Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Shri ROK usyy...Pagaal haath na kaat le...😆
Mama isn't giving her a lollipop...Poor baby..😛
He wants her attention now at any cost..
Mahek is strong till now. ...But ISS Saar phiry ka Kuch bharosa nahi...

Awesome update Shri...Just loved it. But itna chota SA
Tara's khaoo masoom bachon par 😕

Thank u Sham😳😳 Chota sa😆😆😆??? I thought the update was too long thts why I divided it into two parts...Well once i start writing i just do not know when to put a fullstop to a chapter😆

He's thrown the knife now so he isnt going to do anything stupid n besides Shuarie loves himself too much to do anything tht ll hurt him...Self-obsessed!!!

Also, I have noticed tht in the show he has injured himself so many times...kabhi forehead pe chot,burnt his hand once in the SHarma house, etc. n the list is endless...poor soul keeps on getting hurt!!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: MomoShivi_Fan
shristi thanks yaar for the lovely SS... please continue soon... loving it yaar. :)

Thank u Ammu😳😳😳

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Shaurya ka behave dekh ke mujhe hasi arahi hai...he is asking like a small child will u hurt if I cut finger with this knife...emotionally blackmailing...Mehek is controlling herself not to melt to his puppy face & childlike antics...

Nice update & Thanks for PM

Vinu

Thank u Vinu😳 With his puppy face n cute looks, even Mehak couldnt resist herself from smiling n feeling sorry for him!!! Well thts the effect of our handsome Shaurya Khanna👏👏👏

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: KashishJ
Mehek not melting👏 & ignoring him, awesome reply to his tactics. Go girl 👍🏼
Nice update shristi

Thank u Kashish😳 Glad tht u liked it...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: melissaR
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Shaurya being a kid is so

I pity him. The saying so true! Only when you lose something is then you realize its true worth. Shaurya she could have been all yours. Mahek I really wish you don't get married to Ajay. I'm not saying this because Shaurya finally woke up and smelt the coffee. I am saying this because you deserve way better than Ajay!! Shaurya I love you but I don't trust you. You're probably starting to realize your fake love was actual love all the time. Or! You're just upset that nothing is going the way you want it. Mr Perfect has to get everything his own way!

Geez I was so studying to ramble I completely forgot to thank you Shristi for the update. Good one 👍🏼 So Shaurya is not faking this time?

@bold Well Mel too good...like i said before, he is a confused soul. He himself doesnt know what he wants. It frustrates him to see Mehak moving on in her life so fast. Not used to losing you see...Hope fully, he is not faking this time but the question is will Mehak give him a chance???

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: melissaR

Wait? You have another story about Mehrya that has a Karan in it? What is it? You know I just realize the Kunal thing now that you mentioned it 😆 Kunal Vohra! 😳 😆

Awww Kunal sounds so selfless 😳 I love him already 😆 that's my problem I love too easily 🤣but he's a sweetheart no doubt I hope? Shristi...I am eagerly waiting to see how the story transpire on the wedding day itself. Shaurya is adamant. He hates losing! Me too...i'm a sore loser 😆 but he's not one to give up with out getting dirty .

@bold My first Mehrya story "When will you confess Mr. Khadoos Kumar?"

I had never written stories before but I couldnt stop myself from writing a story on this lovely couple!!!!

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#407

Thank you for updating before any demand shri..

Cuming to the update ...it was really

Shaurya cudnt digest the fact mahek was moving on from his traits...

The way he went to confront her , reading that part just made me

You deserve it shaurya ...now u wud know how it is burn in you own hell

Burn baby burn 😈

Mehak is doing a great job by ignoring him ...IN a right way so a thumps up for her good job...

Thank u for taking the suggestion and using it shri ...you are cute ...

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Can't wait to know , what is our akhdu khanna gonna do next seeing this ignoring mehak

Do try to conti soon shri ⭐️...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Thank you for updating before any demand shri..
Cuming to the update ...it was really

Shaurya cudnt digest the fact mahek was moving on from his traits...
The way he went to confront her , reading that part just made me

You deserve it shaurya ...now u wud know how it is burn in you own hell

Burn baby burn 😈
Mehak is doing a great job by ignoring him ...IN a right way so a thumps up for her good job...

Thank u for taking the suggestion and using it shri ...you are cute ......

Can't wait to know , what is our akhdu khanna gonna do next seeing this ignoring mehak

Do try to conti soon shri ⭐️...

Thabs thank u so much dear!!!! Ur comments are awesome.In fact, tumhare comments main itne colors n variations hote hai jitne mere story mein nahi hote...Love them😳

@bold Aww thank you for calling me cute..n thank u for suggesting yaar...I guess it was apt for Mehak to use tht line for Shaurie...

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sb1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#409

This was so good !!! I really had fun reading this :)

Shaurya is behaving like such a baby - too cute to see him like that. And Mehak well done girl .. be as indifferent to him as you can !!!

Waiting for the next part :)

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: sb1234
This was so good !!! I really had fun reading this :)

Shaurya is behaving like such a baby - too cute to see him like that. And Mehak well done girl .. be as indifferent to him as you can !!!

Waiting for the next part :)

Thank u so much gal😳 yes he is indeed behaving like a child who feels the need to b pampered.