Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09

Part -5 Sky
They all said it was accomplished ... destined to be positioned over everybody else ...
To tower above them all ..to be spread all over ...its expanse wide ..its reach unlimited and yet be unreachable ..no minion could ever touch it ...
They did not know the truth ...
The truth was ..It was cursed ...cursed to be separated for ever, from those it loved ... to never be able to reach out and touch ...
Once it had tried ..it had tried to come down to share its love ..its accomplishments ..it had bowed down for those it loved ..and then greedy hands had tried to grab it ..to soil it with their materialistic lust ..
It knew it could never go back to that world ... because that was not how it was supposed to be ...the cosmic balance lay in it being away ...
It let it fell...its tears
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The earth below rejoiced ...the rain was on it way...


@bold heart touching lines Tibs... simple yet full of emotions😭
Loved reading all the elements... would definitely want to see them together in an epilogue ..how they effect to each other if possible...


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Posted: 8 years ago

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@bold heart touching lines Tibs... simple yet full of emotions😭
Loved reading all the elements... would definitely want to see them together in an epilogue ..how they effect to each other if possible...



Aww thanks Babez ... let me see what can I do 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

The fifth element sky ...


The vast of alll with no ends and bounds ...
The main source for the wind and rain ...
Which helps the mother earth nuture its beings ...
The far away element which can't be reached and possessed or yielded
..just can be admired with its positive and negative shades ( day & night )

You just did an fabulous work with all these elements tibs ..


Glad u updated so quickly ...



For cuming up with Tomorrow's promise...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
On the fourth element...
Di
The earth is so hopeful...u can say it has no other option to choose..we have to consider it too... It had options which would give an easy way to relief but would bring disastrous results...this is why patience is the noblest virtue... Sabar ka phal hamesha meetha hota hain...patience varies from people to people...it tests them on their virtues..some it takes lifelong..some it just considers a second...on the basis of factors which makes a life...sky doesn't respond to earth at first just waiting and watching what does the earth seems to do...but at last it has to resond as its axresponsible factor again in carving out the marvels of life...it holds a place that no one else can ever take...so the earth is hopeful...hopeful to have taken the right decision hopeful to be waiting for the better...

Thanks again di...
Thanks for gifting us these...
Thanks for the pm..

Appu
Edited by Geekyglasses22 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
On the fifth element...
Sky:the endless sea of nothing...only emptiness...if u ask me...it was done for good..emptiness has so vast a perspective which has no meaning..so it could not occupy a place between us...it was there to guard us...it is only there to make us think of it as our protector...so afraid of its vastness...its emptiness of nothing that we are just unable to realise that it misses us too...we are afraid and its there repenting on the fact that it cannot even express to us that theres nothing to worry about..or be afraid about...it has compromised just to protect us and keep us happy...its just the overdose of loneliness when it showers..its the tears saying that look up once i m still here...just notice me once...try to include me in you all...though i m far away...but at least give it a try...

Loved it di...i completely lived it and loved it..
Realization can bring us to something which we have never given a thought about..
This is tge thing about learning and thinking and expressing we all crave for..

Thank u for giving us these..i m grateful abd thankful to u di..
That u could experience this..yess di experience..this reading was no less than a live experience of a different perspective...
Thanks for the pm..😊

..
Appu

Edited by Geekyglasses22 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

On the fourth element...

Di
The earth is so hopeful...u can say it has no other option to choose..we have to consider it too... It had options which would give an easy way to relief but would bring disastrous results...this is why patience is the noblest virtue... Sabar ka phal hamesha meetha hota hain...patience varies from people to people...it tests them on their virtues..some it takes lifelong..some it just considers a second...on the basis of factors which makes a life...sky doesn't respond to earth at first just waiting and watching what does the earth seems to do...but at last it has to resond as its axresponsible factor again in carving out the marvels of life...it holds a place that no one else can ever take...so the earth is hopeful...hopeful to have taken the right decision hopeful to be waiting for the better...

Thanks again di...
Thanks for gifting us these...
Thanks for the pm..

Appu


Appu Babez I am amazed at your maturity...
You always manage to add another dimension to what Inthink
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome writing tibs.👍🏼 ⭐️You did cover five elements of life, the Panchabhutas. I had goosebumps when I re-read all your posts. Salute ur writing skills which keeps us fixated and leaves us wanting for more. Take a bow friend.👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara

Awesome writing tibs.👍🏼 ⭐️You did cover five elements of life, the Panchabhutas. I had goosebumps when I re-read all your posts. Salute ur writing skills which keeps us fixated and leaves us wanting for more. Take a bow friend.👏👏


Aww thank you so much Sneha is 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

On the fifth element...

Sky:the endless sea of nothing...only emptiness...if u ask me...it was done for good..emptiness has so vast a perspective which has no meaning..so it could not occupy a place between us...it was there to guard us...it is only there to make us think of it as our protector...so afraid of its vastness...its emptiness of nothing that we are just unable to realise that it misses us too...we are afraid and its there repenting on the fact that it cannot even express to us that theres nothing to worry about..or be afraid about...it has compromised just to protect us and keep us happy...its just the overdose of loneliness when it showers..its the tears saying that look up once i m still here...just notice me once...try to include me in you all...though i m far away...but at least give it a try...

Loved it di...i completely lived it and loved it..
Realization can bring us to something which we have never given a thought about..
This is tge thing about learning and thinking and expressing we all crave for..

Thank u for giving us these..i m grateful abd thankful to u di..
That u could experience this..yess di experience..this reading was no less than a live experience of a different perspective...
Thanks for the pm..😊

..
Appu



Thanks Hon .. yes that is exactly the essence of what I was trying to showcase here .. you explained it even more beautifully
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Posted: 8 years ago

I am speechless tibs! Whatever I have to say seems paltry and ineffectual. It is not just your words, I am amazed at how you think! I saw fire, wind and rain and didn't see earth and sky coming! (Duh!!!)...just absolutely beautiful!

This is so rich, so full of possibilities that it almost feels like you are doing an injustice to the piece by rooting them in characters of ZKM. I hope at some point, you let them loose and give them another shape and mold into a story of your own. I would still like to read that too! 😊

How apt and heart touching is that description of mother and son as Earth and Sky! Earth who has always known the potential of her son has let him grow to fulfill all those and much more. She has nurtured his determination, his absolute resolve to grow beyond what people think he is capable of and prove his mettle. She has also protected and shielded him from those forces that could break his will or spirit and become an obstacle in this course he has set for himself. And what sacrifices she must have made, how much brunt of people she must have taken and how absolutely alone she must have been!

And now that he has reached a height that was unimaginable for all but her, his passion is even more powerful, his strength of will even stronger and he is now beyond her reach! She cannot offer him the comfort he needs. She realizes that and also that it is only rain that can give him the much needed solace. She is not begrudging rain for this, but is just a grateful mother! What a tribute to Mother-son relation!

And what you write about Sky is so beautiful! Vast, above all and unreachable. How lonely is that! You have said well, the inability of mere mortals to understand the vastness and depth of sky, to only want to reach out and touch and claw at it. And how that one thing the sky needs, companionship is unattainable for it! Sky looks at the struggles of Earth with fire and wind and offers comfort the only way it can - send its sole companion rain, to her. And now it has to wait...wait for earth, fire and wind to each take what it needs from rain and send her back to sky!

I can't help but see Fire, Wind and Sky as different faces of Showrya!

  • Fire as the all passion, determination, rage that Showrya is. And both Earth and rain working in their own ways to help rising or reigning in this force!


  • The willful, playful, wind that lets one forget everything and soar to great heights with it. It could be gentle, sensual or give into its restlessness and just take flight. We have seen all this in Showrya, the charming Showrya who has both Karuna and Mehak wrapped around his little finger, the irresistible sensual Showrya. He needs Karuna to be his nurturer and Mehak to be his love. I like him as wind the most. He takes from them as much as the fire does. But, he also makes it so much more fulfilling and rewarding for them.


  • The distant, all-encompassing sky. Sky is a passive element, it allows all other elements to play and is an enabler for these elements. It's true self - its selflessness, its understanding, its compassion, its intelligence, its depth of character is all hidden behind fire and wind. The sky knows that if it gives into finding that contentment it yearns, it will extinguish the passion the fire burns with and will clip the wings of wind. How selfless is it that it stays away hidden to allow these two to flourish! To me, this is the true Showrya. The one who took the rage and willfulness of fire and wind, turned it into perseverance and resolve needed to accomplish everything he has. While the world sees the other two faces of him, it is Karuna and Mehak who have been able to peel the layers to his core and see him as he truly is!

Karuna is the very foundation that supports Showrya, without which his survival itself is questionable. And Mehek, with the fluidity of water flows through seamlessly, taking various forms and shapes as needed by Showrya , thus giving him the much needed balance.

Drawing from the Pancha boothas, what a marvelous piece you have created! Kudos! 👏👏

I do hope you connect the dots for us and give us your interpretation!


Edited by DiyaKash - 8 years ago

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