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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4 - Earth

She looked up at sky , with a helplessness and a wordless plea like she always had, over the passage of time ..or was it eternity, but these days it refused to meet her .
They say if you go very far ...right to the edge of the canvas ..in the distant horizon , till the end of time , the sky comes down to meet the Earth .
The sadness and fear weighed her down , the sky was breaking its promise , it never kept its word these days .
It was still shrouded behind darkness . Hiding itself behind that blanket of numb feelings ...it refused to meet her eyes.
She needed help... she had in her bosom held myriad secrets ...to shield , to protect , to nurture ..
She had let the fire burn , scorch her...but like a mother with a biting toddler in her lap , she had embraced the hurt , to let the fire know ..it had a home ... it was safe , and loved inspite of all its flaws.
She had borne every scar , hidden every burn , smiled through every pain ..to contain the fire ...
so what she had not gone through the pain of giving it birth ..she had long compensated for it ...
She was blamed for the fire these days ..they said she was not strong enough to contain it , to make it fall in line ...
They said she should have just opened up and swallowed the fire , extinguishing it forever ...they were fools they did not understand that would have burned everything
They did not know what strength it took to look beyond those thrashing limbs of rage ...to see the core of fear,and to reach out to it ... to let it continue to scorch it and yet embrace it for its own and others protection..
She kept it all hidden , the molten lava of love , of hatred, of emotions and secrets long past , because if it ever erupted, it will scatter nothing but ashes ...charring everything around it , sniffing out life itself ...
The fire was no match for the volcano hidden deep inside her ...she was going to safeguard them all ..maintain the shell of calmness ...so that the world could go on
She looked up at the sky again ...it again refused to meet her eye ...but she could smell it...yes she could smell it ...
The rain was on its way .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: tibs09

Part 4 - Earth

She looked up at sky , with a helplessness and a wordless plea like she always had, over the passage of time ..or was it eternity, but these days it refused to meet her .
They say if you go very far ...right to the edge of the canvas ..in the distant horizon , till the end of time , the sky comes down to meet the Earth .
The sadness and fear weighed her down , the sky was breaking its promise , it never kept its word these days .
It was still shrouded behind darkness . Hiding itself behind that blanket of numb feelings ...it refused to meet her eyes.
She needed help... she had in her bosom held myriad secrets ...to shield , to protect , to nurture ..
She had let the fire burn , scorch her...but like a mother with a biting toddler in her lap , she had embraced the hurt , to let the fire know ..it had a home ... it was safe , and loved inspite of all its flaws.
She had borne every scar , hidden every burn , smiled through every pain ..to contain the fire ...
so what she had not gone through the pain of giving it birth ..she had long compensated for it .
..
She was blamed for the fire these days ..they said she was not strong enough to contain it , to make it fall in line ...
They said she should have just opened up and swallowed the fire , extinguishing it forever ...they were fools they did not understand that would have burned everything
They did not know what strength it took to look beyond those thrashing limbs of rage ...to see the core of fear,and to reach out to it ... to let it continue to scorch it and yet embrace it for its own and others protection..
She kept it all hidden , the molten lava of love , of hatred, of emotions and secrets long past , because if it ever erupted, it will scatter nothing but ashes ...charring everything around it , sniffing out life itself ...
The fire was no match for the volcano hidden deep inside her ...she was going to safeguard them all ..maintain the shell of calmness ...so that the world could go on
She looked up at the sky again ...it again refused to meet her eye ...but she could smell it...yes she could smell it ...
The rain was on its way .



Wow! I am speechless after reading this... Amazing the 4th element (Karuna). You are a brilliant writer. This is so so very well written i read it thrice and will read it again. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay the mother earth ...the fourth element of all ...

Karuna maa's situation was explained here ...
The part we're the earth bears molten lava , not just fire ...was just bang on tibs ...
It does not just tries to control the fire ...
The mother earth also nurtures the people live in it with air , water and food ...👏


Very well written tibs ..you did an





Edited by -Thabassum- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ddrocks




Wow! I amspeechless after reading this... Amazing the 4th element (Karuna). You are a brilliant writer. This is so so very well written i read it thrice and will read it again.🤗


Thanks Dhwani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Important element earth was required and it can be none other than. Karuna...👍🏼
Hats of for your thinking and coming up with such posts to connect the characters with nature...I don't think even cv's are aware about this ...

We have few talented Writers in our forum including you...well written tibs ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Important element earth was required and it can be none other than. Karuna...👍🏼

Hats of for your thinking and coming up with such posts to connect the characters with nature...I don't think even cv's are aware about this ...

We have few talented Writers in our forum including you...well written tibs ...


Aww ... thanks Shamz 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part -5 Sky
They all said it was accomplished ... destined to be positioned over everybody else ...
To tower above them all ..to be spread all over ...its expanse wide ..its reach unlimited and yet be unreachable ..no minion could ever touch it ...
They did not know the truth ...
The truth was ..It was cursed ...cursed to be separated for ever, from those it loved ... to never be able to reach out and touch ...
Once it had tried ..it had tried to come down to share its love ..its accomplishments ..it had bowed down for those it loved ..and then greedy hands had tried to grab it ..to soil it with their materialistic lust ..
It knew it could never go back to that world ... because that was not how it was supposed to be ...the cosmic balance lay in it being away ...
It let them fall..its tears ...
The earth below rejoiced ...the rain was on it way...
Edited by tibs09 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Author's Note

so this was it ...let me know if you want them to be woven together ...all the 5 elements ... 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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We believe that human body is made up of the 5 elements, viz. Skhitij, Apas, Agni, Maarut, Prithwi, and post death the same body panch tatwa mein hi vileen ho jaati hai. So, there must be an epilogue which will symbolically represent this eternal cycle.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">We believe that human body is made up of the 5 elements, viz. Skhiti, Apas, Agni, Marut, Akash, and post death the same body panch tatwa mein hi vileen ho jaati hai. So, there must be an epilogue which will symbolically represents this eternal cycle.</font>



aah chandrima ...epilogue ,,,bahut difficult hai ...I will have to write the whole story in between ...

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