MadhVini SS-'I CARE FOR YOU MORE THAN I LOVE YOU' *PART-7*up - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
aww ammu dont mean yaar abh toh madhvini koh mila doh tarpana has done now
btw loved it continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Iqraa17

Wow ur amazing but please use "mein" for mannu as "hum" doesn't go with her personality!

P.s don't mind please 🥱


😕Did i put hum anywhere for manu?? i again went thru it but i didn't found anywhere..plzz tell me na from where you are saying..
and if it is about madhav..then i put hum..coz madhav speaks like that only..he uses hum for everything..even manu use to tease him for that..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: vyoman

So, Madhav ko tadpaa rahi ho..😆.good...jab Manu se milega pyar, gussa sab ek sath uske upar barsayega...Nice update...👏


Haha.. Thanks anu..even i'm thinking same...apna madhav esa hi hai na..uske gusse,zid sabme uska pyar chupa hota hai😉
Edited by ammu92 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: dreamyrose

aww ammu dont mean yaar abh toh madhvini koh mila doh tarpana has done now

btw loved it continue soon


😆I know i'm getting mean..
next time pakka madhvini will be their..😉😳
Thanks for liking🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ammu92


Haha.. Thanks anu..even i'm thinking same...apna madhav esa hi hai na..uske gusse,zid sabme uska pyar chupa hota hai😉


Madhav aur Manu ka pyar hi kuch alag hai...Manu ka na me bhi pyar hai...Madhav ka gussa aur zidd mein bhi pyar hai...Inn dono ke beech sirf pyar hi pyar hai...in dono ko dek kar hum inse pyar kar baite...😆
Edited by vyoman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ammu92


😆I know i'm getting mean..
next time pakka madhvini will be their..😉😳
Thanks for liking🤗


anytime ammu 🤗 make sure their is a full dose of madhvini since in the recent we havent got any good scenes or offscreen segs 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
ammu didi kaha ho 💔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DLSR

ammu didi kaha ho💔



Yhi Hu bolo dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I know dear you are waiting 😆
Was not well these days toh kuch socha nhi
Lets see..hope kal tak kar Lu.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-6

MADHAV was shedding tears,when he feels someone hand on his shoulder.
He turns and lift eyes..

MANU was standing there with a little smile,breathing heavily,sweating all over,
her lips thristy..!!
Madhav looked at her in disbelief being dumbstruck.

MANU-(shaking him) YUVRAJ..??
Finally madhav comes to his sense and realizes he wasn't dreaming,looks at her top to toe and gets furious.he quickly turns either side and wipes his tears and tries to start his jeep..

Manu watches her in dismay and then takes out key from jeep..
MADHAV-(shouts) Manu...??
MANU-(gets shaken) Yuvraj..?? woh...
I know you are angry...
MADHAV-(cutting her in between) Just give me back the keys..(He tries to snatch it but then manu steps back)
MANU- Nooo..you would have to listen to me..(making puppy face)
MADHAV-(gets down from jeep being angry)
Stop being childish and i don't have time for your stupid words..
MANU- No..then i'm not giving till you listen to me..(she hides her hand back)
MADHAV blocks her from both sides and after a little struggle chest to chest,hand to hand he succeeds in snatching it from manu's hold and gives her a wining look..but then they get aware of recent proximity..they backs off..
Madhav jolts her and gets back to jeep,Manu was standing there in disbelief with the recent rudeness of madhav towards her..But then she calls him.. Yuvraaj..?? Yuvraaj?? But madhav doesn't answer..suddenly manu's eyes fell on those anklet which madhav threw just some minutes before..
Madhav was about to start his jeep when he sees injured foot of manu in mirror..and gets shocked.
He hurriedly leaves his jeep and runs to her..
MADHAV- Manu..show me your foot??
MANU-(trying to hide it)Yuvraaj its nothing leave it..
MADHAV-(jerks her hand getting angry and sits down) Just show me.. and lifts her skirt and sees her foot injured and bleeding
"What have you done.." (in a low tone) He makes her sit nearby stone and rushes back to his jeep to get some cloth and water..
MANU was amused by his concern..she thinks..just few seoconds ago he was so rude to me and now so much care..she smiles a little..
Madhav comes back..tears a little part of cloth damps in water and cleans her wounds..she winches in pain..
Aahhh..!!
Madhav gets concerned looks at her then again blows some air and starts to clean it slowly and slowly taking care of that it may not pain too much..
He then starts scolding her..
MADHAV-Who told you to come here?? and how did you get so much injuries?
Wait? Did you took the shortcut to jungle?? (he looks at her questioningly)
MANU- unwillingly nods yes..
MADHAV- What? Manu..are you crazy?
You know na how dangerous it is? What if something may have happened to you? How would i have been...(he stops when he sees manu glaring at him)
He by then was finished with dressing her wound..so he gets up..
MANU-(holds his hand and gets up) Takes his hand and tells him..
You also got hurt na..!! (showing him his wounds)
[EYELOCK]
Madhav wasn't aware of this,he didn't know that when he hit his hand it got bleeding..
But then she got to know,without seeing me..and came all along this way just for it..He smiles a little with pleasure..after all this was the only thing he has known since childhood that manu had to come anyway if he is injured...
SLOWLY HIS SMILE VANISHED..
Where did you lost manu? Why then so much barriers in between us? why us?

Madhav was thinking all this when took the remaining cloth,damps it in water and touches it to his wound..he winches in pain and takes off his hand from her(Being angry)

MADHAV- I don't need all these..I'm fine
So much pain is already there in heart that now these little wounds won't get me killed..
MANU shouts.."Madhav... if you repeat it na..thappad pad jaega kasam se"
[Madhav smirks and tries to,but manu again holds his hand to stop)

MADHAV- Let me go manu..plzz
MANU- No ..first let me dress your wounds..
MADHAV-(gets angry) He holds her by her hairs..
How..?? Tell me how are you going to treat my wounds when you yourself make it fresh everytime..?
(He tighten his hold and manu Closes her eyes in pain..)
What was you saying sometime back "YUVRAJ"
I'm prince for you na...
(Manu tries to touch his face but he twist her hand to back and pulls her closer)
You think you will do whatever comes to your mind..
when you wish you will call me yuvraj..to let me know i'm stranger to you..
and when you wish you will call Madhav to show your rights on me..
(Both were teary eyed now..)
What you think han manu?? nothing hurts me,don't i have heart? Don't you know for whom it beats? Do you know how it feels when you calls me YUVRAJ?
Do you even know how it feels when you say..you don't belong me?? I...I feel like one half part of mine has been cut down..
MANU-(Manu winches in pain..you hurting me..!!)
MADHAV- You know what..(he releases her and pushes back) I just don't care..
(He was disgusted at her)
Go back to your home,Warna log kya kahege ki ek devrakshika sunsaan sadak pe itni der tak yuvraj ke sath kya kar rahi thi..
He turns to go..
MANU- Aap hame aaj lene nahi aaege mahel wapas le jane??
Madhav gets surprised to hear it.."Was she about to return today?"
But then he composes himself and goes ahead..
MANU- Aaa jab tak jawab nahi dege..hum yahi khade rahege..
MADHAV starts his jeep..

MANU-(shouts) I'm waiting for your answer..
(SHE looks for her answer..)
MADHAV- You better leave for your home or i just don't care at all...
(and he drives off)
Manu gets upset..and goes and pick those anklets..she again looks at madhav going..and after a while he was far away from her sight..
She cries holding those anklets..
-*-

Madhav was driving in anger and dissapointment..and have came long way..
When flashes of manu's injured foot comes to his mind..and he stops his jeep with a jerk..
(He gets disturbed..)
Shit.. How can i leave her alone that to in such state..o-god madhav how she would have gone home..(he hits his hand on steering) Aaahh..!!
How can i be so stupid,in my anger i didn't realized about her injuries...
He quickly takes a U-turn and speeds back to the same spot where he has left her and stops..
He looks here and there but Manu wasn't there..He then again drives little more ahead..but still manu was not there..
He gets guilty.. Uff.. she may have gone.. itna time hogya.. ab tak to wo ghar pahuch bhi gyi hogi..(He takes a deep breathe)
Okk madhav get back to your work..you already have past much time.. saying this he starts his jeep again and drives back..

[Manu was shown still waiting there under a tree shed dozing as she got tired but madhav missed to see her]

[TO BE CONTINUED]


[NOTE- Here i have updated..😆 plzz read it and let me know..
Well the next part is also ready i'll update it soon..till then enjoy this only😳
Sorry if i disappointed you all😭]
Edited by ammu92 - 9 years ago

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