MadhVini SS-'I CARE FOR YOU MORE THAN I LOVE YOU' *PART-7*up - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

heyy
I'm new in forum I really loved madhvini love story
plzzz continue soon


Awww...thankeww so much😉 i'm glad you liked it,and welcome to the forum🤗
what should i call you??😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vyoman

Dekh ammu...tera story ki kitni demand hai...ab toh update banta hai na...😊


Haha.. its a big responsibility now na anu..😳
its gonna be tough to please everyone now
well updating soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu92


Haha.. its a big responsibility now na anu..😳
its gonna be tough to please everyone now
well updating soon😛


Come on...U will do it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-4

I returned back home after a whole tiring day.These days nothing cheers me up,everything seems to be void..Yes ofcourse in absence of manu.

BADI RANI- Arey yuvraj aap aagye..(she surfaces her hand over my hair) look how tired you seem these days..go get freshen up..we all were about to have dinner..its good you came.
come join us soon.
I gave a faded smile but was pleased with motherly love..so i went to my room,get freshen,changed my clothes to some comfortable one and came downstairs..whole family was awaiting me to join and all were laughing and having conversation..when i found that my sister(if you have any doubt plzz go thru 4th/5th episode you may find madhav do had one sister,well i don't know whom she was from so i made her his elder sis only) with her hubby has also arrived..ohh..so that's why everyone is so happy today..i was happy to see my sister.

I joined them and gave a hi-5 to my sis..
MADHAV- So hey fatty.. you here for dinner? what happened jiju doesn't serve you well?(he winks)
SISTER- Ohh please han..me and fat? not at all..and your jiju..
JIJU- whoh.. what? what me? look madhav i take care of her well..but she still have complains.. i tell you these ladies na(everyone laughs)
MADHAV- i understand jiju.. she is a headache since childhood..i dunno how you bear her.(smirks)
SISTER-What do you mean..? (makes a crying face) Mom am i headache for you?
BADI RANI- No sweetheart you are my angel.. madhav you don't tease her okay.
CHOTI RANI- (in mind) what angel? whole family is a bunch of vampires..sucking my blood day and night..and see my husband he doesn't care for anything..god dunno how i landed in this mess.(she makes faces)
While eating some of the pieces falls on jiju's shirt..
SISTER- Honey plzz be careful na..see what have you done..let me wipe it..(and she wipes it by napkin exchanging a romantic glare)
All family member controls their laugh seeing them..when madhav breaks the awkward silence by saying to jiju..
'Oppss Honey..take this one too(offering one more napkin)..'(Everyone brust out in laugh..and both of them gets embarrassed)

All are done with dinner and was about to go their room..when going towards my room i saw my sister and jiju talking..
Its been such a relief to take leave and join you here..past days i was really busy..couldn't get time for my wife(facing his wife) Umm..thanks hubby dear for accompanying me here..you see i missed you so much these days..(she makes a puppy face)
awww..i missed you too dear and he hugs her..coming here was best decision and living around family is such a fun na..she nods and hugs him back saying "Love you" .."I love you too" he replies..
[Madhav leaves from there smiling and having a kind of satisfaction that her sister got a best husband,who will alwaz keep her happy..Its only because of him my sister was able to quit smoking..he helped and supported her so much]

He enters his room,closes the door behind and sits in a couch near his window.

Its been 3 days Manu went to badi amma and i have not seen her.Badi amma was ill these days and manu wanted to take care of her,so that she can ask for her forgiveness and fill up those void in between them which has raised after revelation of their marriage truth.
For badi amma her family pride mattered alot,which she thinks got injured coz of manu(well i think it was all because of me,i was so afraid to lose her that i married her..but see i still lost her)
But badi amma loved manu alot and that's why faking those anger she got ill.and devsena bua suggested this was the best time to fix everything and asked manu to come.So his father came here to took her.
I had seen those concern in her eyes while leaving..she was glaring at me..as if she wanted to get assured will i be fine in her absence.. and me .. I just doesnt want her to go..coz i never trusted that she can be safe anywhere far from me.but this time badi amma needed her so i conveyed thru eyes..I'll be fine..
but as soon as she started moving out i dunno what happened to me i called her name and ran to her only to HUG her tight "Plzz be back soon..I'll miss you" (she nodded and left)
When i turned around i saw lot of questioning eyes glaring at me..some in anger some in shock..
To avoid this situation i ran upstairs without uttering a word.
I had an indecisive faith when it comes to marriage.I liked her and were together since childhood when she was just three and i five.
She was clumsy and silly when i first met her,clothed in white frock..and we both clashed outside temple lawn where she was trying to make rangoli... I mistakenly stepped onto it and she began to cry..Out of chivalry and manners i sat there and tried to fix colors,when she jerked my helping hand..I again tried to extend my hand when she again pushed it away.
That hurt my self-pride..afterall i was a prince and this tiny girl she doesn't know how to behave with a prince..i was about to pour my anger when she looked at me enlarging her eyes..there were tears in it..she again bowed down and started fixing her rangoli..
I dunno seeing her tears where my self-pride ran away and i calmed down looking at her..
She was looking back and forth constantly..It confused me what was this girl doing and i tried to oversee what's there in back..when my eyes fell on one more very beautiful rangoli made there.. "OHH.. so she is trying to copy that"
[I think that was made by devsena bua...
Devsena bua...(taking a deep breath) a lady who alwaz remained manu's ideal.since childhood manu alwaz tried to be like her..be it in looks,praying,cooking,dancing..or whatever.She alwaz tried to become like her...and i guessed this only thing turned my fate ill]

I started laughing on her coz in making rangoli she had painted herself and stained her white frocks with colors..She looked ant me asking "WHAT??"
I pointed towards her face and started laughing more..she started rubbing her hands over her face to wipe but only to add more..seeing her struggling i offered my hankey to her which she took instantly and wiped her face..
I was looking at her..such a pretty face with lot of pride on it,innocence in her eyes,her long hairs covering her body..i smiled at her...she was looking cute.
when she was done with her rangoli she smiled and then looked at me with winning look..she really made a nice one not that nice but yes it looked quite good.
In this mean while Badi amma called her,it was prasad distribution time..so she ran towards temple but then stopped in mid,came back,holded my hands and dragged me too with her to temple..
we both extended our hands to badi amma..she gave prasad to both and asked me that my mom is waiting for me and i should leave..then she turned to her and after noticing what mess she had made out of her scolded her and asked to follow her to change..
manu turns to me and thanks me..i was confused.. just few seconds back i spoiled her rangoli and instead of throwing tantrums she is thanking me.. So i asked her " for what? i didn't do anything to thank"
she said "yes you didn't..but you were there all along with me in my struggle,that's enough to thank na" (I smiled at her)
then she started leaving when i shouted "What's your name?"
she replied "Manu"
Myself "Madhav"... when she stops and turns to me saying.."Did i asked.."
I got confused when she smiled back and said "i know you are Yuvraj madhav" (and she ran away behind badi amma)
I was surprised...she did knew i was prince.. yet she was giving so much attitude when i spoiled her rangoli..What kind of girl is she?
Well i was alwaz surrounded with people who keeps following my orders and talking sweet..but this was the first time someone plainly ignored what i was..that hit my pride..but deep down i was pleased to meet someone who was different...
How cliche colliding to someone was..i guess i had found a new friend by then..Within a time we became very good friend and there was never an end to our friendship by then..

I alwaz found her different and pleasing..but it were boys of my age who would keep calling her awkward and silly in style..
But with time..she changed to entirely different person(not by heart,only by looks)
Demure in ways,full of grace,bubbly yet disciplined and beautiful.and i as usual grew up to be more arrogant,stubborn yet mannered in own way..
But for me manu was alwaz best thing to happen me,my best friend,whom i can ask to accompany me anytime anywhere and when she denied me i used to emotionally blackmail her..i alwaz felt her to be mine..i used to impose my right on her as if she was my property..

I remember once i was angry on her and were not on talking terms,yet she tried hard to please me back..but i was stubborn..
when one day in school i saw one of my class mate boy chit-chatting with her and sharing her tiffin.I got so angry on that guy that i punched him and manu with me to the pther corner of park and sat beside her saying "How dare he? only i and i have the right on you and to share tiffin from you"
To which she smiled and offered me one bite but i turned my face,but she again brought her hand inward and i being a kid ate it holding her hand and then took the whole tiffin from her saying.."you know how much i missed you..and those parathe's of badi amma"

I did all these without knowing that we have began to have feelings for each other..
She never articulated it and i never popped this question..
Well our was a dumb love story..(smiles a little)
We were totally unaware of this felling untill this kheer poisoning incident took place and i was instigated by choti rani maa that its something more than friendship..

As things have failed through a rough spot between us and I miss the good times alot...

When clock strikes and i came out of my deep thinking to see its past 11..and i realized how late it was..
I had so many pending works tomorrow and have to complete my sleep before i look gloomy tomorrow in morning..
So i went to bed side switched all lights.. pulled my blanket.. wished manu sweet dreams in heart and went for a warm sleep..!!


Next morning i got up early at 6am and got ready.when i came downstairs i saw mom packing some stuffs.. i wished her good morning with a side hug and asked her what's all this?
to which she replied its all to be sent to badi amma house.. she asked me long before but i didn't got time and i have packed some fruits also in extra for her to get well soon(she gives a smile)
I got in thoughts..its been three days i haven't seen manu's face for once..this is a good chance and i will meet badi amma also..but how to make mom agree..
MADHAV- Maa ye sab kon le ja raha hai?
BADI AMMA- yuvraj sevak hi to le jaege na..
MADHAV- maa hum kya keh rahe the ... hum usi taraf jaa rahe hai.. agar hum hi de aaye to..aur..aur fir isi bahane hum badi amma ka haal bhi jaan lege.. unhe bhi acha lagega..
BADI RANI-(Gets in thinking) and then agrees..
to which madhav hugs her being elated..
MADHAV- Hum abhi apni jeep nikalte hai..aap ye saman rakhwa dijiye..

[after a while he gets into jeep and drives away..he was very excited and happy to see his manu,his wife after so many days..]


[TO BE CONTINUED]


[SO FRIENDS I HAVE UPDATED THE FOURTH PART..
YOU CAN GIVE YOUR SPECIAL SUGGESTION AND DO LET ME KNOW HOW WAS THAT??..SORRY I HAD TO ADD MADHAV'S POINT OF VIEW HERE.. I DUNNO HOW YOU ALL WILL LIKE IT..😉
YOU ALL ARE FREE TO PUNCH ME 😆]
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
awesomeee too good lovelyy wwaiting for next asap
Edited by sweta2005 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...superb...👍🏼

What would be Madhav's and Manu's reaction when they see each other after 3 days...?
Edited by vyoman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: vyoman

<font color="#0000ff">Wow...superb...👍🏼</font>


<font color="#0000ff">What would be Madhav's and Manu's reaction when they see each other after 3 days...?</font>



Thank you anu 😳
Was very tired today but had to update..all were asking na 😳
Lets see next.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
maaza a gaya padh ke ammu didi
plz continue this nice work of your's didi😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DLSR

maaza a gaya padh ke ammu didi
plz continue this nice work of your's didi😆


Awww.. thankeww dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankew kanak..🤗

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