Aarthy ne check karli kiski fingerprints match nahi ho raha hai. Aur upar se killar itni safayi se finger prints ko rohan ke body se hataya. Muhey lagtha hai hum sabka ek aur baar background check karna hoga koi toh surag miljayengey.
Bikram: mein ek aur bar sabka background check kartha hoon.
Rajbir: mein apni khabiryo ko active kartha hoon in sab logo par nazar rekhkengey.
Raghav murmured: aur mera dimaang aaj kaam nahi kar rahi hai. Lagtha hai kisi sooraj ki wajah se heat stroke hui.
Trisha: kuch kaha tumne?
Raghav: nahi! Yeh case thoda complicated hai. Shaak karna hai toh bahuth log hai par koi bhi pakka surag nahi milrahi hai.
They heard a noise towards the door suddenly which resembled the voice of security trying to stop someone from entering inside. Everyone turned towards the door after hearing the noise. A good looking gentleman came towards Trisha. Trisha was astonished to see Sooraj at this hour in her office that too entering like this in to the conference room.
Trisha: what is this sooraj? Is this the way to enter an office?
Everyone understood this is the guy sooraj she was speaking about from morning. Sooraj took her hands and pulled her.
Sooraj: sorry guys you really have to excuse us. I am taking her now with me. It's an emergency.
Trisha tried to protest but sooraj dragged her out.
Everyone was shocked to see the closeness trisha and sooraj shares. Raghav felt extremely angry by seeing sooraj so close to trisha. He unknowingly stumped his fist on table.
Rajbir and bikram was surprised seeing this. They could make out that raghav was extremely angry. Before they could ask anything he left the cabin without talking to anyone. Bikram and rajbir looked each other trying to understand what's going on around them.



Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
thanks for the update dear. off to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Interesting start to the story Uma...
I liked the way you introduced Sooraj in the story. They knew each other pehle se, the comfort level in their conversation was well presented. He got candies for her... lovely gesture...👏
Raghav's irritation on hearing about someone else is justified, as she is not a girl who mingles with someone easily..
Then coming to the case, very interesting with so many suspects... i had a tough time registering each other's name in my mind...👏👏
I'm sure you must have planned the case to have a thrilling end.
Somewhere i anticipate a connection between Sooraj and the case, somehow he must be involved... i may be wrong... iske chances zyada hain... i'm so poor with imaginations👎🏼...but i definitely one thing is for sure that this story is worth the wait for so many days👍🏼🤗
Loved the way Raghav banged his fist while his love was taken away. i hope we get a direct confession in the end.👏👏

Lots of love for this amazing track.❤️
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Such a nice story Uma
Love the starting, so Sooraj and Trisha know eaxh other from college time. Sooraj brought candy for her.
Raghav was so irritated when he heard about sooraj bringing favorite candy for her because only someone who you care only their choices you remember like Raghav for Trisha.
Than coming to the case, such a nice mystery. I love how Raghav and Trisha interrogate every suspect. Specially Trisha getting irritated that how koyal was forced by his parents for marriage. Raghav was happy seeing heras he get assured that she will never maarry in her parents pressure.
No clue who can be the killer and that's what make a mystery more suspenseful and interesting.
I love the line when Raghav said that kisi Sooraj ki wajah se uska dimaag kharrab ho gaya hai) 😆
Though Trisha knew Sooraj but she is strict in her rules so she shouted but Sooraj took her with him. All anger and frustration was visible on Raghav's face. He bang the table and move out.
I am sure that Raghav and Bikram were confused as they don't know why Raghav is getting angry? (ab unhe kya pata in Dono ke beech kya pak raha hai) 😉
Waiting for next update. Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waooo awsm story really.. Jealous Raghav..!!! So Trisha loves Candies. Waoo...looks like the case s very complicated...bohot log hain shaq k dairey main...love the dialogue "Aaj dimag kam nehi kar raha hai...lagta hain kisi Sooraj k wajese heat stroke hua hain" 😆 Sooraj Trisha ko jabardasti le gaya wo bhi infront of Raghav... Raghav ko to gussa ayegahi... Waiting fr next part... Nd ThanThankuu sooo much for the beautiful Update 🤗
Edited by Shaina744 - 9 years ago
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Awesome update ma'am loved it soo much . Thanks for such a awesome story

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