Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 39

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Oops I fell behind in my review because for some reason I thought part b would be posted immediately and i would do one review on ch8 in its entirety😕. Sorry Shristi.

Okay 8a:

Wow SK is in a quandry. I love his distraction . It is the perfect method to display how greatly he affected he is over Mehek. Great minds thinking alike as i used the same avenue in my latest ch too😉 but here the man is so lost that he blatantly ignores and loses a client😲, really unlike the shrewed businessman we all know. And then too boot he stays to suffer observing Mehek's interaction, and then jumping to the teaser, is lamenting in the difference in the way Mehek treated her coworker vs him...

Someone seems to be living his own private hell and it serves him so right that is all I can say. He is getting exactly what he deserves. Anxious for 8b Shristi. And of course thanks for the pm

Kelly

Originally posted by: chandrima02

@Srishti, somehow I have missed to comment on your flashback episode. Apologies for that girl. I instantly knew it from the teaser itself that it's FB time 😉. But what a miss from my end!!

Okay, now coming to the current chapter. Paving way for his realization!! Distraction, uneasiness, jealousy are the baby steps for it, huh!!! What is that big dhamaaka which would clear the clouds of arrogance, cunningness, over-confidence & misconception of "I have my revenge, so done with her for good"!!! Waiting for his bouts of extreme insecurities or should I say pagalpanti. Please do make him yearn for her like hell & her ignoring him like anything. You can continue with that even after he successfully breaks her marriage in the present, which I trust he would do by saam-daam-dand-bhed.

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Shaurya baby showing his cut on his finger so that she might pamper him...so much jealousy kahin Kunal ko terminate na kar de insecure hoke...

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Your welcum sweeto...you writers put so much effort ...tho

Cumnts be cheering hona chaiyeh...😉

Esp wen I know how I threaten u 😆

Dhamki bhi pyaar jaisa lagta hai ..tho...

Agey se aisey hi pyaar barsaa thi rahungi 😆

Yup wen I reads story I definitely feel connected...every ff writer of this forum is doing a great job...👏...

Keep rocking babes😉

Originally posted by: melissaR

Shristi! 8A was wonderful!!! I always like Kunal!!! Thank you so much for making him a sweetheart and saying those things to her. Shaurya listening to it was the best smirk* 😈 I am sorry she's engaged to Ajay. Kunal is the only one I can see with her other than Shaurya. For once! I actually didn't mind that 😳 Shristi you gave me my wish... Kunal couldn't be with her but he has her as a good friend. Thank you!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Polo_s

oh dear...plz update next part.

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Hey Shristi! The Teaser has been up for a long time and we are waiting. SAUr kitna tease karogi yaar, abhi to update de do...😉