MehRya FF: Fated to Love You *PART-5* Page 29 up! (20/12/16)

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christasr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Awesome dear and get well soon all the best for your exams

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Waida1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Omg...! Pree...what a blockbuster part 4...! This chapter is just incredible...even more outstanding than the previous ones...(though...all your updates are awesome, but this one has this unique touch that somehow makes it exceptional)...!

While reading this chapter...it feels like I'm watching all these scenes on my screen...! You have the talent of penning down every scenes so perfectly...taking into consideration every little details and characteristic of all your characters...whether it's Nanz, Rajiv, or Sonal...! You're a born script writer...! Hats off to you girl...! 👏

Nanz already has her little doubt...Shaurya has caught the virus "Loveria"...! It has affected his brain badly and making him talk to himself...! Poor Shaurya is fighting with both his mind and heart...but, still clueless of which disease he is suffering...!

A big applaud to Rajiv Sir...for giving some moral lectures on humanity to arrogant Shaurya Khanna...!

Sonal...what a fun loving character...! Everyone must have a friend like her...! She'll always be present for Mehek...! She is no dramebaaz...she is sincere, straightforward and direct in speech...specially when dealing with people like Shaurya...!

So...the first time Shaurya Khanna tries to enjoy the rain and behave like a normal human being...he ends up in a hospital bed...! Instead of being a hard and hot metal iron...he turns out to be a cube of ice who melted in the rain...!

Lol...the "Samoosa Galli" scene was the best...! From Shaurya semi-conscious state...tightly holding onto Mehek for support, Sonal wrath, Mehek concern, rickshaw trip...and in between Shaurya expressing his disapproval even in his hypnotic condition...were just mind-blowing and hilarious...! 😆

Woww...the most awaited revelation scene was similar to a nuclear bomb which has just exploded in Shaurya room...! He was clean bowled...! Pree...you have written this scene like a pro...and as always, the online chats parts are all a delight to read...! ⭐️

P.S: Precap looks even more interesting...! I know it'll be another box office hit...! Though...I'm impatient to read the next chapter...I want you to take complete rest, and update only when you recover completely...! Take care and get well soon...! And thanks for this beautiful moment..! Love you sweetheart...! 🤗

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Priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: christasr
Awesome dear and get well soon all the best for your exams

thank u so much dear!! 🤗

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Waida1234
Omg...! Pree...what a blockbuster part 4...! This chapter is just incredible...even more outstanding than the previous ones...(though...all your updates are awesome, but this one has this unique touch that somehow makes it exceptional)...!

While reading this chapter...it feels like I'm watching all these scenes on my screen...! You have the talent of penning down every scenes so perfectly...taking into consideration every little details and characteristic of all your characters...whether it's Nanz, Rajiv, or Sonal...! You're a born script writer...! Hats off to you girl...! 👏

Nanz already has her little doubt...Shaurya has caught the virus "Loveria"...! It has affected his brain badly and making him talk to himself...! Poor Shaurya is fighting with both his mind and heart...but, still clueless of which disease he is suffering...!

A big applaud to Rajiv Sir...for giving some moral lectures on humanity to arrogant Shaurya Khanna...!

Sonal...what a fun loving character...! Everyone must have a friend like her...! She'll always be present for Mehek...! She is no dramebaaz...she is sincere, straightforward and direct in speech...specially when dealing with people like Shaurya...!

So...the first time Shaurya Khanna tries to enjoy the rain and behave like a normal human being...he ends up in a hospital bed...! Instead of being a hard and hot metal iron...he turns out to be a cube of ice who melted in the rain...!

Lol...the "Samoosa Galli" scene was the best...! From Shaurya semi-conscious state...tightly holding onto Mehek for support, Sonal wrath, Mehek concern, rickshaw trip...and in between Shaurya expressing his disapproval even in his hypnotic condition...were just mind-blowing and hilarious...! 😆

Woww...the most awaited revelation scene was similar to a nuclear bomb which has just exploded in Shaurya room...! He was clean bowled...! Pree...you have written this scene like a pro...and as always, the online chats parts are all a delight to read...! ⭐️

P.S: Precap looks even more interesting...! I know it'll be another box office hit...! Though...I'm impatient to read the next chapter...I want you to take complete rest, and update only when you recover completely...! Take care and get well soon...! And thanks for this beautiful moment..! Love you sweetheart...! 🤗

Waida... my sweetie...🤗 I missed u yar!!

Aww now I dunno if I'm a born script writer... that's a huge compliment for me. but surely dear ur kind words and sweet feedbacks make my day. I love writing fiction. fanfiction as well. And it's reviews like these which keep the writer going. Not many can take time and give such a detailed encouraging feedback. I'm glad I have u dear! thank u so much🤗

your words inspire me to write more...😃

seriously all u guys r so sweet... n it's ur feedback that keeps me going... warna, I'm a lazy writer, going by the wind.. haha... :P

thnx again sweetie... Yes... I'm taking meds... I'll be fine soon... bt the saddest part is to study... esp when u have a runny nose n itchy eyes... haha..

n abt nxt part! yeah... shaurya will be talking to mehek asking her to come back... n he'll soon reveal he's KK... plot is in mind. lets see if it wil come out good😳

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dimaag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Get well soon dear 😃 and many many thanks for this wonderful update. And don't worry about its length. I was fully compensated for the waiting. I'm a new member to this forum. I like the online chatting of Mehrya. I have read all the other three updates of yours dear 😛.
Well I really liked the way shaurya has identified his Meera at last. Now I'm super excited about what he is gonnado with mehak 😕 .
Please add me to your list of pms dear 😊