*Forever only Mine* Last part on pg16 dt 17. 06.19

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hlo Hlo my cute naughty friends🤗

I want to write one short story 😳

if you all OK with my DS 😆

Here is prologue :

"Mommy I won't talk to you "

Said four years little Jia to her Mom.

Why my cutie pie angry on me, hu bolo

Mehak asked her daughter holding her cute face in her palms.

You know all my friends father's came yesterday to parents meet but you were busy at your work n papa ...she starts sobbing, every year you told that he was definitely come but instead of him dadu attended all meetings, she cried holding her mom.

Her eyes welled up seeing her daughters plight

sorry so sorry my baby she hugged her tightly...

So tell me is this prologue interesting or not 😆

Part one on pg 2

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Part two on page 3

/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/5080996/forever-only-mine-last-part-on-pg16-dt-17-06-19?pn=3

Part 3: page 8

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Part 4: page 11

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Part 5: page 13

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Last part : pg 16

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congratulations anu for your new story..
Here mehek is mother of 4 year old...what about jia's father..want to know
Go ahead..
Waiting for the first part...continue soon

The title reminding me of a film called" forever my girl" which i have watched recently


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Anu something interesting cooking up here... continue soon congratulations on your new ff
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wooow ..Our cutie is back with story😛
Theur is no chance that we will.say NO to it😉
Prologue is interesting😛
Please do continue😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Di 😡
I want to read more work on it and give us a fast update 😭😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mumma Mehak and her cute baby conversation about their workaholic dad looks so cute😳

Eagerly Waiting for chapter 1⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hearty congratulations for your new story Anu di...👏🤗
Am so happy...🥳
The prologue us interesting as well as intriguing...👏⭐️
Can't wait to read what's in store for us...
Please do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice prologue Anu.
So little cutie is missing her daddy . Where is Mr. Daddy 😡 😡 ???
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much for liking this prologue
Lima Arthi Haseena kamali Jen shinu Nandu
🤗
I will update soon cutie pies
n pls silent readers pls hit button if you want first chapter 😉
n my Pboss I want your comment also 😕
Edited by Anuteja10 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hmm mehak is mom here..that's new coming from you anu...
Continue ...soon...

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