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SO FRIENDS HERE IS ONE MORE STORY FOR YOU😉
I THOUGHT AB SOCH HI LIYA HAI TO WHY NOT SHARE IT WITH YOU ALL... I KNOW I KNOW I'M NOT THAT GOOD IN WRITING STORIES😭 BUT WILL TRY... AND U ALL ARE WELCOME TO GIVE ME LEFT,RIGHT PUNCHES AFTER READING IT😆
INDEX: [CLICK HERE]
Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 2
Part 3- Page 4
Part 4- Page 8
Part 5- Page 10
Part 6- Page 13
PART-1
Its been one week MadhVini were trying hard to ignore each other.
Manu has decided to fulfil her duty coz she is scared if she gets distracted from her duty something bad may happen..to raj-parivar,to her madhav..
In this while Madhav fears if he tries hard to impose his love on manu,he may lose her forever,atleast now she stays infront of his eyes..so he has decided to stay away from her as possible and let her fulfil her duty..but love..ahh he can't stop loving her ever till his last breath.
After all LOVE is not all about getting...!!
[IT WAS MORNING..]
(MADHAV was in his room..coming out after taking bath..wrapped in white towel around his waist..he was looking hot..hairs all wet..there were few drops of water in his body..which was shining by the sunlight coming from his window.. what a physique,anyone could drool over him..)
MADHAV- (talking to himself) "Aaj to maharaj hampe jarur naraj hoge.." (he put dark black pant,white tee and a dark color jacket..set his hair in a mirror and hurriedly came out of his room shutting his door behind)
[SCENE SHIFTS INTO THE HALL]
(BADI RANI was instructing the maid to set the breakfast table,Maharaj and other family members will be coming any time there)
[SCENE SHIFTS TO MADHAV]
HE was literally running along the corridor to reach in the hall on time..murmuring to himself
MADHAV- uff..kisi ne hame jaldi uthaya bhi nahi..ye sevak bhi kisi kaam ke nahi hai,inki to aaj hum khabar lete hai
munim ji ke sath bahar bhi jana tha kahi hume der na hogya ho.. ( he was so busy in himself that he collided to some one..oopss)
MANU- Aaa...(she had a basket full of flowers which blew up into the air,and madhav held her in the nick of time from felling down)
[she was now into his arms..madhav's hand was all around her waist..and she was pulling his jacket with force to balance herself...EYE LOCK.. They were so close when they realized their position and parted their ways with a jerk]
MANU- yuvraj dekhiye apne kya kiya..(little annoying) sare phool gira diye..
MADHAV- Umm..(he was still in the moment back,when he realized what manu said)
maaf kijieyega..
MANU- maafi,kya maafi? ab hum badi rani ko kya dege unhone ye phool puja ke liye mangae the..ab ye to chadne se rahe,hame firse jake laana hoga baag se..( she became upset and sits to recollect all the flowers)
[MADHAV who was all staring manu unknowingly also sits there to help her.. (he was checking out her... ohh.. how beautiful she was,her eyes like a shining star,her lips like a rose petal,her hairs was untied letting some of them coming to her face,they were all wet looked liked she came just after taking bath... Manu removed back some of her hair strands coming towards her face with a jerk only to fall on madhav's face...he got all lost in her fragrance.. he was mesmerized by her beauty and simplicity..she was wearing a lehnga of cherry red color with minimum jwellery ..she was looking elegant as a newly bride..]
[SCENE SHIFTS TO HALL]
MAHARAJ- yuvraj..?? (calling for him)
yuvraj kaha hai? ( asking to badi rani)
BADI RANI- aate hi hoge.. aajkal wese bhi wo apni jimmedariyon pe dhyan dene lage hai.
aap chinta na kare hame sevak ne suchit kiya tha.. wo bas aate hi hoge.. aap bethiye hum nasta lagate hain..
MAHARAJ- ji
[SCENE SHIFTS TO MADHVINI]
Madhav comes back into sense after listening to maharaj voice calling him..manu was busy in collecting flowers again in basket
MADHAV-ohh ...hum chaltey hain,hame jana hoga ...maaf karna manu humne janbuj ke nahi kiya.. (he stands and starts to go while speaking to her) maaf karna manu abhi tumhari madat nahi kar paege..hame jaana hai,pehle se hi der hogye hain...
(suddenly he stops at the stairs and realizes what he said so he turns back to look at manu who was looking at him..)
MADHAV- "hamara matlab tha maaf kijiyega Devrakshika,hum is samay jara jaldi me hain" (he had a kind of disappointing look on his face..then he turn and leaves)
MANU was kinda hurt by how madhav called her devrakshika( she lost in few moments back when she was about to fall and madhav held her so close that they both could sense their breathe,how madhav said manu? and again how he corrected himself and called her devrakshika.. this all brought pain and tears in her eyes dropped on her palm when she realized she was crying... she wiped her tears and managed herself back)
MANU- ye hum bhi na.. na jane kya kya sochne lagtey hum..kya galat kaha yuvraj ne,hum devrakshika hi to hain aur is tarah ke vichar apne man me lana hame shobha nhi deta..
islie ye sab chor manu aur abhi soch badi rani ko kya jawab degi... firse baag jana hoga..uff ...ye sab jaldi saaf kar..
[SCENE SHIFTS TO HALL]
Maharaj saw yuvraj coming down from stairs...
MAHARAJ- yuvraj kaha the ab tak aap?
MADHAV- shama chahtey hai maharaj... (he bent to touch his foot to take blessing)
MAHARAJ- Jeete rahiye.. (he makes him stand by his shoulder) hame apka is rajya ke kaamo ke prati lagav dekh k bada hi acha lag raha hai yuvraj,hame khushi hai ki ab aap apni jimmedariyon ko samajhne lage hai..apki maa bhi hame yahi bata rahi thi..(he smiles along with madhav)
(Madhav goes and give a side hug to his mother)
MAHARAJ- yuvraj apko yaad hai na aaj apko munim ji k sath bahar jana hai..? wo bahar apka intezaar kar rahe hai..
MADHAV- ji maharaj... hame yaad hai.. hum bas nikaltey hai
BADI RANI- yuvraj kya aap nasta nahi karege?
YUVRAJ- hame bhukh nahi hai maa... hum chaltey hain.. pranam..(and he leaves)
[YUVRAJ comes out and walks towards the cart outside the palace, when he stops on the gate and looks towards one of the soldier]
YUVRAJ- suno??
SOLDIER- Ji yuvraj.. aadesh kare..!!
YUVRAJ- hamare baag se jakar ek tokri phool tod lao,,..aur suno jakar badi rani ko de aana.
SOLDIER- Ji yuvraj ho jaega..
YUVRAJ- Humm.. jald se jald..isme der na hone paye,aur kisi ko pta nahi chalna chahie ki humne tumhe ye kaha tha.. ab jaldi jao..
SOLDIER-Ji
[Madhav takes a deep breath of satisfaction then moves toward his cart and leaves]
After a while..
SOLDIER- Pranam badi rani..!!
BADI RANI- ji kahiye?
SOLDIER- Ji woh..ye phool apko dene the..
BADI RANI- Phool?? ye to humne devrakshika ko.. acha thik hai unhone hi bhijwaya hoga..rakh dijiye waha..(soldier keeps it and leaves)
Manu enters after a while..
[she was scared.. things has got little changed between badi rani and manu after the disclosure of MadVini's marriage..though they both try to be normal but she knew badi rani didn't liked it way too much when she is around yuvraj]
MANU-pranam badi rani..
BADI RANI- devrakshika.. aaiye na khadi kyu hai..
MANU- badi rani ..woh ham phool bas abi le aate..
BADI RANI- (CUTTING HER) Arey phool han mil gaya hame...dhanyavaad..(he gives her a smile) Sevak ne hame aake de diya tha..
MANU- In mind-mil gaya? She then looks at the flowers kept at the corner table..(she thinks-Ye kha se aaya hamne to kisi ko phool leke nahi bheja... suddenly she guesses someone... Toh kya yuvraj ne...??(she stars smiling surprisingly out of love)
Nahi nahi... woh to kab ka nikal gaye yha hai bhi nahi.. fir..? (then she brushed all her thoughts aside)
jo bhi ho garud dev ki kripa hai...
(and she sits with badi rani to make garlands for prayers)
[IT WAS AFTERNOON]
Madhav has returned back..
there was no one in the hall except some servants.
He began to step toward his room,when he was stopped by breeze coming from either side..he looked into that direction,in-front of him was manu's room..
he could smell the same fragrance which he felt in morning from manu..
He saw manu thru window,she was busy searching something..books were all spread on bed..she was running from one corner to other corner of her room.. A little smile spread over yuvraj face..he was lovingly looking at her.. when someone knocked at her door..
MAID- Devrakshika ji kya hum apka bhojan le aaye?
MANU- (in a bit hurry) Ummm... bhojan...
nahi rehne dijiye...
MAID- par apne subah se kuch nahi khaya? aur badi rani ne kaha tha apko bhojan kara dene.
MANU- (she smiled at her and badi rani's concern) ji dhanyavad ...par abhi hamare pass bilkul bhi waqt nahi hai..hume Devsena bua se milne jana hai,hum aakar kha lege.. (she hurriedly rushes out taking a bag)
[She meets yuvraj in the corridor who was watching all this scene standing there,Their eyes meet each other and an awkward gaze transfers.. she passes by him silently..Madhav also doesn't say anything and watches her going]
Maid sees yuvraj and goes to him
MAID- pranam yuvraj..!! kya ham apka bhojan laga dein?
MADHAV-(looks at manu who was leaving via. gate,he turns to maid and says-) Nahin.. hame jab bhukh lagegi hum apko bata dege..abhi hum apne kamre me jaa rahe hai.(he thinks manu ne kuch bhi nahi khaya fir hum kese kha saktey hai then he leaves for his room)
[IT WAS 7:30 PM]
Manu returns back..Madhav notices her coming back from upstairs..(he was very much worried about her as it was getting dark and she haven't returned back,he was about to go in search of her when she herself comes and he takes a breathe of relief)
MANU- uff.. bahut thak gaye..while she was heading toward her room..she was stopped by Badi rani.
BADI RANI- Devrakshika..?
MANU- ji
BADI RANI- Hum apka hi intezar kar rahe the.. darasal kal maharaj ke kuch mehmaan aarhe hai,humne unke liye kuch tofhe mangwae hai..kya aap unme se pasand karne me hamari madad karegi?
Manu- ji badi rani.. jarur (she smiles a little,and choti rani who was watching all this from a distance..fumes) she then leaves with Badi rani to her room.
(Madhav who was watching all this..thinks of something and leaves)
[IT WAS 8:30 PM]
Manu was now free and was walking thru corridor to her room..murmuring to herself..
MANU- manu beta.. aaj ka din to kitna thaka dene wala tha.. pehle raj mahal ke idhar udhar ke kaam,fir bua se milne jao fir waha se garud math... aur btao tune to ab tak kuch khaya bhi nahi...wahh
ahaan..(shen cried a little)..ab to bahut bhukh lagi hai..bas kuch khane ko mil jae.. par pehle kapde badal lu,fir rasoi me jati hu..(she was too tired to walk and rats were running in her stomach)
In all this while she has reached to her room..
She opened the door with a push..
and she was SHOCKED..
[TO BE CONTINUED...]
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