The Confrontation : second times the charm !!! updtd - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rine confrontation idea is nice. This will make story more interesting and full of ratri scenes. so I agree with you. keep going 😉waiting for story😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rine,
the starting of the story was nice and Raghav's being a psychiatrist can understand the status of mind when a murderer attempt a murder so reading Anant's dairy scene was a good start for Raghav's character. Rahul as Raghav's friend was nice to create a Ratri scenes. The most loving part when Raghav reply that '' ab tumne bhi to nahi kaha ki tum meri biwi nahi ho.'' this shows Trisha also want to listen herself as Raghav 's wife😉. please update second part soon waiting eagerly for second part and please write it little longer 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a lovely start
Raghav & Trisha in coffee shop mu as a couple by Raghava friend! I so loved the Ratri conversation after Rahul left. They so behave like a husband & wife! Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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One doubt what happened to Trisha while solving Anant's case? Will that be explained in the coming parts?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

One doubt what happened to Trisha while solving Anant's case? Will that be explained in the coming parts?



She got Kidnapped by Anant. Anant is the serial killer from my first fanfic the Eye witness😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Rine,

the starting of the story was nice and Raghav's being a psychiatrist can understand the status of mind when a murderer attempt a murder so reading Anant's dairy scene was a good start for Raghav's character. Rahul as Raghav's friend was nice to create a Ratri scenes. The most loving part when Raghav reply that '' ab tumne bhi to nahi kaha ki tum meri biwi nahi ho.'' this shows Trisha also want to listen herself as Raghav 's wife😉. please update second part soon waiting eagerly for second part and please write it little longer 😳



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Such a lovely start

Raghav & Trisha in coffee shop mu as a couple by Raghava friend! I so loved the Ratri conversation after Rahul left. They so behave like a husband & wife! Continue soon!



Thank you and they do behave like husband wife unintentionally 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rine please update the story waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey sorry i will update soon currently i'm unable to write because i got hairline fracture near my right hand wrist and elbow last week so working with left hand is crappy. Sorry you will have to wait few days more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rine

Hey sorry i will update soon currently i'm unable to write because i got hairline fracture near my right hand wrist and elbow last week so working with left hand is crappy. Sorry you will have to wait few days more.

sorry unaware of your injury. Get well soon.

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