MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 24

There is nothing better to know that you have enjoyed it so much. I was such a big fan of their online friendship that I really wanted to give a story where it is front and center a go. I will be working on the next update soon, as to keep the momentum going, and will definitely PM you when it is ready.

Definitely a bit of a green tinge for Shaurya in this chapter Sharlene, right at a time when he looks to be at least acknowledging that he could be at fault for what happened in ISC. Hopefully he realizes the error of his ways and takes responsibility for his misdeeds.

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Finally something worthwhile regarding the show...I was feeling really upset that the show had lost it essence and what drew me to it... but your story just made my day... at least I can enjoy Mehek the way it should have been through your writing. Thank you Kelly.

I'm glad you have found some joy in my story, Jani, The show does feel completely different from what it was, but I live in hope that perhaps once Mehek leaves SK house, that things will get back to some semblance of what we enjoyed... at least .I pray it does😕

In the meantime, I will be writing on what I miss on the serial, and like you, just enjoy the imaginative renderings of my fellow FF on the forum.

Originally posted by: zaara2212

wonderful update ... is KK jealous abt MS having to work with a male 😛
and SK anyway is acting crazy he does not want mehek to be a part of the show

I expect that this crazy producer who was to increase the drama quotient of ICS has made Shaurya realize the monster he has created with his reckless behavior in season 1 of his show. And right in the middle of this to learn that his MS had made a friend who has made such an impression on her...he has to be out of sorts😆😆

Thank you for commenting. I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses.

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Their online chat is always love to read, Mehek knows who is KK but Shaurya still unaware of MS. It's nice to see jealousy Shaurya, he is warning her to be careful. He is guilty for his behaviour towards Mehek.

Nice update Kelly & Thanks for PM

Vinu

Hi Vinu...I adored and miss their online chats so much. What I would give for it to be reintroduced.😕 Mehek definitely has the upper hand her as she is aware of his identity, but as you can see even she is wary if what she is doing is right.

On the other hand Shaurya looks to be on his way to realizing his mistake,. If that isn't enough to torment him, this new friend of MS surely has him out of sorts.

Glad you enjoyed, I will certainly pm when the next update is ready.

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Very well written chapter Kelly... Waiting for next update 😊

Thanks Sham...aiming to be a good FF writer and have it up sooner than later. No more procrastinating for me😆

Thanks Pinky,

I have started the next update, so hope to post sooner rather than later.

Originally posted by: melissaR

What a way to open Shaurya eyes Rajiv. That Uday is so disgusting! Rajiv i had the same reaaction as you. Kelly when will Shaurya find out Mahek is MS? I wonder if he will hunt her down?

Well done for Rajiv,I say, and yes Uday is a wretched man. It will be sooner than not that Shaurya discovers what he needs to, and really, Mel, do you not know the answer to that question already😉?

thanks for commenting...working on the next update now.