The Confrontation : second times the charm !!! updtd

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Promo

Person : Hey Raghav...To tum aa hi gaye...Meet my old friend Raghav...and that's his wife
Raghav : Trisha(glancing at her)...Hii i'm Raghav Sinha and this is...Trisha
Trisha : Raghav (what's he doing ?)
Person : please meri family me kisi ko nahi pata that you're a CBI officer...so please keep it undercover...and enjoy the party
Raghav : I will

so who's this person asking Raghav and Trisha not to blow their covers ?
stay tuned😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Party Night Trouble-
Trouble calls for us




The White bag murders had been solved 4 days back this is what they had named the case because of constant use of white bags and the culprit Anant Choudhary had been dead too. With the case solved and criminal dead the CBI team had some leisure time. Raghav took off for a day.

As Raghav sat in Cafe Coffee Day thinking about what transpired Anant an IT executive by profession, to not only kill his wife Saumya but three innocent women and if they hadn't found Trisha than possibly...He couldn't think more. Infront of Raghav laid Anant's personal diary which they had recovered from his home in Noida alongwith the corpse of his dead wife and 6 year old daughter Tara. The last date of entry had been that of last week of October before killing his wife and the accidental murder of his beloved daughter. From what Raghav had read it became clear to him that Anant had been exposed to brutality and constant conflicts of his parents, until they both died in a fire accident that burned them alongwith their ancestral home. When Anant had Saumya he thought he'll never let anything harm her. Saumya an aspiring model wanted to be independent so when Tara born she thought of her as a burden whereas Anant thought she had been the most precious gift. Anant dreamt of doing all the things for Tara he expected his parents to do for him. But his happiness short lived as when quarrelling with Saumya, Tara came to show her first prize and at that time Saumya accidently pushed her away which made Tara loose her balance and fall down the stairs. It had been an accident but it gave birth to a monster inside Anant. Raghav thought for long as being a Psychiatrist he knew what Anant had been going through, he had been lonely, depressed ever since childhood. His sole purpose of happiness had been taken away from him and that had been the trigger to begin all the mad man's menace. And what about Joker ? Raghav met him. He had been there infront of his eyes but couldn't be recognized, well that served as salt on a burn injury

Raghav s trial of thoughts got broken by the ringing sound of his phone

Raghav : yes Boss(answering the call)

Trisha : Kaha ho tum...aur kya kar rahe ho

Raghav : I'm at CCD...Beauru ke pass jo he waha...kuch nahi kuch soch raha tha...koi naya case aaya he kya

Trisha : nahi koi case to nahi aaya he...hummari team ke pass...I'm coming there...aur mujhe wo Anant Choudhary ki Diary chahiye

Raghav : Diary...wo mere pass nahi he

Trisha : I know Raghav...okay see you in few minutes

Raghav : yeah(ending the call)

After few minutes Trisha arrived

Trisha : hmmm...Diary to tumhare pass nahi thi to ye yaha kaise aayi(sitting opposite to Raghav and pointing towards the diary which is still on the table)

Raghav : Tum iss diary ki baat kar rahi thi...i thought ki tum dusri diary ki baat kar rahi thi(smirking)

Trisha : Right mujhe Anant ke phone diary bohot interesting lagi iss liyr mujhe wo chahiye...kyuki ussme iss diary ki tarah sadistic explanations nahi he murders ke liye...why are you reading it Raghav ? (softly)

Raghav : I don't know Trisha maine isse kyu padha...par itna tumhe bata sakta hu ki haalat kisi insaan ko bigaad bhi sakte he aur bana bhi sakte he

Trisha : i know Raghav...but i think since the case is closed you should move on...nahi to shaayad tumhe psychiatrist ki zarurat pad jaaye(mischiviously)

Before Raghav can reply he hears his name being called

Person : Hey Raghav Sinha...its right isn't it...long time no see

Raghav : Rahul Sharma...wow man...Tum yaha i mean college ke baad to tum gayaab hi hogaye(giving a hug)

Rahul : I know...but now i'm back...accha hua yaar tum yehi mil gaye...warna mujhe tumhare baareme kisi aur friend se pucchna padta

Trisha : koi fayda nahi hota...kyuki Raghav shaayad hi kisi ke contact me ho(standing next to Raghav)

Raghav : Rahul meet Trisha...she's(cutted by Rahul)

Rahul : let me guess...your wife...Namaste bhabhiji...accha hua aapse bhi mulakat hogayii...Raghav mujhe chalna chahiye...i'm getting late...Par usske pehle...you both are invited today at my engagement ceremony and marriage that's tommorow(giving an invitation card) bye...see you at the venue

Raghav waves a bye

Trisha : tumhara dost puri baat sunta kyu nahi he(disbelieved)

Raghav : ab tumne bhi to nahi kaha usse(smirking)...ki tum meri wife nahi ho

Trisha : tum bhi mana kar sakte the...tumne kyu nahi kaha

Raghav : ab kya kahe mere saamne do log aise khade the jinke saamne mujhe kuch nahi bolte aata...kyuki ek ko khud ki baate karne se fursat hi nahi...aur dusri(raising an eyebrow and looking towards Trisha) meri puri baat sun kar counter questions karti he(smirking)

Trisha : Fine Raghav hum dono ki galati he ki hum dono ne hi deny nahi kiya(blushing)

Raghav : okay so how about a coffee than(smiling)

Trisha : I came here for it only (smiling)


I know its short, but hope you like it 😊

will continue it soon

Read and review 😊



Edited by Rine - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super excited for it. your previous os was wonderful and I am confident that this will be best of your works. waiting eagerly for the promo😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

super excited for it. your previous os was wonderful and I am confident that this will be best of your works. waiting eagerly for the promo😳



Thank you and hope i can write it well 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Promo is awesome. Raghav and Trisha were told not to disclose that they are cbi officers, interesting. I hope that their will be ratri scene about raghav saying trisha as wife in the party and the case story will make them closure to each other. waiting for the first part. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely promo
So the identity is kept hidden & Ratri is presented as a couple😳 super excited 😛
Update soon! Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon Yaar! Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Update soon Yaar! Eagerly waiting

me too! can't wait for story with such an interesting promo. please update it soon yaar. 😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful promo ... Pls update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys i'm really sorry for making you wait for such long but had been busy with college stuff. I'll post first part by saturday. And yeah wanted to ask a question came across this idea
I want to write this investigative shot as a part of confrontation series. Confrontation of Joker and Raghav. If you people agree than i'll pick my story from where my first story ended the eye witness
Please share your views 😊. will be happy to know your opinions 😃

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