*Forever only Mine* Last part on pg16 dt 17. 06.19 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Back with new story..
Prologue seems totally diifernt..y mahek is crying and where is shaurya..

Pls continue soon dear.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hlo buddy's sorry for late update 😉
Here is my first chapter hope you guys like it
Feel free to point out mistakes 😉
Pls read n give your valuable feedbacks

Mamma where is dad mamma her daughter shook her arm repeatedly,
soon baby soon said she ran towards her room n locked the door, she leaned against the door n fell on her knees n covered her face with her palms, why shourya why? Why you cheated me, you told me that you loves me with whole heartily then why why?
How can I forget you shourya, you are my life, I then now n forever but may be you forgot me, but I never ever shourya, never,
No Mehak you can't , remember he cheated on you , so how can you loves him, her mind tolds her, she is struggling between her mind n heart, haa may be he moved on, her heart ached thinking like this but she has to live for her bundle of joy her princess a small smile crept on her lips but again she starts sobbing thinking about shourya his love his passion n never ending love talks, she leaned against door n thinks her past her love of life shourya how they met that night very first time...


Flash back :

"Mehak nothing will happen breath in breath out " she is blabbering herself, "hey Maharani pls help me", she preyed her God continuesly.
She is a bubbly girl cute innocent n so beautiful, her curves n her entire structure absolutely perfect any men can fall for her easily, she wants to stands in her feet, doesn't want to depend on her parents, her father very proud of her courage n always supporting in every way but she is one stubborn girl if she wants anything she gets that on herself.
Now she is in train sitting near the window seat n blabbering herself she never traveled alone, she is a MBA student n wants to a big Sheff her friend lives in Bombay, she reached Bombay station after getting down Mehak dialled her bestie Sonal's number to pic her up from station but she didn't lift her calls, Mehak tried so many times but no veil, hey Matharani now how can I reach her home I don't even have her adress, suddenly her phone beeped her face fell down once she read the message "Sorry Mehak I won't come to pick you up because in last moment I have to rush to meeting with my boss pls Mehak try to understand OK I will text you my address pls go home n take rest I will come home asap, sorry meri jan ".
Mehak sighed n took a cab, in middle her cabs bracks failed, sorry mam it will take time to repair, said driver.
oh god it's already 9p.m hey matharani send one auto pls pls. She starts walking on main road after reaching some distance some road side guys started following her, oh god now this stupids boys, she panicked and starts running n reached near beautifully decorated garden, she somehow managed to go inside, she saw her back n those boys stood near the gate, she ran from there n hide herself near the table her throat dried, she slowly raised her hand n hold one one glass, her face lit up seeing water in few seconds she drank nearly 5 to six glasses, "why this water tastes different but nice n see this glass also very small now I want more " said she stood up n starts drinking 2 glasses again her head starts spinning


suddenly a loud music starts n that song is her favourite one " ankh mare oh ladka ankh mare" she throws all glasses on ground a waiter came n try to stop her in between one pair of eyes follows her every move when she stands on the table n stumbled he ran towards her before falling on ground, he holds her tightly, their faces meet inches gap, she slowly opens her eye lashes and meet his eyes, he can't blink his eyes seeing her beautiful eyes, she hold his hands n dragged him on the stage n starts dancing with him, first he hesitated but when she circles her hand around his neck n pulls him towards her, that's it his patients went n hold her waist tightly and starts dancing with her,
"Shourya" his friend Rajiv shouts from behind , "He never give shit any girl but today what happened to him mumbled Rajiv" but shourya is in no mood to listen . MINE he whispered in her ears, n buried his head in crook of her neck, she felt good in his arms but suddenly she pushed him n ran from there towards main gate he followed her but no sign of her, where are you Angle, he scratch his neck and saw everywhere, when he turns back to go inside two arms holds him from back, pls save me pls holding her hands he turned around and saw his Angle. Angle he whispered, pls help me those gu guys she pointed towards four boys standing near them, shourya gritted his teeth n hide her his behind,
Hey Man leave her, today she is our meal now go otherwise...
Otherwise what? Shourya shouted, then starts fight finally they all ran from there, whebhe turns back n see his angle on ground collapsed.
Next morning she wakes up holding her heavy head, she lays on soft bed n her body covering with soft blanket, she slowly sats on bed when the room door open, Good Morning Angle

That's it guys
Now tell me how is the chapter

Thank you all my beautiful friends
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much for the update
So mehek thought shaurya cheated her and now they are not together..and she is remembering their first meet...
Nice start dear... eagerly waiting for next chapter
Thanks for the pm...please continue soon
Edited by friendlyghost08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good start dear Anu. Shaurya fell for Mehak in the first moment itself and start to call her Angel... Continue soon dear thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and update😊
When I read the prologue i that it's a cute ones i meant Shaurya is late because of business purpose but here the situation is totally different. Reading the update Shaurya liked her very first moment of their meet then why he abandoned her and baby. Baby asking about his papa so sure she seen other babies with their mother and father right.
Interesting chapter will wait for the 2nd update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Love at first sight suna hai ...lagtha hai yahan shaurya aur mehak ke beech love at first dance hogaya tha...😆...mehak seems to be pretty strong women ...she ended up in a party and got drunk accidentally...and then hero's entry ..who already is impressed seeing her...after saving her from the roadside goons ...he helped her settle down...
Let's see whether mehak remembers all this stuff next morning or not...

If shaurya fell for her this soon...how come he cheated her ?

Great update ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww.. finally update aa gaya yahaan pai..
Loved it Anu di...
Thanks a lot for the update🤗
Shaurie kyoon cheater nikla??😲
Already it is filled with suspense and can't wait long to read the next shot.
Please do continue soon. Thanks for the PM too.😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u Anu for the first shot😛
So beautiful shot written by u .. Loved it. ..👏
But it is still a mystery that y mehrya parted. . Cant see the lil one crying cz of her papa
Mehrya first meet was so beautiful...pehle hi mulakaat me talli mehek and dance like anything😆😉😉
Loved their love at first site moment for shaurya specially...cz mehek was under influence of alcohol. Eagerly waiting to know what happens next 😉
Please continue soon n thanks for the PM😛
Edited by AD04 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

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Thank you so much for the update
So mehek thought shaurya cheated her and now they are not together..and she is remembering their first meet...
Nice start dear... eagerly waiting for next chapter
Thanks for the pm...please continue soon

hi Lima thank you so much for reading 😛
Yah that is a bad day for their life when she learnt the truth 😲

I will update soon dear

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