MadhVini SS-'I CARE FOR YOU MORE THAN I LOVE YOU' *PART-7*up - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005


Please don't do this write it for us pleaseee



But no one is interested anymore here to visit.. 😭 who will will..yes except you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
ammu didi aap mujhe bhulgayi kya??
*pout*
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-7


It was 6:30 in the evening.Madhav stops his car near Manu's house.
He goes into flashback when manu asked him "Will you not come to take me back to palace?"
again when he pushed her and left saying "You should better return to home"
when he didn't realized when she was hurt and he left her there all alone.He Then remembers how he waited for her here in her house for so long but she didn't arrived,How he was excited and impatient for just one glance of her but he had to leave disappointing,How he hit his hand and it got bleeding...
Madhav closes his fist in anger..he looks towards Badi amma's house and mutters "Don't think manu i have came here coz i have forgiven you,I just came coz...coz??(he pauses)
(He didn't had answer to his own question..why was he here when he was angry?) Uff..whatever.. I came coz i just don't wanna give you next reason to blame me that i didn't came to take you...saying this he jumps from his jeep and moves towards her door..

He reaches near to door and was about to knock when he listens lot of noise coming from inside..Like someone shouting and crying in anger..
MADHAV- What's going inside?(he thinks) and then knocks..
Manu's father came and opened the door...
MANU FATHER- Yuvraaj..?? aap is waqt yha? (he got a wide smile on his face and ran outside leaving madhav behind..(madhav got boggled by this act)
Manu?? Manu..?? he again comes back to madhav and asks.. Manu..??

MADHAV- Haan..Wo hum manu ko hi le jaane aaye hai mahel wapas..umm..kha hai wo?

DEVSENA- Kha hai wo matlab? wo apke sath nahi hai kya?? (She panicks and runs to madhav)
Kha hai manu?
MADHAV- Hamare sath? wo hamare sath kyu hogi ..Hum to abi Silampur se aarhe hai..hame waha kuch kaam tha..(now he was getting fear of something wrong)
Aapka kya matlab hai? mai samjha nahi...(He looks at trio questioningly)

BADI AMMA- Manasvini subah se ghar nahi lauti hai..
DEVSENA- Sab jagah dhund lia humne par wo nahi mili..Toh hame laga shayad wo apke sath..aksar wo bina batae kahi jati hai to wo aapse hi milne...mera matlab hai..wo jis tarah subah yha se gayi thi hame laga wo apse hi milne gayi hogi..
BADI AMMA- Par ab subah se sham hogyi,uska pta hi nahi hai(she falls devasted)
Pata nahi ye kha gayi hai? Use iski saza jarur dege hum(she cries)..
hey garud dev...just protect her..
MADHAV- (angry) She didn't returned and you all didn't bothered to complain to bade raja..why no soldiers are sent to search her? (He panics where did she go)
He runs outside shouting Nothing will happen to my manu..Nothing..

He comes to jeep and star wondering where did she go? If she didn't returned home where is she? he was getting fearful..
He drives his jeep away in search of manu...wandering from place to place..temple,to her friend home,To pandit ji home..streets,roads,their childhood meeting spot..everywhere but there was no whereabouts of her..
He stops his jeep at mid of market and shouts MANU... where are you?(tears fell from his eyes)
Where to find you?where have you gone? i hope you are safe..suddenly his mind strikes to his enemy..MAYA...? and he clutches his finger in anger,,,
I sway if in this you are involved i will finish all your clan..

Scene shifts to jungle:
Manu is lying on stone unconsciously..
Takshika watches her smirking..
TAKSHIKA- Ye to devrakshika hai..Ye is halat me yha kya kar rahi hai..(she wonders)
I must tell this to Maya..She will get happy and then we may decide what to do.This time i won't leave her.(she transforms to snake and leaves)

Scene shifts to maya:
MAYA- Ye tum kya keh rahi ho takshika? (She smiles in surprise)
TAKSHIKA- Yes maya..i have seen her with my own eyes lying there all alone
MAYA- Bahut khub..To machli khud hi jaal me phasne chali aayi hai(Laughs)
This time no one is with her..awww..poor baby who will save her now(Laughs)
(Takashika laughs too)
Lets go to her(She smirks)
[In mind-Its a good opportunity my yuvraaj is also not with her,now i can finish her easily..and this time i don't need to back off,last time i had to coz i didn't wanted to harm yuvraaj..but now devrakshika won't be safe(angry) and then no one would be able to snatch my madhav from me.

Scene shifts to Madhav:
Madhav tries to start his jeep but it doesn't starts..he gets down to check and sees the engine has heated..he bangs his hand along jeep in anger..
It starts raining and he closes his eyes lifts it to sky to feel those water drops..
"plzz god plzz show me light..plzz help me..Manu is my life i can't loose her"

While closing eyes he get FB of when Manu had said..."I won't leave from here till you answer me..i will wait here only..and he left without paying heed"
(He opens his eyes in shock..)
Oh-shit...(He runs along road pushing people to reach same place)

BG plays
Ishq wo bala hai..
Ishq wo bala hai..
jisko chuhaa isne wo jala hai..
Dil se hota hai shuru ..
Dil se hota hai shuru..
Par kambakht sar pe chadha hai..
Kabhi khud se..kabhi khuda se
kabhi zamane se lada hai..
Itna hua badnaam phir bhi..
Har zubaan pe ada hai..

Unconscious manu tries to open her eyes when rain touches her face.
She hardly tries to stand but till then maya and clan have reached there..She sees them shockingly..
Madhav was running...

BG- Ishq ki sazishein..
ishq ki baaziyaan...
Haara mein..khel ke..
do dilon..kaa juaa..
Maya throws her hitting from her tail..Manu falls by stone,her head starts bleeding.
She again lifts herself and looks towards maya angrily..Maya and clan had a laugh.

While running madhav slips and gets hurt his hand via rocks,and it stars bleeding.He gets worried for manu seeing his blood..he again stand and runs..

BG-Kyun tune meri fursat ki,
Kyu dil me itni harqat ki,
Ishaq me itni barkat ki..
Ye tune kya kiya..
Phiru ab Mara maara main..
Chand se bichda tara mein
Dil se itna kyu haara main..
Ye tune kya kia..

MAYA-I have to settle many things with you manasvini..(she shouts) This time no one is here to come in between you and me..
MANU- You are wrong maya..i alwaz have blessings of my god with me..and i have faith in her..with that faith i will fight with you.
MAYA angrily lifts her and throws on ground..She again lifts and throws her on ground..
Manu screams in pain..her legs got hurt and blood comes out of her mouth..

Madhav here while running gets hit by coming vehicle and he falls down rolling over ground.He gets bruised severely..people starts gathering and saying 'ohh..he is our yuvraaj' What happened to him..they pick him up..Mahav stands with much difficulty but then jerks all of them and says " I am fine,lemme go"
And he tries to run with much difficulty by his hurt legs..He murmurs.."nothing will happen to my manu".
He then stops near by shop and drags one cloth from it and ties it to his bleeding leg.then again stands determined and runs ahead.

BG-Saari duniya se jeet ke mai aaya hoon idhar..
Tere aage hi mai haara kiya tune kya asar..

Madhav takes the shortcut through jungle to reach there..he slides intentionally through rocks in jungle.
BG- Main dil ka raaz kehta hoon..
ke jab jab saanse leta hoon..
Tera hi naam leta hoon..
Ye tune kya kiya..

Takshika tries to come near to manu..But manu tricks her and she falls..this gets maya angered more..and her clan steps towards Manu..Manu stand with much difficulty grabs mud from ground in her fist,chants some mantaras and throws it towards all of them..They start screaming..when she elopes from there.
She was thirsty,starving and had less energy even to walk..she was getting drowsy,Her sight was getting blur..But she was trying hard to move on..the heavy rains was helping her to be hydrated.
Maya and clan after recovering doesn't find manu before her and shouts in anger..She orders to search her..

Madhav reaches to the place where he has left manu in morning but doesn't find her..he starts searching for her taking her name..It was already night and in dark jungle it was getting even harder to find manu..He keeps shouting for her "Manu?? Manu..??"
His tears were flowing from his eyes,and dissloves in rain water.He was much worried coz he wasn't even sure if his manu was here or not..He was wandering here and there..
When he finds some broken bangles and earings..he bends to check it and identifies it to be manu's...His body got shivered with his worst fear..
He again shouts Manu??

Manu who was here trying hard to escape and keep herself safe,listens to madhav's voice this time calling for her..A blissful smile prevails on her face and she mutters "Madhav"
But she was so weak after all injuries and starving whole day that she tried but her voice wasn't enough to get into madhav's ears..She starts crying and tries to move in voice direction..falling,standing,slipping,dragging herself forward..

Madhav was loosing his patience..he was trying hard to find manu but was failing..He was having fear of loosing her,His heart beat was beating faster than ever...He was pleading and begging to god..just to make him meet her once.He falls on ground shattered cover his face with palm and sobs.. "Ohh..Manu.."
Right Then he hears loud splashing of water..like if something have dropped in water..He gets attentive..
Manu who was walking had slipped and fallen in some pound..She screams..She wasn't able to push her upward..
Madhav runs towards the direction and maya and clan also moves to the same direction after hearing..
Manu had hold a stem of tree to keep herself safe from drowning..She was shouting for help..But maya and takshika reaches there and seeing her in that state starts laughing..

MAYA- Manasvini..see clearly..your end is now near..even your god is not helping you this time(laughs)
She gathers her power..manu keeps pleading..No..Noo...plzzz..Manu prays to mata rani to save her..
Maya breaks the stem of tree which manu was holding and manu falls back in water..she starts screaming and drowning..
But just then Madhav comes and shouts "MANU.." and jumps into water..
Maya gets boggled.. "Yuvraaj madhav" She closes her fist in anger.
She shouts..Yuvraj ye aap kya kar rahe hai..us devrakshika ke lie apni jaan kyu khatre me daal rahe hai..Mar jane dijiye use..
Madhav struggles in water and brings manu out..He pats her on face to wake up.. But manu was not in a state to respond..he checks her pulse and was relieved to feel it still running.
Takshika was about to harm them but maya stops her.."No not now,we can't hurt yuvraaj"

Madhav looks at maya angrily.."Praise your fate,that my priority is manu now or i would have not spared you today.."
He lifts manu in arms and maya fumes in jealousy..He then speaks "Its not that easy to separate me and manu..She is my everything and if any one dares to hurt her i will kill them..what you have done today to manu..soon you will have to pay for it maya..its a promise of madhav" He leaves from there angrily concerned for manu..


MADHAV comes out on road..he was staring all while to manu's face and tears was flowing continuously from his eyes..It was still raining..so he places her on road..Takes off his jacket and covers manu with it..He sees injuries of manu and cries in pain..He again checks her breathe but it was getting low..he worries and tries to push out water pressing her stomach..Manu spells out some water...madhav pats her face.. "Manu?? Manu.. Open your eyes manu...see you are safe..nothing will happen to you..I am here na..plzz open your eyes..He again checks her pulse and it was also getting down..He panics..In a mid of road away from village..how to help her..
MADHAV- Manu..no..plzz open your eyes manu..plzz..He gives her CPR.. he rubs her hands and foot..but there was no development.. He then thinks something..and wipes his tears..He takes a deep breathe and looks towards her..He closes his fist..and again takes his hand towards her but was hesitant to touch her..He again looks to the other side..closes his eyes composes himself and moves ahead to her...
He bends towards her face..stops... gulps his dried throat..then keeps his lips on her lips to give a Mouth-to-mouth breathe..
BG- Jane kaun hai tu meri..
mai na jaanu ye magar..
Jahaan jaun mai karoon mai waha
Tera hi jikar..

Kaho to kisse marzi loon..
Kaho to kisko arzi doon..
Hasta ab thoda farzi hu..
Ye tune kya kiya..

Mai dil ka raaz kehta hu ki jab jab saanse leta hoon,
tera hi naam leta hoon..Tera hi naam leta hoon..
Ye tune kya kia..

Manu chockes out..and a blissful smile spreads over madhav's face..
He says " manu??"
After a second manu opens her eyes slightly..and tries to see madhav from her blurred sight "Madhav.." (she mutters)
Ishq ki sazishein..
Ishq ki Baaziyan..
Haara main..khel ke..
Do dilon.. ka jua..!!
madhav gets tears in pleasure but steals glances from her..Manu again closes her eyes and gets unconscious..
Madhav lifts her in his arms and moves towards Village..



PS- YEAH... UPDATED..
PLZZ READ AND LET ME KNOW YOUR VIEWS THRU COMMENTS..
I tried..but don't know if succeeded in pleasing you all😕😳 Forgive me for any mistakes😒
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Posted: 9 years ago
yay me first 🥳
lagta hai ki finally app khush ho gayi mahima breking news sunke 🤗
tabhi toh update kia aapne ammu didi
aise updates hi toh hame madhvini ke bina zinda rakhte hain akh land mein
hugs and kisses bhejna hai aapko btw happy holi 😉
abhi update aur jaldi karna hoga apko warna hum forum wasi abhi virtual hunger strick karenke😆
update asap


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DLSR

yay me first🥳
lagta hai ki finally app khush ho gayi mahima breking news sunke 🤗
tabhi toh update kia aapne ammu didi
aise updates hi toh hame madhvini ke bina zinda rakhte hain akh land mein
hugs and kisses bhejna hai aapko btw happy holi 😉
abhi update aur jaldi karna hoga apko warna hum forum wasi abhi virtual hunger strick karenke😆
update asap






Happy Holi to you too dear 🤗
Yeah was little free to socha update kar hi du 😊
No need to go on hunger strike 😆 will update for sure when get time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
ammu literally what have u wrote i literally began to imagine as if i was watching MadhVini for a second i even forget tht i was reading the way u conveyed the pain of madhav when he realised that his manu was missing god literally it was heart touching and maya ki toh anyway loved reading it yaar ammu u have done an amazing job btw ammu imagine if their we such scenes between them on the show😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyrose

ammu literally what have u wrote i literally began to imagine as if i was watching MadhVini for a second i even forget tht i was reading the way u conveyed the pain of madhav when he realised that his manu was missing god literally it was heart touching and maya ki toh anyway loved reading it yaar ammu u have done an amazing job btw ammu imagine if their we such scenes between them on the show😉


Thanks rose😊
Was bored and had free time so updated..🥱
CV's never gave such scenes yaar..🤔 they were too busy in directing navel romance.. They forgot that people may have loved to watch these scenes too..and for these they never had to use sexy scenes and it would have been easy for teens to shoot such scenes..😳 Spoiled the entire chemistry,connection & romance.. Bloody idiots.. Don't actually knew how to use the talents.. bas stupidity dikhana hai😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
A we some too good waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu92


Thanks rose😊
Was bored and had free time so updated..🥱
CV's never gave such scenes yaar..🤔 they were too busy in directing navel romance.. They forgot that people may have loved to watch these scenes too..and for these they never had to use sexy scenes and it would have been easy for teens to shoot such scenes..😳 Spoiled the entire chemistry,connection & romance.. Bloody idiots.. Don't actually knew how to use the talents.. bas stupidity dikhana hai😡


true yaar

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