Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 14

So you were right...you were talking about prologue ..what a way to start the Chapter tibu...⭐️

reading ur prologue i discover u r magical with words.

Originally posted by: Vedika211

Tibs, I'm not sure what you do in real life and where you are located, but would you please move to Mumbai and start writing tv shows? Pretty please?!

The reason I'm saying that is because this beginning has enough drama to blow most shows out of the water. Yet its not senseless drama, it is not put in there for the mere purpose of being dramatic, and it is totally true to the characters that the show started with.

Of course Mehak would think this was some giant con too, and of course he is not going to let her go. How well you've used all the random elements they threw at us - such as the transfer of property - and turned them into essential points to bring the story where it is today.

Again, you took what they showed - that KK knows who she is while she doesn't - and used that to create a killer last line that will leave us anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Please update soon. I want to see what fire and rain, hell and high water, these two will go through before they can come together again.

As always, thanks for writing😊

Ha ha Vedika need to sell to the whole family the move to Mumbai ...
They anyways think I am pretty batty ... satkeli item :..,investing so much on a show...
Aah well mate but I cherish your word one day may be 😉
Yes I was pretty sure of this Shaurya ... yes he need his Mehak around him .. he can take her hatred .. specially when he knows he deserves it but he cannot bear to let her go .. his being selfish has its own advantages 😛

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">@tibs, you have given my wordless imaginations, endeavouring for manifestations, a proper medium... Thank you...</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">At the moment, I can only write this.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">If this is, then what type of end is this!!! The urn of nectar has been shattered, surrendered to death!!! The dark shadows of the past have compelled love, as precious and exquisite as it has been, to apparently loose it's glory in ignominy in disgrace!!</font>

Chandrima I am
Amazed from where you find these beautiful so apt quotes ...Tagore indeed is a treasure trove

Originally posted by: shristi0706

I m glad u decided to write something on the current track thts been shown in the show. During the Agra trip, when Shaurya didn't reveal his true identity to Mehak, I was damn sure tht the CVs were planning a future track of separation between them with the intent of rekindling their online friendship.

Coming to this story, I agree with Vedika.. Gal u should move to Mumbai n start looking out for a job in the creative field. Like we all know by now tht the makers n creatives of ZKM do stalk our forum n read our posts, the day wouldn't be far when one of the creatives would approach u for writing their story.

I know tht in the last para u tried to portray Shaurya still having evil intentions n not regretting the grief he had caused her n her family but I also know tht no sort of explanation would make her forgive him.

I know tht there is still a lot of mystery revolving around her parent's accident n tht Shaurya isn't the real culprit.. Let's see what happens next in the show!!

Thank u so much for the PM yaar!!!

Ha Ha. ... Shristi I will wait for the CVs to approach me till then I am happy writing for my fellow forum wasis 😉
Yes Shaurya is trying to internalise and react only as he can

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">@tibs, WORD. All one needs to do is to take the plunge, i.e. learn the language😉..</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">Actually I wanted to write this yesterday only, but I couldn't...</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">For Mahek it is like the ashes of lies have enveloped the weary fire of truth. She wonders how long will this deceit, this game be played along!! What is slated to get finished, let it finish gracefully, smoothly; so that the exquisite beauty of it may persist in dreams fancies. The novelty of it must not be disgraced.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">For Shaurya, he has to embark upon a new journey, in which he has to travel all alone. There will be darkness in the eyes, but rays of light will be upon his soul. In tears of sorrow, in silence of the core, new words will be bloomed in his heart, disguised.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">Okay, this is solely w.r.t. your FF...</font>

Thank you Chandrima for specifying that this is only in respect to my FF
I am honoured 😛

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

Tibs, as always I am bowled over with how you think!

This is unchartered waters for all here - our ZKM creators,
writers like you and viewers/readers like us 😊.
There is a gamut of emotions this unearths - There is the love of improbable
proportions needed to overcome something as ground shattering as this. And then
there is guilt, anger, forgiveness all again in implausible proportions. What
lovely possibilities the story has! Just needs the story teller to do so with
sensitivity and maturity that these emotions deserve and the viewers/readers to
look beyond their convictions and emotions and be open to the story that is
being woven! While I have absolutely no hope from ZKM here, I have complete
faith in you 😊! Much looking forward to the story you are about to tell...

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I love how true you are to Showrya ! You didn't make him take
the much predictable path of walking away. That is not him! He is a fighter, he
fights for what is rightfully his, snatching it if need be - Mehek in this
case. He is also a man so profoundly in love that his very fundamentals are
altered without him being aware. He can no longer crush her (like he did during
RB debacle) voluntarily. He is owning up to his actions by letting her file the
FIR and is trying to give her that bit of solace that he can. What contradictions and conflicting emotions is Showrya Khanna! I don't know if you will give him a redemption
here. Although, I cannot see one if he really was the reason, but as I have said above, will remain open to
where you take us with this...😊

There are so many other elements that you have done so well -
her emotions at finding out who he is, his confusion at what could have happened, a very believable story line where she assumes the worst of him, an apt title that says how all things lying low have erupted again, and most of all - KK who we all look for to fix things that Showrya breaks...😊

<p>I think in days to come, we will all lean on this to make sense of what ZKM
is serving us...👏

Diya as always thank you for your detailed comment here.
It is very motivating and inspiring as a writer when you are appreciated and your writing is thoroughly vetted . I am trying very hard to write a story that all
Of us who have come to love this show (inspite of our better judgement) can relate with . I am
So done with the merciless Butchering of the ML's character
Frankly speaking I am nervous about this .. writing on intense subjects is something I have never done ( I have written very little anyways ) I like lighter , fun stuff if you will , but I am
So terrified of what they are going to dish out to us ... that I better attempt
My own version.

Hi Thibs,

Originally posted by: stellaV

"Words can be like X-rays if you use them properly -- they'll go through anything. You read and you're pierced."
Aldous Huxley

Tibs, i don't know what to say. A big thanks to you for deciding to write yet another lovely FF. Your writings are addictive and as the quote above says, your words and narrative pierces the soul in a way that we no longer feel as a separate entity, we are part of this world that you have woven. I loved it, as much as I have loved each and every piece written by you.

Mehak, feeling broken, and this rain, needs to fall with full force for once, not for others, but for herself, as it has become too heavy to allow her to move forward. Naivety on people's part when they are mistaken to assume her to be evaporated in the rage of fire or lost in the force of wind...

But she will come down, with all the power. How strange, and what a beauty, again she can never get exhausted even after falling so fiercely. No vessel, no space is enough to contain her, to contain so much of the love.

Shaurya, withdrawing his true self and creating the facade of a bad boy again. But approaching her through KK, giving her a space.

I apologize for my blabberings.

Already craving for more. Please do update next part soon. Thanks again and a big hug🤗

"It rains
And rains
And rains.
But there is a sky above the rain,
Nothing can rot the sky.
Earth has turned to mud. What of it?
The heart of the planet is made of fire, of ardent sun.
-Visar Zhiti

Thanks Vaishali I too needed to be very sure .. the vague outline has been on mind since three weeks. Let us see how this shapes up

BTW I need to raid your collection of books