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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
amazing update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
superb

Thanks alot for reading n commenting pinky!!!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: richasharma0991
It was good update soon

Thanks alot dear

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Awesome Shristi, I just love it.
SK is losing it big time: what an idiot😆.

Mehek handling him well, he will surely break before she does.

Cannot wait for the next update.

Thanks alot Kelly... Yes mehak definitely knows how to handle someone like Shaurya n shaurya is hvg a tough time understanding her changed attitude. Maybe coz he is so used to getting attention from everyone n it passes him off big time when he doesn't get it!!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#244

Shrishti awesome part loved it please continue... :) :) [/QUOTE

Thanks Anam!!!!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: melissaR
Hmm pay back is a b**ch. Shaurya every time you try hurting her you end up on the receiving end. What justice! What's his problem? He wanted her to come running when his hand was bleeding? I really wish it had a hero guy to save her from Ajay and Shaurya. Shristi... this can be exciting. This is the only time i don't mind seeing our mehrya not together. This Shaurya I hate him. Disgusting. Shristi on a serious note a hero guy friend can come in the picture to bring some sanity in her life. Poor girl is going to marry Ajay and has to deal with the devil himself.

Hey Mel thank u so much much for liking the update!!! Trust me the shaurya in this SS is nt so bad... There are ego issues with him but he is someone who hs suffered alot in the past where he has always met people who have used him n back stabbed him just like how it is shown in our show.

I m trying to keep him as humane as possible probably in the upcoming chapters I ll try to show tht side too...

As far as Ajay is concerned, we all know what an MCP he is but let's see WHT mehak decides to do with him...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

@ bold...😆
For once even I cud not stop laughing ..reading that line..
I really wished to see this shaurya in our show...but sigh he turned out to be an recipe chor ...merae samaj ke bhyara hai !!!

@ shrishti ...wats the courtship shaurya was thinking about ??? 😕

Courtship period is after he proposed her with the ring n the period when they kept their affair hidden from her family n the hotel staff...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: zaara2212
oh god.. how much more can Shaurya irritate Mehek.. but i loved it that Mehek kept her cool and also Alok is so supportive.. however Shaurya is really pushing his limits...
Mehek did feel bad when Sahurya hurt his hand, but then I am glad she did not do anything but walked off.. how can Shaurya be so cruel 😡

Oh tell me abt it.. somehow the blue always suits SK 😉😳

Thanks zaara well he is trying everything to irritate her n in this process he himself is getting irritated!!!

Her walking off was necessary to show shaurya tht it didn't bother her to see him in pain.

And yes shaurya looks so handsome in tht blue suit... N even in the show he is mostly given clothes in various shades of blue.. Love him

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Polo_s
awesome update...
when will u update next?

Thank u dear... Ll update the teaser next week

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#249

Beautiful update, good going Mahek, giving tit for tat
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Thanks alot Sonia

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Woow that's like a gud phaan gurl 😉😆 * pats on shoulder * 😆
Bdw can I give a suggestion ???
In ur story ...mehak keeps telling to herself " ignore him "
Mehak uses similiar lines I show ..wen they go to Agra ..." Kuththe ki dumm , apna khoon mat jala mehak " 😆
Y don't u use tat in update ...??? Wud be comic 😳

Thanks thabs... Sounds interesting ll try to use it in my next update buddy...

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