Ek Ristha Aisa Hai! Ratri TS! Last part on pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Awesome start to the story Uma 👏👏
Liked to see Trisha so well versed in kitchen and even made carrot halwa in such short time. The intro of Sooraj came as a surprise and i could imagine him giving her the candies.
Liked her leaving for the office, as she is so particular about her noble job.
So, Raghav got irritated, angry and raged over what Trisha was praising about Sooraj 😳 I liked his jealousy, his inner feelings came out which are unknown to him until now. !
Liked the interrogations. No part left by the team, yet they all are so clueless about the culprit.
Liked Raghav's light comments in between the interrogations and lightening the mood of every one so tensed due to the case !
I loved Raghav's mention of sooraj and hotness taunting Trisha over her new friend 😉 His jealous mood is much much loved !😉
Sooraj came and dragged Trisha, that was too much for Raghav and he left. The closeness of Sooraj and Trisha has come out as a shock to the team.
Strange feeling for Rajbir and Bikram of what's happening. Raghav's fist on the table and Trisha leaving with Sooraj. Many speculations and many words untold and never expressed.
Raghav is shocked with some one's closeness with Trisha. And Trisha, i would now like to see how she talks to Sooraj and then if necessary will explain things to raghav. But it's too early in their relationship, which is of a boss and agent and like friends only.
Will wait for the other moves, and the interrogation taking new turns. Hope Sooraj can help them in the case. Or might be he himself is involved.
Am i thinking too much today ?? 😆
Hugs Uma ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story suspended
I took a lot of pain in between my busy schedule to update this story
I think it's not worth enough story I am upset with response I received
So I am suspending the story
Every writer needs apprenticion to continue further since I am not receiving it I am stopping this story sorry for those who supported me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Az07

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Story suspended
I took a lot of pain in between my busy schedule to update this story
I think it's not worth enough story I am upset with response I received
So I am suspending the story
Every writer needs apprenticion to continue further since I am not receiving it I am stopping this story sorry for those who supported me


What happened Uma...😲
Please don't do this... I just loved the story... I'm eagerly waiting for the next part... please continue the story... its just a lovely track... please please please...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Pls don't do this uma I really love this story. Pls don't discontinue this I am really sorry for late review .Actually had guests at home and exams to .really sorry pls don't do this .I promisedpromise I will give the review today. but pls don't end this .Pls I request
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Uma Please don't do this 😭
I wait so long for this story. I want to know what happened next. A good author never leaves story like this so Please don't suspend it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
thanks for this update dear.awesome start uma .really loved it a lot .loved Soorajs entry a lot .so trisha and sooraj know each other since college days .he's trisha senior .they know about each other soo well .he knows trisha Likes tha candies and trisha knows he like carrot halwa. Their parents have defiantly be shocked after seeing this . loved how trisha made carrot halwa so quickly. Raghav gett
irritated when trisha was constantly talking about sooraj .loved to see a jealous raghav .seeing a jealous raghav is always a treat .wish we saw that in the also .wow the case is soo interesting. simply loved the Case with soo many suspects. loved the RaTri moments in the interrogation room.loved the conference room scene a lot .Raghav say kisi sooraj ki vajah se heat stroke ho gaya.perfectly said .hope trisha understood what he said ..loved the jealous Raghav once again when sooraj dragged trisha with him .he punched his fist on the table that showed how irritated he was seeing their closeness and how much he loved her .I am sure BikRa must be thinking what happened to him thanks for such a wonderful update dear loved it a lot. and really really sorry for late review. pls don't discontinue this wonderful story. Pls I really request .really loved this story. Pls pls continue this
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
sorry for the late review once again. I'm really sorry for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls uma ma'am pls don't suspend this story. This is such a awesome story. Pls don't suspend this one .pls I request. I really love this one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Why Uma ??
Why suspended the story ??
U know how many members are here, and we who posted our comments did not matter you ?? 😕

Please continue, we all have loved the start, please continue !

I request you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: babita..

Why Uma ??

Why suspended the story ??
U know how many members are here, and we who posted our comments did not matter you ??😕

Please continue, we all have loved the start, please continue !

I request you🤗



Every writer needs motivation and acceptance
I took two days for this part and I recived 4 comments it clearly shows the story is not good enough why I should struggle myself when I not getting motivated? I can only apologise to u guys I hope u can understand my emotions

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