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cindy

@cvdmerwe40

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

please do not stop this story 😭

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Mishtilove

@Mishtilove

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: crtkelly
** NOTE**

Three days and only six likes later😕, I find myself at an impasse with this story, as it seems that it may not be what the majority wish to read. Beyond the ebb and flow that comes with one's readers' reaction, I suspect that this particular tale is not resonating here, as per the waning responses...

Considering suspending this one for a while, or perhaps disseminating it by other means to those who have expressed the interest.

What do you think?

Kelly

Kelly di,whatever you wrote is incredibly beautiful👏👏

i love the story di,plz dont suspend the story😭

i think ur readers are little busy,but they love ur stories di😃

plz continue n complete the story😃

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jhankarbeats87

@jhankarbeats87

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Kelly, why why why? 😲 Do continue yaar. Else I'll request the Panda team to take out their demonstration here 😈

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Shristi

@shristi0706

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Hey Kelly I m sure I m one of those readers on ur list that you expected to read n comment and haven't done either of tht... Extremely sorry!!!

I do come to the forum but I don't get much time to read n comment n at times, I read updates but either don't get time to comment or completely forget abt it!!

My sincere apologies to you... N yes although I kept a track of this story, I remember tht I failed to give my feedback for the last two chapters... I assure you tht I love you n all ur stories (my favorite being Mrs Khanna's fast) so please don't stop updating ur stories. I ll post my comment for this one the next week... Pinky promise!!!

Love u n lots of hugs n kisses to you!!!!!

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Lovely update Kelly.

Mehek has questions. ..let's see how SK handles them.

Thanks for the pm

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: bworm
Lovely update Kelly.
Mehek has questions. ..let's see how SK handles them.

Thanks for the pm

Thank you for the read and taking the time to comment😊

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Finally read the chapter...i thoght once i will be free i will spend my whole day reading the updTes but my phone ditched me again..

As usual great updte kelly ...felt bad for sareena , MS still didnt got her memory ?? wonder from where tht question popped in her head in the labour room 😆

Please continue the story...dont think of abandoning it 😲

thank you for PM

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Finally read the chapter...i thoght once i will be free i will spend my whole day reading the updTes but my phone ditched me again..
As usual great updte kelly ...felt bad for sareena , MS still didnt got her memory ?? wonder from where tht question popped in her head in the labour room 😆

Please continue the story...dont think of abandoning it 😲

thank you for PM

Thank you Shamz, glad you got the chance to read at last.

Sareena's case seems to be touching everyone but the instance served a purpose which was to jumpstart MS into looking at this pregnancy in a different light. As to her continued memory loss it still exists, for reasons that shall be revealed ,but who knows what will pop in her head as nature takes its course😆 ...and it is not as if SK is keeping up his side of things...his natural take charge attitude is in full force now he is little by little revealing the truth himself.

Still making my mind up about the story...if anything it would hopefully be better than the serial now😆

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Shristi

@shristi0706

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Apologies apologies n only apologies!!!!

Am I only one who equally falls for the second couple as much as the lead one?? Like Malik n Mel n DTM n now Sareena n Vihaan. Still let me assure n myself too tht I will always look Mehrya

Mehak is in the labor room n she questions Shaurya whether he really is a chef or not n poor soul has no answer to her question. Will he tell her the truth n if he dies, he ll have to b really careful with his words.

Mehak hasn't regained her memory yet so I m sure tht you have explained something here.

Thank you for the update Kelly n extremely sorry!! I know the disappointment a writer feels!!!

Lots of hugs and kisses!!! Merry Christmas!!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Did Shaurya forget he is acting before Mehak as a chef 😆 How did he say he is Shaurya Khanna speaking to Dr Arora? 🤣

Mehak now knows the truth he was lying to her all these months 😒

Thnx for PM Kelly

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