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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Diva200
Thank you for the pm
Lovely update
Sk has to deal with the press while MK is in labour.
She does question him that he not really a chef ..
So how did she work it out after all pls update soon

Hi Diva

@ bold: actually the press involvement took place six months prior... remember the story is told in flashbacks with anything in bold happening in the present. As to her questioning whether he really is a chef, it is the culmination of every of everything that has happened in their past, as well as his total take charge attitude now that she is in labor, that has Mehek suspecting that he was never as he portrayed...sorry for the confusion, I thought I had been a little clearer this time😕😆.

At any rate, thank you for taking the time to read and leave your fb😛

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Nandu0123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#172

Nice update di continue soon 😃

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cindy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#173

Great chapter. please update soon.

P.S Hope you are enjoy your holiday😛

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jhankarbeats87

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Posted: 7 years ago

#174

Hi Kelly,

Hope u'r having a wonderful holiday. Another awesome update, especially the last part. The only thing that came to my mind after reading it was ...Shaurya...Busted! 🤣 Now he'as going to have a very hard time explaining who he is. 😆

Felt very bad for Dr. Sareen and Vihaan. But I guess they could eventually go for other procedures or adoption. Science has advanced a lot these days.

Would be waiting for your update eagerly!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Nandu0123
Nice update di continue soon 😃

Thank you Nandu, glad you enjoyed it😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40
Great chapter. please update soon.
P.S Hope you are enjoy your holiday😛

Thank you Cindy...am working on the other right now, so look for that update first😉.

Holiday is great, last few days have been busy, but I am enjoying it😛

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Mishtilove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#177

Unres my fb kelly di on the updated pg.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Misthilove
Thank u di.
Res...Hmm...im second ...koi baat nhi😆
Unres...another amazing update kelly di.😃 U wrote so nicely😳.but i felt bad for sareena.😭
Thank u for the pm😃.update soon.😊
i ws abt to ask for update but before that u have send me the pm😆

Thank you Misthi, I am glad that I managed to get the update posted ahead of your request😆.

Like SK mentioned everything happens for a reason. In this case I think that Sareena's presence was even more pivotal than originally thought. Aside from her medical expertise, hers and Vihaan's personal experience certainly allowed Mehek to look on her condition from a different perspective, which probably no-one else could have accomplished. I hope you enjoy the story as it continues.

Thx for the comment😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#179

** NOTE**

Three days and only six likes later😕, I find myself at an impasse with this story, as it seems that it may not be what the majority wish to read. Beyond the ebb and flow that comes with one's readers' reaction, I suspect that this particular tale is not resonating here, as per the waning responses...

Considering suspending this one for a while, or perhaps disseminating it by other means to those who have expressed the interest.

What do you think?

Kelly

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Maya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: crtkelly

** NOTE**

Three days and only six likes later😕, I find myself at an impasse with this story, as it seems that it may not be what the majority wish to read. Beyond the ebb and flow that comes with one's readers' reaction, I suspect that this particular tale is not resonating here, as per the waning responses...

Considering suspending this one for a while, or perhaps disseminating it by other means to those who have expressed the interest.

What do you think?

Kelly

😭 No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me didn't get to read it yet insane week but I love this story please don't take it away 😭