MehRya FF: Fated to Love You *PART-5* Page 29 up! (20/12/16)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Oops posted in error.

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nicky13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Hi Pree ... First of all get well soon sweetie... Second thing thanks that you updated it apni sickness Ke baad bhi ... Third it was really very big one... Forth update is awesome... So he got to know about Mehak... Haye-2 am scared now ... Kahin woh Mehak ko galat Na samjh le... Please god aisa kuchh Na ho ... Poor Mehak she doesn't know anything about it and she trusts KK blindly... I really hope he won't get her wrong... Precap- hmmm he is going to meet her in a park ... I really hope Dil se sochega Shaurya Dimag se nahi and will give back Mehak her job ... Thanks for the PM sweet... Take rest and proper medicines... Last but not the least... Love you so much... Get well soon...

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Wow I liked it long part... 👍🏼

Shaurya & his rants... In his semi conscious also he won't forget his status he wants to go in sedan... & to city hospital...

He is claiming her my Meera & he is trying to find out her identity in his kitchen... 🤗

Arrghh this man finally came to know real identity of MS...!!!

What will be his next step ... Will he consider Mehek his girl ? will he fall for her?...!!!🥳

Is Mehek will join his restaurant...!!!

Waiting for next part

Update soon & thanks for PM dear!!!

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Awesome story, read all chapters in one go.

The concept of your story made me remember ArHi ff masterclass. Its so nice to read something like that again.

Finally, he has find out the true identity of MS and what he have been through for that. The fainting scene, sonal lash on KK and the journey to the hospital was funny.

Story is going awesome

Looking forward to read more.

Update next chapter soon.

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

wow

amazing update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

superb

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_Saavi_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Hi!!
Firstly get well soon and good luck in your exams!
Second i just started following this forum and i am so happy that you have a ff for this show. Wonderful updates. I love how well you write out the emotions and the characters. I would say continue soon but first get well and finish your exams then come back with a BIG ROCKING update! 😊 😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: crtkelly
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Unreserved...

Priya, first off I hope you feel better soon.

Thank you for your PM, it came in the midst of a hellish day in the office for me, and I immediately took a break so that I could read this much awaited update.

Mehek is an gem, and it's high time that Shaurya discovers this. That being said I loved the real elements one would expect in such a situation: Sonal's absolute defense of her friend ( which was hilarious to boot) and Rajiv's sensible talk to Shaurya. I even appreciated the skepticism that Shaurya had wondering about Mehek's sincerity in this whole situation, once he realizes that the thorn in his side is also his special confidant.

I cannot wait for the next update, I expect a little graciousness on our Shaurya's part when they, met however I cannot anticipate Mehek reaction when she discovers her KK is none other than her nemesis, and am most excited for this revelation to unfold.

Update when you are able, but more importantly take care of your health.

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Hi Priya, I am Kaustavi...actually I had read this story from start but hadn't commented, sorry for that..

I so love your way of writing...you have written the online conversation so well...just love reading your updates..

Loved how for Shaurya, his online buddy became too important, for her, he even brought back one employee...he even started enjoying rain..but that became too much for him..( he became ill for first time?..)..and loved how for Mehak, KK, her online buddy became her punching bag, how she shared all her problems with him and even started pouring all her angers of Shaurya to KK..

And Shaurya, instead of being angry, loved knowing about himself from her..

And now, in the new part, loved how Shaurya's naani saw his talks and he being embarrassed...Mehak helped Shaurya to hospital and that Shaurya, he didn't want auto😆, wanted city hospital...in that state...

And finally the awaited...Shaurya came to know Mehak's identity...⭐️...wonder what will he do now?..

Thanks for this wonderful story...love it so much...and sorry for responding late..

Ps: Hope you get better soon dear..and best of luck for your exams

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Waida1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Hi...Pree...!

Hope you're feeling better now...! For me...you're born to write and you can go very far in this particular domain...! Never under-estimate this god gifted talent of yours...! I'm not penning down these words to praise or impress you because you're my friend...but, doing it because you really deserve it...! If ever I happen to read something which isn't to my liking...I'll criticize it...!

I know how time consuming it is to write and make all of us happy...! If you writers can give 99% of your times in making us happy...we readers, can at least make the remaining 1% of the effort to praise or criticize your writings...!

I've already said this to Kash...and I'm telling this to you...and this also goes for Kelly...! As long as you'll write and entertain me...I'll always be here to encourage you with my comments @ positive or even negative feedbacks...! 😊

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Hi, long time,how are you?

I read through ur FF and loved it!!! Beautifully written, plz keep updating (of course after ur exams).

Will be waiting for it!